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Twice The View

By: Jennygirl
folder -Multi-Age › General
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 9
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Disclaimer: I do not own the Lord of the Rings (and associated) book series, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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chapter 8

Disclaimer: As always Tolkien owns everything from LOTR and I own noting except an overactive imagination.

Title: Twice the View
Author:Jennygirl
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Summery: Enelya has become involved with the twins namely Elladan but will someone from her past ruin things between them?
Note: Reviews are always welcome and I don't mind constructive criticism but flames will be laughed at and deleted. If you don't like the story then don't read it..

Thanks to everyone who has reviewed so far and I hope you continue to do so. Jade thanks for taking the time to beta this for me.

A/N I apologize for taking so long to update.Working has been real hectic for the past few months and I suffered a case of writers block, which I hope is gone

Kittynip9: I am glad you like it and hey if we can have a soap about demons and witches (passions) then why can't we have one with Elves?

Casey and Carly: Glad to hear that and here is that update you've been waiting for.. Sorry it took so long.

Am: Things are only going to get more interesting.

Ren: I plan to continue.. and I agree there is not enough Het fics with Glorfindel.. I'll see what I can do... In the meantime my sister has started one that will be about Glorfindel with Legolas' daughter if you wish to read. It's called "Right kind of wrong" and is posted here at aff.net

Jade: You can pay me now for plugging your story I'll take Elladan as payment thank you...

The drama continues....


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Chapter 8


Legolas growled as he realized that Haldir had distracted him long enough for him to lose track of Enelya. There was no doubt that should he chose to he could easily locate her but for now he would bide his time...He would not give up till she was once again his.

Enleya leaned herself against the base of the tree. She had managed to lose Legolas with the help of Haldir but for how long she did not know. If given the choice she would prefer to avoid him for the rest of his stay in Rivendell.
She doubted that the prince would give up so easily. She had witnessed first hand his determination especially when anteanted something.
Waiting for awhile she slowly made her way through the woods jumping at almost every sound she heard.
"Manke naa lle autien?" (Where are you going?) Sheped ped when she first felt him pull her into his arms. Relaxing when she saw that it was Elrohir.
"I merely needed some time to myself." Enelya replied softly.
" Is that all you need?" Elros mes meaning was clear.
Before Enelya could reply Elrohir pressed his lips to hers slipping his tongue passed her lips as soon as opened to him. His hands came up to lightly grasp each side of her face, tilting her head back he slowly kissed along her neck.
"Tampa" Enleya managed to breathe out. Her breathing had deepened and it was taking everything she had not to just give in. However this is not the elf she wished for.
Looking at Elrohir she was surprised to see his smile and pleasing look in his eyes rather then the disappointment she had expected.
"A test?" He gave a small nod in response.
"Forgive me Enelya." He bowed and kissed her hand" I merely wanted to see if your feeling for Elladan were true"
Enelya's tears fell no matter how hard she tried to keep them in. Her eyes closed as she felt herself once again in Elrohir's embrace.
" Mani marte?" (what happened) His voice soothing
Taking a few deep breaths Enelya told him what had happened. She felt him tense yet tighten his embrace.
" My brother waits for you by the water" Elrohir gently pulled away from her. " Tell him of this."
Enelya let out a deep breath. She did not wish to keep things from Elladan but feared his reaction. Without another word Elrohir turned and walked away. She was not sure of the look she'd seen in his eyes.


