rate_review Reviews

The story does a fine job of showing the difficult process of Elrohir's phys and and psychological healing. I enjoy the close and supportative triad relationship between the Twins and Legolas. The modern lingo by Celebrian in talking about Elrohir springing them from the jail felt somewhat out of place when I read it. Please update soon.

I feel sorry for Elrohir.He still hasn't come to terms(if only a little)about what happened to him.It's a good thing that Legolas is still there at his side despite his own problems with Elladan.

this fic has to be one of my favourites at the moment, i love it. you write really well and i like that there are loads of different piarings going on at once, it makes it more interesting. legolas and elladan are so damn cute togetherssibssibly my favourite pairing in the story. i think it would be really good it you developed their story a bit, maybe have elladan hit legolas again but this time with no justifiable reason - oh god, im a horrible horrible person aren't i, bad katie, bad katie - i dunno, it just seems like it would be an interesting develpoment, and could be written really well. neways, just an idea.

one thing that did concern me is that you had at the top elrohir/haldir. but what about bell? he's so cute and inse, an, and haldir's a BITCH. but i trust your judgement :) as long as they all end up happy im ok with it.

cant wait for the next update

katie_k

Wonderful story, though I do feel sad for Elrohir, I looking forward in getting Haldir in the picture soon. The description of Legolas and Elrohir is beautiful. My favorite elf is Elrohir and Elrond, and I have always seen Elrohir as the most gentle elf besides Legolas. Cant wait for mchapchapters and later more stories, good job.

So Elrohir thinks he is damaged goods and Bell thinks he is too staid for such a gorgeous elf. Those two definitely need to be together.
Well I am glad that they are all on their way home and things will get better health wise.
Now we just need to talk about Haldir. Things look a little sticky from that direction. Has Haldir never met the twins before? Or Arwen has never visited her grandparents yet? We need to know a little about his problem here. I am sure you will tell us soon. giggle

No wonder Haldir hates the Peredhil.I feel sorry for what happened to his parents but that's in the past.

He lives!But the worse is yet to come.He might be alive but what about the after effects?KUDOS!!!

Love your story.Hope you will finish it.

Iw thw they would all be OK. Thank goodness.
I enjoyed the fact that Thranduil takes every opportunity to pick a fight with everyone in sight. At least Elrond gives as good as he gets.
Now they just need to rest and we need to find out what Celebrian is up to in her healing. giggle

*falls to floor with Elladan and Legolas* Nooo! You can't stop there! I need More! More! I say. Did it work? Did it go terribly worong? What happened? I hope you update soon.