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Twice The View

By: Jennygirl
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Rating: Adult ++
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Twice Vhe View

Disclaimer: I do not own anything from LOTR, I only write this for fun. So I will make a deal.. you do not sue me and I will not ask why you are reading adult fanfiction in the first place...

A/N.. I wrote this fore the sole purpose of seeing if could do it. I feel I am better at beta-ing then I am at writing. This is a first attempt and it is my sister (aka Aragornsfavorite) that convinced me to finally post this..

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Twice the View.


Enelya as she did every night made her way to the waters edge. Not long ago she had come across a small inlet just a little ways from the waterfall. One a warm night such as this one she knew the coolness of the water would be refreshing. She was not the only one in all of Imladris who knew of his place yet at this time of night she doubted anyone else would be there...She had not been prepared for the sight now before her.
Not more then a few feet from where she stood Enelya could see them in all their glory. Both Elladan and Elrohir stood just in front of the waterfall. Elladan had his head tilted back as the water cascaded over his body. His dark wet hair seemed to glisten under the light of the moon. Her eyes drifted over to Elrohir as he had slowly emerged from beneath the w . .
Feeling a little guilty for spying on the brothers Enelya tried to pull her eyes away. A task which proved not so easily done. She could not keep herself from eliciting a sudden gasp as she had caught a glimpse of Elladan's pride. She dared not move in fear of them hearing her. She did not feel the need to explain to Elrond Lord of Imladris why she was spying on his twin sons.
" Would you not prefer to join us?" Enelya closed her eyes at the sound of the voice. She could feel the heat in her face building, She had been so intent on watching Elladan that she had not realized that Elrohir had disappeared.
" I did not know anyone else would be here." Why did her voice sound so distant?
" We do not mind sharing the water" Elrohir purred softly into her ear. He moved her hair to one side as he nibbled her neck.
Enelya tilted her head to one side giving him better access to her neck. Her eyes focused on Elladan as he made his way towards them.
"Surely my dear brother you intend to share." Elladan did not wait for a reply before he stepped closer to Enelya. Placing a hand upon her cheek she watched as a single drop of water slid down her neck till it disappeared beneath the fabric of her dress.
" Do you not agree that it is only fair we should be allowed to see all of her as she has seen us?" Elrohir seductive voice cause her to shiver. Long had she admired the twins and many nights had been spent fantasizing of them.
"I fully agree" Elladan replied slowly. His voice now husky with obvious desire. He lightly brushed his lips across her jaw till he found her mouth. It took very little coaxing on his part to have her part her lips for him. He slowly trailed his tongue across her lips before allowing himself entry into her mouth. He caressed her tongue with his own.
Elrohir moaned as he watched his twin now locked into a deep passionate kiss with Enelya. He place soft lingering kisses along backback oh her neck and shoulders. Moving his hands slowly over her shoulders he began to untie the lace of her dress. Slowly he pulled the material apart exposing her breasts to both him and his brother.
Elladan smiled as he noticed what Elrohir had done. He used his hands to further push the silk materiel down over her arms slowly lowering himself at the same time. Gently he guided the dress down her legs helping her to step out of it.


Enelya felt as if she were floating among the clouds. Elrohir still behind her was now massaging her shoulders places tiny kisses along the back of her neck and shoulders. Elladan still crouching before her began kissing his way up her legs his lips following the same path lead by his hands. She leaned back against Elrohir in support as she enjoyed each touch.
Elladan slowly kissed his way back up. His hands gently caressed each breast, tracing little circles around her extremely hard nipples. He could no longer hold back the urge to take one into his mouth. He glanced up in time to see Elrohir capture her mouth. He watched the two of them as he sucked the nipple further into his mouth twirling his tongue around the sensitive bud causing her to moan into his brothers mouth.
Not wanting to be left out Elrohir stepped around her placing himself beside his brother. He kissed her softly before he leaned down and took the other nipple into his mouth. Giving it the exact same treatment as Elladan was on the other one.
Enelya gasped at the sight of them each sucking her nipples. Her eyes closed as she fought to gain control of her breathing. She moaned in protest as they both released her nipples at the same time. Opening her eyes as she felt them each take a hand and lead her into the water. The feel of the cool water upon her heated skin was refreshing. Elladan pulled her under the water fall with him. He tilted her head back to work the water through her hair. Kissing her exposed neck at the same time. He leaned her further back so the stream of falling water now cascaded over her breasts. He lowered his head to drink the water as it poured from her.
Enelya was soon lowed to the ground just behind the water fall. She watched as Elladan placed himself beside her. His erection now pressing against her leg . She moaned in delight as he again reached for her breast. Teasing her nipple as he nibbled the tip of her ear.
Elladan's breath caught in his throat when he felt her hand gently closing around his painfully erect shaft. Breathing proved to be difficult as she had begun to stroke his length . He brought his mouth back down to capture her nipple, gently grazing it with his teeth as he flicked his tongue over it. They both moaned in unison as they continued to pleasure each other.


