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Two Too Much to Handle?

By: Shanastay
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Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 6
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Three is NOT a Crowd

Disclaimer: (In the spirit of Crimson Starlight)

Shana: *passed out on couch in front of TV*

Ali: *to Tal, whispering* What happened to her?

Haldir and Glorfindel: *peeking into room, snickering*

Tal: *points at snickering elves* Them.

Haldir and Glorfindel: *HUGE smirks*

Ali: *blinks* BOTH of them?

Tal: *nods, rolling eyes*

Ali: No way.

Tal: Way. *looks around* You seen E?

Ali: E?

Tal: DUH! Erestor.

Ali: Oh. I think… *gets distracted by hushed conference around corner* Now what?

Tal: *catches sight of identical sable heads bent with two blondes, frowns* I think Hal and Glory are comparing notes with the twins.

Ali: *wide-eyed* Oh dear.

Tal: *waves dismissively* Whatever. Shanastay owns nothing and no one and apparently got quite worn out researching this chapter. *walks over to prone woman pulling a blanket over her* Those two did a number on her. She'll be out for a while.

Shana: *snores loudly*

Ali: *snickers*

Chapter 4: Three is NOT a Crowd

The sound of the twins' purring echoed about the chamber, the low rumble vibrating the bed. The two Perendhil immersed themselves in the simplicity of the moment, just enjoying Janessa's touch. The trio remained so for several moments.

Their plans for the eve nowhere near an end, the two elves moved simultaneously. Elrohir opened his eyes to find Janessa's closed in contentment. He slowly shifted forward until his face hovered just above the redhead's. Sensing his gaze, Janessa looked up into pewter eyes just barely visible now in the waning light. He dropped his head to capture her lips for a moment before retreating and sitting up on the pallet.

While Elrohir engaged the redhead's mouth, Elladan trailed light kisses along Jan's hip and outer thigh, gradually moving up over the top. Elladan slowly drew the tip of his tongue over the curve of her hip as Elrohir drew back from the bed. Janessa shivered as the elder twin danced his fingertips across the planes of her stomach, her hand twined in his raven locks while he changed back to peppering kisses across her abdomen.

Elrohir quickly moved about the chamber, lighting candles here and there casting flickering warmth throughout. The younger twin came to a halt, drawing in a hasty breath as he caught sight of the tableau upon the bed. He paused to watch for a moment, his hand dropping to slowly stroke his again hardened length.

Upon the bed Janessa had drawn her hand down Elladan's side from his hair to rest upon the elder twin's hip, her fingers grasping reflexively against Elladan's skin.

While Elrohir illuminated the chamber Elladan had initiated a seduction of his own. The elder twin had worked his way around Janessa's outer thigh, using his right hand beneath her leg to lift it, granting him access to the underside. As Elrohir watched, Elladan insinuated himself under and around Jan's thigh, spreading her legs apart, exposing her to the elder twin's attentions.

A low moan escaped Elrohir's lips as Elladan moved his mouth up Jan's inner thigh. Elladan's left hand pressed against the redhead's abdomen was the only thing that kept her from arching off the bed, a keening cry escaping her lips as the elder twin delved his tongue between her sodden folds, tasting deeply of the mingling of their essences.

Elrohir forced himself to move as Janessa cried out again, Elladan having apparently latched onto her clit, the elder twin teasing the redhead ever closer to the edge. The younger twin swiftly moved around the bed, watching his brother's face buried between Jan's thighs as he carefully climbed up the pallet until he hovered above the quivering woman.

Janessa's breathing came in ragged pants as Elladan put centuries of experience to use, his tongue along her sodden folds and sensitized clit driving all coherence from her mind. Wishing to return the favor she drew her hand across the elder twin's skin, moving from his hip ever closer to his renewed arousal. She gently wrapped her hand around the substantial girth, stroking him with long, sure pulls, her thumb flicking his head with every upstroke. Elladan responded to her ministrations, pressing her thighs further apart, delving deeper into her depths.

