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Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
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1,838
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5
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Beautiful
Title: Beautiful
Author: Alakadarion
Pairing: Elrohir/Haldir , implied Elrohir/Orophin, Elladan/Legolas, Elladan/Rumil.
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Elrohir gets seduced.
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters used in this story, JRR Tolkien does.
Authors note: I got this idea from one quote in a movie, it was frightight Club and I can’t say what the quote was, that will give the plot (if you can call it that) away. This whole story evolves around this one quote.
Warnings: Not a happy ending, slash (male/male sex)
Feedback: !!Feedback!!
##...## is Haldir’s thoughts.
//...// is Elrohir’s thoughts.
Beautiful
Haldir always thought he had the perfect life. That is until he met the Peredhil twins. One in particular, Elrohir.
He seemed to have gotten his mothers beauty and his fathers intelligence. He has everything, a family that love him, a brother that *really* cared for Yes Yes Haldir has brothers, and yes they cared for him, but not the way Elladan and Elrohir cared for each other. Haldirs brothers had more of a passion for hunting and keeping watch. That doesn’t mean they don’t care about him no, it does mean however that they care *less* for him.
Elladan had slipped off somewhere, probably to meet a former lover or just to take a walk.
“Hello Elf-Knight, tell me, how are you enjoying your stay in Lorien?”
Elrohir was startled out of thought by the sound voice. A very strong, masculine voice, he thought it might of been his lover, or even his Grandfa.
.
He spun around expecting to see Orophin or Celeborn, but was met by a gray-blue gaze not of his grandfathers or his lovers.
“Excuse me?” he whispered softly, but loud enough for elven ears.
“Sorry to startle you pen-neth I do not believe we have met properly, though I have seen you many times, I am Haldir of the Galadhrim.”
“Aye, I am Elrohir Peredhil of Imladris.”
“Mellon-nin, I have heard, from many, namely Orophin, if you don’t mind my asking, how is it he knew you so well?”
“Haldir......Orophin’s brother, aye, I’ve heard much of you, and no I don’t mind, I am his...uhh....was his lover.”
##He can have any male in Rivendell, or even Lorien yet he chooses my brother, he *does* have everything, Orophin is beautiful, ah he his starring, better say something.##
“Sorry, lost in thought, excuse me, I’m sorry.”
“ ‘Tis fine, though, what was it you were thinking about?”
##How I can take you here and now.##
“I was trying to imagine what exactly it is my brother has said about me.” It was a rhetorical question, they both knew it though Elrohir was going to answer anyways.
“Believe me, it wasn’t bad. He said many times how Celeborn and Galadriel are upset...” he paused as if to think if he should say this or not, he went for the first, “ because Rumil, you, and he are so lovely and nice, but all prefer men so they won’t be able to have any other elf of the like of you when you pass to the Havens.”
“How nice of you and him to be so interested in our personal lives.” Haldir said sarcastically.
“If it means anything at all to you,” Elrohir was saying in an apologetic voice, “my Father is glad he has Arwen because my brother and I both prefer men too.”
“Oh makes me feel much better.” Still drowned with sarcasm.
“Tell me, you said the things my brother told you were good, yet it upset me to say the least....tell me something that will...ease my thoughts.” Elrohir thought he saw lust in Haldirs eyes, and some seduction in his voice.
“W...what do you want to hear?” Haldir took a step forward testing to see if Elrohir would back away, when he didn’t Haldir continued over to him until he was about a foot away, leaned in to his ear, and whispered, “That you’ll let me kiss you.” He licked the young Peredhil’s ear and before waiting for a reply gave him a searing kiss.
Elrohir surprisingly didn’t back away, but gasped which was the perfect chance for Haldir to slip his tongue inside and explore his mouth. When he backed away Haldir smirked.
“So little Prince, is that a yes?”
Elrohir simply nodded as Haldir grabbed his hand and started leading him out of the forest. As they were quickly walking through the tiny made walk-way Elrohir kept glancing around and noticed this must be a place for lovers because he saw elves paired off everywhere. He thought he has seen his brother and Rumil, but couldn’t have because Elladan was with Legolas and would never hurt him.