Enelya had slowly made her way towards the water. Stopping when she saw Elladan she could not help but watch him for a few moments. It was obvious he had been into the water for his hair still remained wet, his tunic he kept open to reveal a very impressive chest.
Elladan had known the outcome of Elrohir's test with Enelya.whether he sensed it through His brother or Enelya he was not yet sure.
Sensing a presence he looked over to where Enelya stood. Their eyes met as he made his way to her.
"Elladan I...."He silenced her with a kiss. Bringing his arms to pull her against him.
Enelya melted into him allowing the kiss to deepen, not wanting to yet lose the feelings she felt with him. She knew he had felt her tears when his hand caressed the side of her face. He slowly pulled back to look at her. The concern in his eyes caused a shiver to course threw her.
"Mani naa ta?" (What is it?)
Enelya shook her head as she wiped her tears. She was not sure she could tell him. It was easier with Elrohir, she had nothing to lose. If she told Elladan she risked losing him and that is not something she wished to happen
" Melamin?" (My love) He tilted her head back leaving her no choice to look at him

Taking a deep breath and pushing aside her fear Enelya told him everything, From her past with Legolas to waking up with him in her bed that morning. Hey eyes were closed for she feared what look he would have in his eyes.
" Look at me" Elladan's hands gently cupped each side of her face. Enelya slowly opened his eyes " I do not care of what you once had with Legolas" He placed a soft kiss upon her lips
Enelay melted into him once more as he slipped his tongue passed her parted lips.
Lowering them both to the ground Elladan placed himself beside her as he deepened the kiss. His hand slowly down her neck and chest coming to a stop as the laces that held closed her dress. Breaking the kiss he lowered his eyes to the front of her dress, watching as more of her was exposed with each lace he pulled open. Absent mindedly licking his lips as he took in the sight of her nipples now hardened from meeting with the cool air.
Enelya was shaking with anticipation as Elladan slowly lowered his head, she inhaled sharply when he gently took her nipple into his mouth. The feel of his tongue slowly circling the sensitive bud caused other places to ache in need of his attention.

Elladan moaned as her hands trailed slowly across his chest, her fingers lightly passing over his nipples, his shiver revealing this as his weak spot. HE could feel her giggle as she as well realized this. He ran one hand lightly over her body, pushing either sides of her dress open. Her breathing deepened when he brought his hand to her moist center Smiling at how she whimpered in pleasure when he eased his finger into her. Letting go of one nipple he merely sucked its twin into his mouth.
Enelya could only whimper again in pleasure as he added a second finger into her.. She did not even realize she had unlaced his breeches until she hears him moan. Her hand now gently stroking along his hardened length. The hunger in his eyes matched that of hers as they briefly met each other's gaze before Elladan captured her mouth in a deep passionate kiss.

Elladan's desire for her had been intense enough even before she began to stroke him. Now with each move of her hard against him was a test of his control.. He was soon to fail.
"Amin merna lle." (I want you) Elladan softly whispered in her ear as he pulled his hand from her.
"Then take me" Enelya's voiced filled with desire "please"
It had been her soft plea that had undone him. He moved into her slowly, pushing into her depth till he was completely buried within her, eliciting a cry of pleasure from them both.
Enelya arched into him the instant he began to move within her. cou could not stop her soft cries of pleasure as she almost instantly tightened around him, her inner walls gripping him tighter with each of his thrusts.
Whatever control Elladan had before this was gone the minute he felt her gripping him. Kissing her neck he quickened his rhythm pushing into her deeper and harder. Hearing her cry out his name just as he felt her release caused his own eruption. With a cry of his own he held himself deep inside her as his seed pumped itself into her.
Once they were once again dressed Elladan had leaned against the base of a tree, pulling her into his embrace he shared a deep passionate kiss with her. Her hand resting lightly on his chest as they sat in silence, both enjoying the feeling of the other....

Glorfindel looked towards Elrohir with both surprise and wonder in his eyes. The youngest son of Elrond had merely walked into the room and had without saying a word thrown Legolas into a near by wall.
" Have you gone mad?" Erestor glared at the younger elf as he helped Legolas to his feet.
" That is nothing compared to what Ell wil will do"

Legolas, Erestor and Glorfindel could only watch as Elrohir turned and left the room. All but one were confused as to what was going on.... A small smile could be seen on Leglolas' face

"So it begins"

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Shall I continue?


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