Elrohir noted Janessa's tightly closed eyes and glanced toward his brother again. The younger Peredhil licked his lips as he registered the redhead's hand slowly stroking Elladan's length. Elrohir tore his eyes from the sight, dropping his head to capture the woman's lips, swallowing her cries. The younger twin pressed the length of his body against Janessa's side, unconsciously rubbing his own throbbing arousal against her hip, his left hand rising to cup one breast, fingers toying with the embedded ring. Elrohir moaned along with Jan as he felt her other hand wrap around his length, the woman now alternately stroking one twin with each hand.

Elladan greedily lapped up the flood of sweetness from Janessa's depths as Elrohir toyed with her nipple rings. The feeling of Janessa's callused palm against his length shattered Elladan's tenuous control. The elder twin slid two dexterous fingers into her slick folds, palm up, pressing against her hidden bundle of nerves with the pads of his fingers in tight circles, a shudder running through the elder twin as Janessa increased her hand's pace.

Elrohir could tell when Elladan entered Jan with his fingers, the younger twin catching Jan's renewed cries as he continued to explore her mouth, the pace and pressure she stroked Elrohir with increasing noticeably. Elrohir responded in kind as Janessa began to savage the younger twin's mouth, her fingers having released his length to dig almost painfully into his hip. Elrohir picked up the sound of humming from the elder twin as he realized Jan was stroking Elladan quite forcefully, the elder sibling rocking into her grip.

Janessa drew her hand over Elladan's length almost roughly as rumbling vibrations swept through her nether regions pushing her to the pinnacle and over, Elrohir catching the scream that released from her chest as her entire body shook with the force of her orgasm.

Elladan quickly followed her, spilling his pearly seed over her pumping hand. The elder twin drew his head back, his shuddering breath wisping over Jan's sensitized clit as she gently pulled every drop from his length, her passage clenched tightly around his still stroking fingers. He shifted his head from between her thighs, moving to settle her legs back down on the bed as he slowly propped himself on one elbow.

Elrohir released Janessa's mouth, allowing her to take several deep breaths as she stroked his twin to completion, watching her face as she gazed deeply into Elrohir's eyes. The younger twin shifted slightly away as he felt the bed shift as Elladan moved to sit up. Elrohir watched as the other two's eyes met, both Jan and 'Dan bringing their hands to their lips to lick the other's essence from the digits.

Elladan smiled at Janessa as he slowly rose from the bed to retrieve a wash cloth, flicking his eyes in Elrohir's direction momentarily. Janessa followed 'Dan's gaze, locking eyes with Elrohir who was breathing shallowly, watching her lick the elder twin's seed from her fingers one at a time. Elladan withheld a laugh from across the room as 'Ro held his breath, raptly watching Jan take her entire middle finger in her mouth, drawing the digit in and out, a wanton look fixed on the younger twin.

Janessa finished cleaning off her hand, her hooded gaze leveled at Elrohir. A slow smile curved her mouth as she noticed 'Ro's held breath and sat up, reaching out to slide her fingers through the younger twin's satin locks. When Elrohir turned his face into her touch she grasped a handful of hair and pulled his mouth to hers, kissing him with wanton abandon.

Elrohir answered her by twisting onto his back, pulling the redhead down on top of him. 'Ro caught hold of her hips, arching up to rub his throbbing length against her abdomen. Jan smiled against his lips, responding with a swirl of her own hips. Elrohir groaned as Janessa evaded his lips, dropping her head to nip along the curve of his neck, one of her hands rising to trace the tip of his ear.

Elladan watched the redhead reduce his twin to wanton moans as she engaged 'Ro's ears with her fingers. She played the sensitive areas like musical instruments until the younger elf was lifting them both off the bed, arching up with need. As Elrohir's body fell back to the pallet 'Dan's eyes widened in shock as Jan slid down the younger twin's body to swallow 'Ro's weeping arousal in one movement. The elder twin discovered a tightening in his loins as he observed Jan sucking his mirror image.

Elrohir practically screamed as Janessa released his ears and moved down his body, taking his entire length in her hot mouth in one stroke. He buried his hands in her fiery hair as she remained where she was and he felt her tongue stud sliding from side to side along his base. The younger twin nearly lost his tenuous at best control as Jan hollowed her cheeks and sucked as she drew her lips up his length.