They soon reached a talan Elrohir was very familiar with. Haldir tugged the ladder down and still holding Elrohir’s hand started to climb up, Elrohir had no choice but to follow. As he reached the top he automatically started for Orophin’s rooms then felt a small tug at his arm realizing, this was not Orophin, but Haldir and guilt settled in his mind.
The guilt was immediately set in the back of his mind when they were in Haldir’s rooms with the door shut, and he was pushed up against the back of it as Haldir’s wonderful mouth went to work on his neck.
His head was pressed up against the door when he felt the familiar feeling of his tunic being undone. He mindlessly fumbled with Haldir’s tunic as the Galadhrim slowly, almoeasieasingly, kissed each inch of skin exposed.
Soon both has their tunic’s off and tossed carelessly aside and Haldir was on his knees unlacing Elrohir’s very tight leggings. Once they were unlaced he didn’t push them down, but ran his tongue from the bottom of the open lacings to Elrohir’s navel, smiled, and stood up.
He then forcefully kd thd the young Nolordin. When they were both in need of oxygen he pulled away, unlaced his own leggings and pushed them down so Elrohir had a clear view of his very aroused member.
Haldir then stepped back to his place and was doing some amazing things to the tip of Elrohir’s ear forcing some very arousing sounds out of him. He was rocking their hips together when both decided skin on skin contact would feel *much* better and pushed Elrohir’s leggings to the floor.
Haldir leaned in and whispered, “I will make you scream pen-neth.” And pulled him to the beautiful, light blue and gray silk covered bed.
Elrohir was pushed to the bed, but he didn’t mind, be enjoyed someone being in command. He quickly crawled up to the many pillows and settled himself on his back among them, his long dark brown hair fanning beneath him like his own pillow.
Haldir still hadn’t joined him, but was standing at the end of the bed watching him. When his long black lashes fluttered up to focus on the blue-gray eyes a slight look of confusion set itself upon the young ones face. He then heard a soft chuckle then Haldir say, “Comfortable?”
Elrohir blushed then nodded. He felt uncomfortable under Haldir’s gaze though, but then Haldir said, “Touch youself pen-neth.”
The young prince was embarrassed at first but then realized just how hard he was and lazily started stroking his erect elf-hood. Though he co’t b’t bring himself to meet Haldir’s eyes he felt his gaze upon him as he moved his hand faster letting a slightly loud “Ah” escape his lips.
Still his hand started moving faster and faster until he felt orgasm would be upon him then he heard Haldir demandingly say, “Ok stop now, ‘tis enough.” It took all he could, but Elrohir soon stopped and wondered why Haldir told him to stop, yet still hadn’t joined him on the bed.
He lifted his sparkling gorbsorbs to see Haldir digging in a drawer and then pull out a small bottle of clear oil. The Galadhrim slowly made his way to the bed, slightly tossed the oil so it landed softly beside Elrohir’s limp left arm. Haldir then put both hands on the bed anrawlrawled* up to him.
They kissed for sometime before Elrohir realized Haldir had two oiled fingers inside him and was scissoring them. He or Haldir one, he didn’t know, let out a very loud moan.
Haldir then worked in two more fingers and was working them in and out when one hit that spot inside him which made him push down hard, moan loudly, and see e. He. Haldir’s other hand was doing delightful things to his nipples.
Then the fingers were gone and Elrohir let out a whimper of protest, but then without warning Haldir’s stiff arousal was pushed in. He started thrusting in and out very fast which hurt just a little until he angled so he hit that spot deep inside him and had him moaning and begging. Haldir reached down and grabbed Elrohir’s own member and started to stroke it in time with his thrust.
Elrohir then started to beg loudly, “More, more, faster, more, SAES!”
“More what?” Haldir leaned in and whispered, one hand was holding Elrohir’s hip as the other still stroked him.
