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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I told you i'd review!
oh i love this story
you should write it forever so it doesn't end
haha
thats what i always want
rusted-faith needs to get these chapters up!
oh i love it
one critique is that you make a few mistakes in the usage of 'too' as in a lot, ya know?
it's just a typo but i'm picky
yeah, that's it for
LO
LOVE THE STORY
bye,
ash
oh i love this story
you should write it forever so it doesn't end
haha
thats what i always want
rusted-faith needs to get these chapters up!
oh i love it
one critique is that you make a few mistakes in the usage of 'too' as in a lot, ya know?
it's just a typo but i'm picky
yeah, that's it for
LO
LOVE THE STORY
bye,
ash
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more more more!!!!!!
please?
please?
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More more more! It's a lovely story!
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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
me likes! i hate guys like that carter asswipe and it'd be really cool to see legolas kick his ass, rly.rly. and then haldir needs to take a shower with shannon, perhaps ending up on those green silk sheets, heehee.
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey....great story so far...it's really cute....Please write more, i want to fin out what happens next!!!!
love, ash
love, ash
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I defintitely like this story and can't wait for more chapters! (Like tomorrow...hint, hint, sleep you can do without if it means more chapters up sooner)
Thanks!
Thanks!
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, would anyone mind if I bought a be-be gun and shot Carter??? * looks in the crowd for pll who mind * Okkies! Good! I'll go get one! *runs to pown shop and buys one....comes back taps Carter on the shoulder and the screen goes black, but you hearhear loud gun shots* MUAHAHAHA!! I WIN!! I WIN!! ;) Please Write more soon...b4 I do it again! ;)
Elizabeth Bloom-Greenleaf-Turner
Elizabeth Bloom-Greenleaf-Turner
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January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story and I know you'll haegolegolas save Rachel if Carter tries anything without her consent. The banter between Haldir and Shannon is extremely funny. And Carter is such a jerk. But I keep wondering why HAldir has a sense of DejaVu when he meets Carter.
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January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't know about Shannon's neck, but I'd like to wring Carter's. Jerk. Anyway, great story! Keep writing. I think the feud can last a little bit longer. *evil smile*
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January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I soooo like your story! Plz write some more!