Elladan drew closer to the bed, remaining in the shadows, the stirring in his groin increasing as he watched Janessa ravenously suckle his twin's length. Several seconds later it became clear to the elder elf that the woman was determined to bring the already frustrated younger elf to completion soonest though he could not ascertain the source of her haste. 'Dan slowly stroked himself in time to his twin's cries as 'Ro arched up off the bed again, this time completely losing himself. Elladan circled the head of his arousal with his thumb as he watched Jan's throat work, sucking Elrohir dry.

Elrohir lost his senses as Janessa bobbed up and down his length, occasionally dragging her teeth lightly across his sensitized skin. Faster than he ever thought possible, the redhead brought him to the brink and over, his hands twisting in her hair as he arched up off the bed, keening wantonly. His body shook as she carefully swallowed every drop of his essence. He sighed as he melted beneath her touch.

Janessa eagerly swallowed as Elrohir came in her mouth, the taste of salted butter registering in the back of her mind. She did not stop sucking as the final spasm ran through 'Ro's length. The redhead was not quite done with either elf yet, wanting to try out something that had entered her mind not long before. Janessa drew her tongue up Elrohir's softening length, wrenching cries from the spent elf as she carefully, slowly brought the younger twin back to full arousal.

Elladan gasped as Janessa did not cease her ministrations upon 'Ro's completion, instead teasing the younger twin back to attention. The elder twin's eyes met Janessa's heated gaze as she turned her head, searching for Elladan within the room's shifting shadows. 'Dan caught his breath as the light of the flickering candles danced across Jan's hair, making it appear to flame with every move. The elder twin answered her silent call, padding the rest of the way back to the bed.

Elrohir caught sight of his twin moving through the shadowed room when Janessa released him to silently invite the elder twin to join them. The younger twin's attention focused back on the redhead as she gazed down upon his form with open appreciation, clear desire flickering in her eyes as she watched his length sway slightly in time to his heartbeat. 'Ro caught his breath when Jan slid forward as the pallet shifted with Elladan's return.

Janessa turned back to the gasping elf beneath her once she had caught Elladan's gaze, silently imploring him to join them upon the pallet. Jan smiled at Elrohir's attention focused entirely on her. The redhead waited until she felt the bed dip with the addition of 'Dan's weight. She shifted forward until she sat straddling 'Ro's hips. Jan waited until she felt the elder twin settle behind her before kneeling up only to impale herself upon Elrohir's pulsing arousal.

Elladan nipped at Janessa's neck as he slid his hands over her hips while she rode Elrohir for several moments, the younger twin flexing his hips to thrust up into her warmth, the movement rubbing her bottom enticingly against the elder twin's own hardened length. Both elves groaned as Jan slid off 'Ro's arousal, the woman leaning forward to claim the younger twin's mouth in a searing kiss.

The move presented the redhead's dripping entrance to Elladan's gaze, eliciting a low rumble of desire from the elder twin. 'Dan caught 'Ro's eyes as the elder twin ran his hands over Janessa's warm skin. "Ay woman, you know just how to undo us."

Elrohir released Janessa's lips, looking deeply into the redhead's dilated orbs, "May we…?" Janessa cut off the question, answering it by recapturing his mouth, pulling 'Ro's tongue into her mouth, sucking enticingly. The redhead shifted her hips to rub against Elladan's throbbing length.

Interpreting her affirmative answer Elladan shifted forward, burying his entire length in her folds with one stroke. Janessa released Elrohir's mouth to bury her face against the curve of the younger twin's neck as the elder twin drove into her wet passage again and again before withdrawing. Janessa responded by shifting back down onto Elrohir's length, both groaning at the renewed sensations.

Elrohir pulled Janessa down against his chest as Elladan knelt behind her. The elder twin gently spread her cheeks, slowly pressing his slicked length into the incredibly tight channel until he was sheathed to the hilt. Elladan dropped his forehead against Janessa's back, taking several calming breaths, suddenly understanding just how much self control Elrohir had exerted earlier.