“More.......more of you.....please.....more...saes, saes, more please, saes.......” Elrohir was very close. Haldir kept hitting the spot with ever thrust and too soon for his liking Elrohir screamed his release and feeling the muscles clamp down around his elf-hood Haldir threw his head back blonde hair cascading down his pale, sweating back and came with a quiet, “Uh.” then collapsed on top of Elrohir not pulling out.
They kissed one last, lazy time before falling into a light sleep.
*********************
When Elrohir woke Haldir had pulled out of him and rolled onto his back, his left arm thrown over Elrohir’s chest the right dangling off the bed and his mouth slightly open, eyes vacant.
The young one silently removed the arm, got up, dressed, then walked out and down the talan. He was going through the events of the night while heading to his own guest talan he always stayed in and shared with his twin.
He reached the talan not knowing it and the ladder was already down. When he got to his room he didn’t expect to see his brother, much less for him to be awake, it was still very late.
“Brother, what is wrong? ‘Tis something the matter?”
Elladan was a little startled then answered, “Oh no, nothing is wrong. I wanted to tell you, I saw Orophin. He was looking for you, I told him I saw you going towards his talan. After that a couple of minuwentwent by then I saw him heading towards the forest very quickly. Did you speak to him? Say something wrong?”
Elrohir knew his brother must have seen the look of horror on his face. //He must have saw us.//
“I must find him.” He says this to Elladan without waiting for a reply he quickly makes his way out of the talan towards the river where he knew Orophin would be.
He reached the river and as he suspected Orophin was there, and heard him approach. The Galadhrim turned he she sound. Elrohir saw the tears running down his beautiful face and knew. //Oh damn, no please let it be something else.//
He walked up to Orophin and was about to ask what was wrong when Orophin said, “I would like to be alone.” It was a tone of voice Elrohir hadn’t heard before, and he didn’t like it.
Elrohir then said, “Please Orophin, tell me what is wrong.” He has screwed it up. //We had something.// He knew he had strong feeling for this elf, no he knew, he *knew* he was falling in love, and he went and screwed it up.
“Orophin...please....saes....tell me.”
“I saw you.”
“Saw me where?” //No dammit, he didn’t, he couldn’t have, oh no please Valar let him be joking....saes...//
“With.....with *him*. I saw you, making love to him, *begging* him for release, begging for more. MY OWN BROTHER ELROHIR. You could have at least picked someone not in my family, it would have made things so much easier. I..........I thought.........I thought I was falling in love with you. Elrohir you even said it in our most passionate moments, ‘I love you’, you said it. I believed you Elrohir, and I returned that love, now I know all you wanted was to use me.....you *never* really loved me...*ever* did you? Go back to him Elrohir, he needs you, he wants you, go on beg him for more. Go ahead.”
This hurt, hurt worse than anything, he couldn’t believe he did this to someone so innocent, so nice, so loving, so..eauteautiful, and he had him, and then he went and did this.
“Orophin...please, I didn’t mean......I *do* love you, I thought you...”
“Don’t blame this on me, now leave me alone, I wanna be alone.” Orophin said stubbornly, then turned around and Elrohir saw his shoulders shaking and didn’t want to make things worse so he turned and walked off.
Heading back, he knew he wasn’t going to his own talan, he was going to Haldir’s. He was mad, upset, and really confused, and needed to know why.
He climbed the ladder and walked into Haldir’s room to sew him sitting against the headboard, a sheet over his legs and lower abdomen and......he was *smirking*. He knew. //Why would he do that?// Elrohir wanted to know *why*.
In a slight scream, slight upset whimper he said it, “Why?” he then sank to his knees, sitting on his calves, put his elbows on the top of his thighs, and his head in his and started to cry. He heard Haldir say over his whimpers,
“I wanted to destroy something beautiful.”
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Elf-Knight - Meaning of Elrohir’s name.
Pen-Neth - Young one
Mellon-Nin - My Friend
Saes - Please
Thanks,
Alakadarion
By the way, for those who don't know, the very last line was from the movie.
