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Last Breath

By: ErestorandFin
folder -Multi-Age › General
Rating: Adult +
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Disclaimer: I do not own the Lord of the Rings (and associated) book series, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.

Last breath

Beta: keiliss

Contact: legolaslovesaragorn@yahoo.co.uk or glorfindelanderestor@yahoo.co.uk

Pairing: Erestor/Glorfindel

Warnings: Character death.

Disclaimer: I don’t own these elves*sobs*I wish I did, but sadly they

belong to Tolkien...

Please R/R , feedback would be most appreciated:)

Lyrics are taken from Evanescence’s ‘Whisper’.

~ denote lyrics


Last Breath

~Catch me as I fall

Say you're here and it's all over now

Speaking to the atmosphere

No one's here and I fall into myself

This truth drives me into madness~


It can’t be true.

I wait for your return…I wait for you to walk through my door, a smile upon your face...I wait for you to return to me…but you don’t come….

I refuse to believe it….

Yet you are still gone.


Oh my love, how could you do this to me?

How could you break my heart?


~Don't turn away

(Don't give in to the pain)

Don't try to hide

(Though they're screaming your name)

Don't close your eyes

(God knows what lies behind them)

Don't turn out the light

(Never sleep, never die)~


Everything is dark, I’m dying from the inside…..

My Hope is fading; I don’t know how much longer I can wait….


~I'm frightened by what I see

But somehow I know that there's much more to come

Immobilized by my fear

And soon to be blinded by tears~


I can wait no longer my love…I pray you forgive me my sins….

I Grasp the knife tightly, slashing quickly, sweetly feeling the blade…

I watch in fascination as the crimson blood slowly drips from my wrists….


~Fallen angels at my feet

Whispered voices at my ear

Death before my eyes

Lying next to me I fear

He beckons me, shall I give in

Upon my end shall I begin?

Forsaking all I've fallen for

I rise to meet the end~

It’s too late….I feel the call of Mandos…but it is your voice I hear…

Your voice urging me to join you once more.

How can I refuse my love? Not when you have my heart…I would rather join you of by my own means, than slowly fade….


~Don't turn away

(Don't give in to the pain)

Don't try to hide

(Though they're screaming your name)

Don't close your eyes

(God knows what lies behind them)

Don't turn out the light

(Never sleep, never die)~


My body is weary, my heart is slowing…..I can feel it. I lay myself down on our bed, waiting….


I will join you soon Meleth…


~Don't turn away

Don't try to hide

Don't close your eyes

Don't turn out the light~

I see the door flung open, Elrond standing before me. Tears in his eyes as he sees the way I lay upon the blood soaked sheets, dropping to his knees as he realizes there is nothing he can do.


“Why?” He demands as his tears spill down his face.

“Because I Can't live without him…..” I whisper quietly, my breathing already slowing as my life slips away with my blood.

It will not be long now Meleth…My body is growing cold as my heart struggles to keep going…..I will join you soon. I don’t fight it….I feel myself slip from my body as I draw my last breath…..

~Don't turn away

Don't try to hide

Don't close your eyes

Don't turn out the light~


I hear your voice distantly….calling me, calling my name longingly…

I look around, I am lost….

Where are you my love? Help me find you…

Then I see you, waiting for me with love in your eyes.

And I am whole again.