rate_review Reviews

WOW! I just stumbled onto this fic, and might I say, I aldy ldy love it! You have some very creative ideas, and I'm already certain I know where this story is headed, but that might just be because I'm a fellow author. You've done very well on this so far, and I must say that I'm quite eager for more. Do hurry and update soone ne?! Namaarie!

~Celesta Hellewise Harman

Brilliant as ever! Keep up the good work.

I like this a lot!! Heehee! I know who Carter is!! *giggles* I want Leggy to look at my Derriear! ;) Just one thing...if you us the 'I/me' thing, please continue it in that one person using it...like from Rachel's POV for the entire chapter? You know? Well that's it....other wise I really like it a lot it has major potentioal! ;) Keep it up, and keep me posted please!
Elizabeth Bloom-Greenleaf-Turner

Hey im glad you like our story... if your wondering wcartcarter looks like i based his appearance and personality off of Cole hauser when he played in 2 fast 2 furious as Carter.

OMG! More asap! What happened between Rachel and 'Carter'? lol...
I have a hunch on who he is...or was or well ypou get it....OMG I wanna'
piLegoLegolas' behind sooo bad! I love this! More Please! Elizabeth Bloom

This is brilliant. Please go on. I haven't read a good story for ages. I've been kind of addicted to parodies and such, but this is greaat please continue.

Off to a very interesting start, can't wait to see where you take this story.