Author: Alakadarion
Pairing: Elrohir/Haldir , implied Elrohir/Orophin, Elladan/Legolas, Elladan/Rumil.
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Elrohir gets seduced.
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters used in this story, JRR Tolkien does.
Authors note: I got this idea from one quote in a movie, it was frightight Club and I can’t say what the quote was, that will give the plot (if you can call it that) away. This whole story evolves around this one quote.
Warnings: Not a happy ending, slash (male/male sex)
Feedback: !!Feedback!!
##...## is Haldir’s thoughts.
//...// is Elrohir’s thoughts.
Beautiful
Haldir always thought he had the perfect life. That is until he met the Peredhil twins. One in particular, Elrohir.
He seemed to have gotten his mothers beauty and his fathers intelligence. He has everything, a family that love him, a brother that *really* cared for Yes Yes Haldir has brothers, and yes they cared for him, but not the way Elladan and Elrohir cared for each other. Haldirs brothers had more of a passion for hunting and keeping watch. That doesn’t mean they don’t care about him no, it does mean however that they care *less* for him.
Elladan had slipped off somewhere, probably to meet a former lover or just to take a walk.
“Hello Elf-Knight, tell me, how are you enjoying your stay in Lorien?”
Elrohir was startled out of thought by the sound voice. A very strong, masculine voice, he thought it might of been his lover, or even his Grandfa.
.
He spun around expecting to see Orophin or Celeborn, but was met by a gray-blue gaze not of his grandfathers or his lovers.
“Excuse me?” he whispered softly, but loud enough for elven ears.
“Sorry to startle you pen-neth I do not believe we have met properly, though I have seen you many times, I am Haldir of the Galadhrim.”
“Aye, I am Elrohir Peredhil of Imladris.”
“Mellon-nin, I have heard, from many, namely Orophin, if you don’t mind my asking, how is it he knew you so well?”
“Haldir......Orophin’s brother, aye, I’ve heard much of you, and no I don’t mind, I am his...uhh....was his lover.”
##He can have any male in Rivendell, or even Lorien yet he chooses my brother, he *does* have everything, Orophin is beautiful, ah he his starring, better say something.##
“Sorry, lost in thought, excuse me, I’m sorry.”
“ ‘Tis fine, though, what was it you were thinking about?”
##How I can take you here and now.##
“I was trying to imagine what exactly it is my brother has said about me.” It was a rhetorical question, they both knew it though Elrohir was going to answer anyways.
“Believe me, it wasn’t bad. He said many times how Celeborn and Galadriel are upset...” he paused as if to think if he should say this or not, he went for the first, “ because Rumil, you, and he are so lovely and nice, but all prefer men so they won’t be able to have any other elf of the like of you when you pass to the Havens.”
“How nice of you and him to be so interested in our personal lives.” Haldir said sarcastically.
“If it means anything at all to you,” Elrohir was saying in an apologetic voice, “my Father is glad he has Arwen because my brother and I both prefer men too.”
“Oh makes me feel much better.” Still drowned with sarcasm.
“Tell me, you said the things my brother told you were good, yet it upset me to say the least....tell me something that will...ease my thoughts.” Elrohir thought he saw lust in Haldirs eyes, and some seduction in his voice.
“W...what do you want to hear?” Haldir took a step forward testing to see if Elrohir would back away, when he didn’t Haldir continued over to him until he was about a foot away, leaned in to his ear, and whispered, “That you’ll let me kiss you.” He licked the young Peredhil’s ear and before waiting for a reply gave him a searing kiss.
Elrohir surprisingly didn’t back away, but gasped which was the perfect chance for Haldir to slip his tongue inside and explore his mouth. When he backed away Haldir smirked.
“So little Prince, is that a yes?”
Elrohir simply nodded as Haldir grabbed his hand and started leading him out of the forest. As they were quickly walking through the tiny made walk-way Elrohir kept glancing around and noticed this must be a place for lovers because he saw elves paired off everywhere. He thought he has seen his brother and Rumil, but couldn’t have because Elladan was with Legolas and would never hurt him.
