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for An Ocean of Trees

by Tilara

schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This has been an excellantly constructed story, the only thing I could see were the occassinal typo's and double typed words in the same part of a sentance, other than that it was well written and I can't wait for the next chapter. Please mail me the next chapter once done.
person Brittany
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I'm glad you finally updated, but i'm ready to see the rest of the story and anxious to know what happens to our favorite elves and their ladies! Can't wait to read the rest!
person Brittany
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and have been waiting for awhile for updates, so i'm glad to hear you'll be updating sooner, i can't wait to find out what happens!
person Nienna
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Dear Tilara,

I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading your story. I am at the same time saddened by the lack of the ending chapters. I must read the ending. Not to be to forward, but could you email me with any developments you have concerning this art work. I would most appreciate it. If not it is okay. I wish you luck with any future masterpieces.


Keep up the good work,

Nienna
person MarzBar
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yikes!! Haldir and Legolas don't understand about guns! The beautiful elves are in serious danger, Rachel is dumber than dirt and you left it there. That's a mean cliffhanger and hope you are going to give us more soon.
person sesshouchick
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story plot it's original and I am real curious about this carter fellow he sounds like the evil prince so what's the connection between the two and why are Legolas and Haldir so familiar to Drake and Carter? I want to know what this mystrey is about. Please Update soon
person belldandy_mel
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!!! :) Thank you!!!!!! *hug*
person Lady Fae
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please have some sexual interation in the next chapter! Please?!
person anarane
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story so what's taking so long......
WRITE!
person Ashley
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just read the latest couple of chatpers, i really like what's happening with the story, connecting it to the past and having all these emtions, it's great!
the elves seem to be uncommonly caught off gaurd and clumsy though
i was hoping you could maybe say something like...i dunno
in a different world their senses are dulled?
something taht would explain for it
because otherwise it seems completely out of character
tha my my only advice, otherwise, you guys are doing great
and thanks for emailing me to tell me about new chapters!
can't wait to see what happens!
bye,
your fan,
ashley