Enelya silently wondered where Elrohir had vanished to. She did not have to wonder for long. He had slowly emerged from the water while pushing her legs open. He ran his hands up her legs making her ache for him to touch her. She could feel the waters touch between her legs with each wave he caused as he moved closer.
Elrohir gathered some water into his mouth just as his hand reached her most intimate place. He heard her softly cry out as he trailed a finger over the now swollen flesh between her legs. Bringing his head closer he allowed a few drips of water to spill from his mouth, watching as the drops slid between her legs. He almost lost himself as he picked up her sweet scent. Opening his mouth a little more allowed the remained of the water to pour out onto her. Wasting no time he lowered her head and began to lick the water from her.
Elladan looked to se what had suddenly caused her to cry out. The sight before him only caused him to harden even more. Elrohir's head was placed between her legs. He could only watch as his younger twin slowly sucked on the sensitive flesh.
Enelya whimpered as Elrohir inserted his finger deep into her. His mouth never breaking from her as he sucked her harder. Reaching over she turned Elladan's head to face her. Her hand still stroking his length as he captured her mouth. She moaned into his mouth as he pinched her nipple at the exact same time Elrohir lightly nibbled between her legs adding another finger into her.
Elrohir was lost in the taste of her. The more he tasted the more he wanted. Her cries of pleasure urging him on, he now wildly flicked his tongue over ever inch of her wetness, His fingers working in and out of her Looking up he saw Elladan switching back and forth on each nipple. Enelya's eyes were closed, his eyes moved to her hand as it gripped his brothers shaft and stroked it. It sent a wave of new desire through him. He kissed his way up her stomach. His mouth finding a hard nipple, he gladly took it into his mouth.
"Please" Enelya pleaded. Elrohir was placed between her legs. She felt his shaft now poised at her opening. She ached to have him inside her. She did not have to wait long.
Elrohir groaned as he slid himself into her.Giving her time to adjust to him was sweet torture. He wanted to just ravish her, to slam himself into her till they both exploded yet he held himself in control not wanting this to end so soon.
Elladan watched with interest as Elrohir began to move himself within Eenlya's depths. He could see the obvious pleasure in his twins eyes and he was brought that much closer to his own release. Pulling his eyes away from his twin he looked into the eyes of Elenya. Her eyes now dark with desire. Capturing her mouth with his he slipped his tongue past her parted lips.
Enelya did not wish to leave Elladan out. Her eyes drifted down to his hard member and Elrohir seemed to get the message. He pulled himself out briefly and placed her on her side as he took position behind her. The both moaned as he slid himself back into her.
Elladan arched an eyebrow as she gently pushed him onto his back. He could only watch as she kissed along his chest. One of his weak spots revealed when he cried out as she sucked one his nipples. He could feel his erection throbbing as she kissed even further down. She stopped only to cry out as Elrohir thrusted deeper into her.
"Sweet Elbereth" Elladan suddenly cried out when she licked the tip of his shaft. His eyes locked with hers as she slowly took him completely into her mouth. He hand still clamped around the base continued to stroke him as she sucked his length.
Elrohir had almost lost control when he saw this. The look of pure pleasure on Elladan's face made him begin to thrust even faster. A deep moan escaping him when he felt her suddenly tighten around him. His control was diminshing with each new thrust.


Elladan eyes were closed. He wanted to savor this feeling for as long as possible. He tensed suddenly and knew he could no longer hold back. His hips thrusted up pushing himself further into Enelya's mouth as he erupted. Emptying himself into her mouth. Whimpered as she swallowed every drop.
Elrohir's cry echoed into the night as he also erupted sending his own seed into her depth. Watching his brother explode into her mouth had proved to be his limit. His shaft twitched painfully with every drop he pumped into her.
Enelya could not hold back the cry of pleasure as she found her own release. Sendingher warm juice to mix with Elrohir's. She collapsed back against the younger twin until she could catch her breath.
The look she saw in Elladen's eyes told her he wasn't finished yet. She did not even have time to voice her protest of Elrohir pulling himself from her before Elladan slipped himself into her. He kissed her deeply as he rolled them so that she straddled him. His hands fell to her hips as he guided her slowly up his shaft only to pull her back down. She cried out as she felt him deep inside her.
She was vaguely aware that Elrohir now knelt behind her. She shivered as he reached around her to cup her breasts, gently pinching both nipples.
"Relax yourself against my brother."Elrohir whispered as he nibbled her ear " Let us both fill you"
Elladan heard his brother words and new of his plan. He brought his hands up to Enelya's face and slowly pulled her down to him. He saw a little fear in her eyes.
" Trust him Melamin (my love) He will not hurt you" He captured her mouth just as Elrohir slowly guided himself into her.
Enelya's broke away from Elladan's kiss to cry out. The pain did not last long. It was quickly replaced with a pleasure she had never before experienced. To be with both of them had been a dream come true. To have them both inside her at once was a feeling she would never forget.
Both Elladan and Elrohir began to move within her. They all fell into a steady rhythm. Each one meeting the others thrusts. Enelya had her eyes closed as both brothers worked to bring her the release she ached for.
Elrohir reached his release first. Griping her hips tightly as his seed pumped into her. Enelya cried out as she was taken over the edge for the second time that night. Elladan thrusted his hips sending himself deeper into her as erupted sending his own seed into her depths.
It tool a few minutes for each of them to catch their breath. Enelya was placed between the two they as laid back on the ground. She admired the waterfall before them and knew she would never remember this experience for many years to come.

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Well there you have it. I hope you enjoyed it. I am not sure if I should add to it or not. If do rdo review please be kind remember this is a first for me.

Jen
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