They soon reached a talan Elrohir was very familiar with. Haldir tugged the ladder down and still holding Elrohir’s hand started to climb up, Elrohir had no choice but to follow. As he reached the top he automatically started for Orophin’s rooms then felt a small tug at his arm realizing, this was not Orophin, but Haldir and guilt settled in his mind.
The guilt was immediately set in the back of his mind when they were in Haldir’s rooms with the door shut, and he was pushed up against the back of it as Haldir’s wonderful mouth went to work on his neck.
His head was pressed up against the door when he felt the familiar feeling of his tunic being undone. He mindlessly fumbled with Haldir’s tunic as the Galadhrim slowly, almoeasieasingly, kissed each inch of skin exposed.
Soon both has their tunic’s off and tossed carelessly aside and Haldir was on his knees unlacing Elrohir’s very tight leggings. Once they were unlaced he didn’t push them down, but ran his tongue from the bottom of the open lacings to Elrohir’s navel, smiled, and stood up.
He then forcefully kd thd the young Nolordin. When they were both in need of oxygen he pulled away, unlaced his own leggings and pushed them down so Elrohir had a clear view of his very aroused member.
Haldir then stepped back to his place and was doing some amazing things to the tip of Elrohir’s ear forcing some very arousing sounds out of him. He was rocking their hips together when both decided skin on skin contact would feel *much* better and pushed Elrohir’s leggings to the floor.
Haldir leaned in and whispered, “I will make you scream pen-neth.” And pulled him to the beautiful, light blue and gray silk covered bed.
Elrohir was pushed to the bed, but he didn’t mind, be enjoyed someone being in command. He quickly crawled up to the many pillows and settled himself on his back among them, his long dark brown hair fanning beneath him like his own pillow.
Haldir still hadn’t joined him, but was standing at the end of the bed watching him. When his long black lashes fluttered up to focus on the blue-gray eyes a slight look of confusion set itself upon the young ones face. He then heard a soft chuckle then Haldir say, “Comfortable?”
Elrohir blushed then nodded. He felt uncomfortable under Haldir’s gaze though, but then Haldir said, “Touch youself pen-neth.”
The young prince was embarrassed at first but then realized just how hard he was and lazily started stroking his erect elf-hood. Though he co’t b’t bring himself to meet Haldir’s eyes he felt his gaze upon him as he moved his hand faster letting a slightly loud “Ah” escape his lips.
Still his hand started moving faster and faster until he felt orgasm would be upon him then he heard Haldir demandingly say, “Ok stop now, ‘tis enough.” It took all he could, but Elrohir soon stopped and wondered why Haldir told him to stop, yet still hadn’t joined him on the bed.
He lifted his sparkling gorbsorbs to see Haldir digging in a drawer and then pull out a small bottle of clear oil. The Galadhrim slowly made his way to the bed, slightly tossed the oil so it landed softly beside Elrohir’s limp left arm. Haldir then put both hands on the bed anrawlrawled* up to him.
They kissed for sometime before Elrohir realized Haldir had two oiled fingers inside him and was scissoring them. He or Haldir one, he didn’t know, let out a very loud moan.
Haldir then worked in two more fingers and was working them in and out when one hit that spot inside him which made him push down hard, moan loudly, and see e. He. Haldir’s other hand was doing delightful things to his nipples.
Then the fingers were gone and Elrohir let out a whimper of protest, but then without warning Haldir’s stiff arousal was pushed in. He started thrusting in and out very fast which hurt just a little until he angled so he hit that spot deep inside him and had him moaning and begging. Haldir reached down and grabbed Elrohir’s own member and started to stroke it in time with his thrust.
Elrohir then started to beg loudly, “More, more, faster, more, SAES!”
“More what?” Haldir leaned in and whispered, one hand was holding Elrohir’s hip as the other still stroked him.
