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i pop out chapies like a pez out of a pez dispenser? that's a first. lol.. thanks.. more will be coming soon

You do know, don't you, that Orlando went through something very like this in real life? If you don't (and what fan doesn't), a year or two before filming LOTR he fell off a 3rd story balcony and broke a lot of bones in his back, and that at first the doctors told him he'd never walk again? And that he was walking within t wee weeks of the accident?

Which doesn't mean the events in your story couldn't have happened, but the real-life events you've left out would make a HUGE difference in how his friends responded. They'd be all "He beat paralysis once, he can do it again" or "What a tragedy, he escaped life in a wheelchair once and now this happens". It makes a big difference.

Also, I won't go into the details of the medical inaccuracies in this story, I will only say that there are a lot of medical inaccuracies. I beg you to do more research in future stories.

Aww,

Poor baby Orli-bear. I like this. Although, it would help a little if each time a new character spoke, you could start a new paragraph. Just a tip. The story itself is very good gh. gh. I'm very eagerly awaiting how Orlando's going to deal with this once he's had a chance to take it all in. It's a scarey thought, to wake up paralized. No thank you! I think you did his reaction well.

And the sticky sticky, hot hot was good too. I know what you mean though. I was blushing my first slash love scene too. I kept stopping to giggle lol! It was great.... and the love scene wasn't even that explicit. Plus I hadn't planned on having it, but it just kinda came out. Now it's nothing.

I like the flashbacks at the start of each chapter. OH! The fart joke.... HA! I'm such a sucker for those and that was so funny because it came out of left field lol! Can't wait for more. ^_^

~lydia~

oh poor orli u got finish the story sob sniff

Wow... you're good. In more ways thae. Ne. Not only are you a good writer, but you pop out chappies like pez out of z dez despenser! Go you! This chappie was great! Poor Orli! That reaction seems so... real. Poor Viggo for having to deal with it! Come on, more!
Rutaari

very good!! i like it alot....keep up the good work...i can't wait to find out what happens next and where you're taking the plot.......

~willow

I have a few therapeutic horses as well. That's where i got most of my inspiration from... the horses. You'll see in future chapters if Orlando decides to go along with therapeutic riding. He may or he may not. It depends on how the outcome of the story goes. There will be more mentioning of horses though. I can't write a story if a horse isn't included in it. Lol... Thanks for reviewing again Rutaari, lol... much appreciated. Muahz