Elladan raised his head, meeting Elrohir's gaze. Unspoken communication passed between them for a moment while they all caught their breath. Elrohir spoke softly into Janessa's ear, "Straighten your left leg. We know a better way to do this." Janessa silently complied as Elladan rested his weight against her back and his right leg. Both twins reached out to grip the other's waist before shifting to Elladan and Janessa's left, dropping the entangled trio onto their sides with a thump.

Janessa cried out as the movement shifted the twins' positions within her, driving them more deeply into her depths. Instinctively she wrapped her right leg around Elrohir's hip. The younger twin shifted his arms up around Jan's shoulders, Elladan wrapping his about her waist. Janessa's left hand was trapped, pressed palm flat against Elrohir's chest. She slid her right hand back and around to grip Elladan's ass.

Once positioned, Elrohir captured Janessa's mouth, Elladan latching onto her exposed neck, leaving another mark. The elder twin moved first, shifting back only to thrust deeply back into the redhead. Elrohir moved counter to his brother, thrusting as the other withdrew, the elves setting a similar rhythm to the one they had employed earlier.

Janessa shook with the renewed sensations thoroughly enjoying the feeling of being dually pierced by the passionate pair. The two elves moved with care, ever aware of the woman's comfort level. The twins set a slow, leisurely pace, letting the tension mount slowly, drawing out every sensation as Jan's hands clutched reflexively against their skin.

Due to the relaxed position, the pair were able to hold out longer than they had prior with the quivering redhead sandwiched between them and their need for release great. The twins made slow thorough love to the precious female, treasuring every second, committing each moment to memory, still disbelieving she had actually accepted and returned both their affections. Respect and friendship had grown into something more, beyond simple desire only to be confirmed and solidified in this tender moment the trio shared.

Elladan and Elrohir wondered at the sense of completeness, of rightness they felt not just at being wrapped in Janessa's warmth but at the presence of the other twin. There was something intrinsically different about this joining, the meaning eluding them at the moment. Moving as one, the two changed pace again, both slowly entering and withdrawing in tandem, their speed increasing in agonizingly slow increments.

Janessa felt completely safe as she never had before. Cocooned between the two deceptively powerful elves she felt her ever-present wariness slip away, placing her absolute trust in the twin warriors that they would not let anything happen to her. Jan fleetingly wondered that she felt the same for both elves. Half-aware she realized the pair were truly two sides of the same coin, incomplete without the other. Never before had she willingly allowed anyone to take her as she had allowed and even maneuvered them to. Somehow, some way the three of them together just… worked.

All three began to breathe heavily as the twins increased their pace, thrusting in earnest as Janessa began to rotate her hips between them, driving them all closer to the edge with the added friction. The twins' movements were still gentle as the trio came together, a languid orgasm breaking over them like a softly rolling wave that left them trembling in its wake, Janessa's convulsing inner muscles drawing every drop from the twins' softening lengths.

Not wishing to lose the reassuring feeling of fullness she was experiencing Janessa shook her head as she perceived the two raven elves about to withdraw. "Please," she said simply. More than willing to indulge the fiery beauty the two moved imperceptibly closer, whispering endearments in Sindarin in her ears as the woman's eyes slowly drooped shut. Only once they felt Jan's body completely relax and her breathing even out did the twins allow themselves to drift gradually into contented revere, small smiles gracing both elves' lips.

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A/N: I apologize for the delay. For those of you who have been keeping up with developments I got the job I've been waiting to hear about and an in full-time training for the next 6 weeks so updates will be a bit slower in coming.

On other topics I have several new fics in the works (yes, more of em) so look for these coming soon:

For Thine is the Glory: Glorfindel had been single since his rebirth, a face from his previous life still haunting his dreams until the woman from Legolas' visions stepped out of fantasy and into the flesh. (Parallel fic to My Twisted Road to Life)

If You Love Something…: Legolas had crossed a line and Janessa had left him to visit Lothlorien with Elrond's sons and "sort things out." (Companion fic to The Crux of the Problem addressing Legolas' POV from that story)

Mine is Bigger Than Yours…: Haldir and Glorfindel decide to find out definitively who is the better elf… (Humor one-shot based on another whacked-out IM conversation with my psycho friends)
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