“More.......more of you.....please.....more...saes, saes, more please, saes.......” Elrohir was very close. Haldir kept hitting the spot with ever thrust and too soon for his liking Elrohir screamed his release and feeling the muscles clamp down around his elf-hood Haldir threw his head back blonde hair cascading down his pale, sweating back and came with a quiet, “Uh.” then collapsed on top of Elrohir not pulling out.
They kissed one last, lazy time before falling into a light sleep.
*********************
When Elrohir woke Haldir had pulled out of him and rolled onto his back, his left arm thrown over Elrohir’s chest the right dangling off the bed and his mouth slightly open, eyes vacant.
The young one silently removed the arm, got up, dressed, then walked out and down the talan. He was going through the events of the night while heading to his own guest talan he always stayed in and shared with his twin.
He reached the talan not knowing it and the ladder was already down. When he got to his room he didn’t expect to see his brother, much less for him to be awake, it was still very late.
“Brother, what is wrong? ‘Tis something the matter?”
Elladan was a little startled then answered, “Oh no, nothing is wrong. I wanted to tell you, I saw Orophin. He was looking for you, I told him I saw you going towards his talan. After that a couple of minuwentwent by then I saw him heading towards the forest very quickly. Did you speak to him? Say something wrong?”
Elrohir knew his brother must have seen the look of horror on his face. //He must have saw us.//
“I must find him.” He says this to Elladan without waiting for a reply he quickly makes his way out of the talan towards the river where he knew Orophin would be.
He reached the river and as he suspected Orophin was there, and heard him approach. The Galadhrim turned he she sound. Elrohir saw the tears running down his beautiful face and knew. //Oh damn, no please let it be something else.//
He walked up to Orophin and was about to ask what was wrong when Orophin said, “I would like to be alone.” It was a tone of voice Elrohir hadn’t heard before, and he didn’t like it.
Elrohir then said, “Please Orophin, tell me what is wrong.” He has screwed it up. //We had something.// He knew he had strong feeling for this elf, no he knew, he *knew* he was falling in love, and he went and screwed it up.
“Orophin...please....saes....tell me.”
“I saw you.”
“Saw me where?” //No dammit, he didn’t, he couldn’t have, oh no please Valar let him be joking....saes...//
“With.....with *him*. I saw you, making love to him, *begging* him for release, begging for more. MY OWN BROTHER ELROHIR. You could have at least picked someone not in my family, it would have made things so much easier. I..........I thought.........I thought I was falling in love with you. Elrohir you even said it in our most passionate moments, ‘I love you’, you said it. I believed you Elrohir, and I returned that love, now I know all you wanted was to use me.....you *never* really loved me...*ever* did you? Go back to him Elrohir, he needs you, he wants you, go on beg him for more. Go ahead.”
This hurt, hurt worse than anything, he couldn’t believe he did this to someone so innocent, so nice, so loving, so..eauteautiful, and he had him, and then he went and did this.
“Orophin...please, I didn’t mean......I *do* love you, I thought you...”
“Don’t blame this on me, now leave me alone, I wanna be alone.” Orophin said stubbornly, then turned around and Elrohir saw his shoulders shaking and didn’t want to make things worse so he turned and walked off.
Heading back, he knew he wasn’t going to his own talan, he was going to Haldir’s. He was mad, upset, and really confused, and needed to know why.
He climbed the ladder and walked into Haldir’s room to sew him sitting against the headboard, a sheet over his legs and lower abdomen and......he was *smirking*. He knew. //Why would he do that?// Elrohir wanted to know *why*.
In a slight scream, slight upset whimper he said it, “Why?” he then sank to his knees, sitting on his calves, put his elbows on the top of his thighs, and his head in his and started to cry. He heard Haldir say over his whimpers,
“I wanted to destroy something beautiful.”
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Elf-Knight - Meaning of Elrohir’s name.
Pen-Neth - Young one
Mellon-Nin - My Friend
Saes - Please
Thanks,
Alakadarion
By the way, for those who don't know, the very last line was from the movie.