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Twice The View

By: Jennygirl
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Rating: Adult ++
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chapter 4

Disclaimer: As always Tolkien still own all LOTR and I own nothing except an over active imagination.


Note: I wasn't going to write another chapter right away but this idea just would not go away.

Thank you all who have reviewed so far I hope you continue to do so.

(PJ keep reading the ending might surprise you :) )...

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Chapter 4.

Enelya forced her eyes back up to meet his. He motioned for her to enter. Part of her was telling her to excuse herself , another part was telling her to enter....

Which part should she listen to?


Knowing she needed to decide Enelya quickly ran both choices through her mind. She could enter the room, find out if indeed the twins took after their father at the same time fulfill this newest fantasy of hers. Or she could apologize and turn around, hope he would eventually forget.
" Come my dear." Her attention once again towards the Lord of Imladris as he spoke. " I do not bite"
Enelya was uncertain as to whether she was please at this or slightly disappointed.

Elrond could not keep in a soft chuckle as he lightly took Enelya's hand and led her into the room with him. He knew her to be the one he had seen the same day he and Elladan had seen Elrohir emerging from behind a tree. The look that had been in his youngest son's eyes had spoken volumes.
He could understand the uncertainty in her eyes. He knew it had to do with who he was. It was not difficult to know what she was thinking.
He knew all to well of Elladan and Elrohir's conquests of many of the Maidens that resided in Rivendell. What had surprised him was that each on had again searched for her after that one time. He had heard them talking about it and it had intrigued him.
Enelya tried to calm herself. She had seen him take her hand, knew he had lead her into the room yet it had been the door softly closing behind her that made her realize that she was now completely in the room with one very naked Elf Lord.
Had this not been what she had thought about? Had she not wondered what it would be like with Elrond? If so why was she feeling so.... guilty?

Elrond was not well know for having patience. If she was not going to decided then he would make the decision. He would never force her of course but that did not stop him from giving her a small taste of what he was capable.
He knew a little of what she was capable of. The twins had spared no detail during this discussion. It had been by accident that he had come to hear the conversation. Hearing the tale form each had left him hard and curious.
Having her stand before him know he could see what had intrigued his sons in the first place. Taking a step closer towards her brought him close enough to see how nervous she was yet she made no attempt to move.
Elrond placed on hand behind him having it rest against the lower ear of his back. His other hand slowly moving up Enelya's arm, over her shoulder ,tilting her head back to expose her neck. He could see her breathing change yet she still did not resist him.
Watching her as his hand now slid over her neck, moving down slowly over her chest. Cupping a breast over the material of her dress, feeling how the nipple hardened instantly. He heard a soft whimper escape her..yet still no resistance.

Enelya tired to concentrate only on breathing yet the gentle touch of his hand moving up her arm was making it hard. The soft way he trailed his hand over her shoulder, her eyes closed as his hand tilted her head back. Her breathing changed, quickened, deepened when his hand moved slowly over her neck moving down across her chest.
Knowing he heard how she had whimpered as he cupped her breast. His soft caress had braught her nipple to life. His touch was gentle, slow, like Elladan's had been yet some how seemed different. There was something more to his touch something that could only come with.. experience.

Keeping his hand moving across her body,Elrond now cupped the other breast. Like before he felt a nipple harden under his touch. His other hand still behind his back.
Moving his hand to the lace that held together the front of her dress, slowly he began to untie each lace exposing more of her flesh in by inch.
Intrigued by the way she still had not resisted. It had been a different experience for either twin, with Elrohir she had given him the control yet Elladan had the control taken from him.
Elrond wondered if she had somehow sensed what each one had wanted, perhaps she could feel their need, that maybe each of their experience with her had been so different due to the fact that she had catered to each of their needs, If so this would prove to be very interesting for him as well.
Pushing the material from her watching as it fell silently at her feet. Slowly taking in every inch of her before taking her hand and leading them both over to the bath.
" you are very lovely my dear" Her blush amused him " I see now what it was that interested my sons"

Enelya knew there was eed eed to reply. She was not sure she would of been able to. Her breathing was still to return to normal. She doubted however that it would as long as she was in his company. Both fully naked.
She gave him no resistance as he had her sit along the side of the bath. Leaning back so she needed to use her arms to support her. Now watching him as he slowly knelt before her, one hand resting on her leg, he reached over taking the cloth into his hand.
She could not avoid the sharp intake of breath as he brought the wet cloth to her skin. His mouth seemed to have found hers, his tongue moving over her lips till she parted them for him, The cloth seemed to glide easily over her breasts , The warm water seemed to harden her nipples even more.


Slowly her caressed her tongue with his, one hand now behind her neck as he continued to move the cloth over her with the other. The need for air forced him to pull back, his own breathing matching hers, his desire now obvious.
Wetting the cloth once more, he gently ran it up her leg across her stomach then over to the other leg. Releasing his hold on her neck he brought his hand to her breast, Her hard nipples now to much to ignore. He liked the way she shivered as he ran a finger over a nipple. Then again as he took a nipple into his mouth, pinning it between his lips as his tongue ever so slowly moved in circles over it.


Enelya could not help but enjoy the feeling that course through her. The slow way he sucked her nipples was intense, The way he slowly would move from one to the other giving each one equal attention.
The feel of warm water between her legs only slightly startled her. The soft cloth being slowly pulled along her heated center awakened her desire.
Tilting her head back with a soft moan Enelya knew he had brought her past the point of now return. Her breathing only deepened when she felt his lips on her stomach, Her anticipation growing as he slowly knelt before her, still using the cloth to caress her.
She was a getting anxious to have his mouth on her, to have him take her moist flesh into his mouth. She moaned as he placed the cloth just above her intimate center causing water to cascade down between her legs, Her eyes closed slowly as she felt him bring himself closer, a hand on each side of her inner thighs.
Enelya cried out when instead of feeling his mouth on her she felt his warm breath. It sent a shiver through her entire body.
She had wanted him to suck the flesh yet having him blowing soft on it was also pleasing. He continued to wet the cloth then again have the water fall between her legs then would gently blow on her again.

Elrond found her sweet scent to be quite intoxicating, the sound of her soft moans every time he blew gently upon the now swollen flesh. He held back the urge to taste her just yet. He intended to bring her as close to the edge as possible first. Dropping the cloth into the water her brought his hand to her, using his fingers to caress her outer folds, continuing to blow gently along her wetness.
The soft cry, the sudden arch of her back told him just how close she was. Pulling his hand back he lightly brought his lips to her just enough to barely touch her. Keeping his mouth lightly on her his tongue searched slowly over her outer folds finding her opening.
With a sudden quick movement he pushed his tongue into her, his mouth now pressed hard against her.

Enelya gave a sudden cry or pleasure, Elrond had brought her to the edge, slowly, teasingly. Then in one quick move he had pushed her past her limit. She could not hold it back, She had exploded the instant his mouth had suddenly clamped down on her.
She had fallen back. Now lying against the cold floor as Elrond continued to lick her warm juice.
Enelya gave a disappointed moan as she felt him pull away from. Her disappointed did not last long when he placed himself above her. Only the tip of his hair wet, She could feel how hard he was as his member rested between her legs, again her desire awakened.

Knowing he could no longer fight his own desire, The way her hips moved under him only caused his need to grow even more. His earlier thoughst returned as she seemed to knxactxactly how he wanted her to move, The slowly way she rocked her hips causing her to rub against his erection had been exactly what he wanted her to do.
Capturing her mouth with his, a deep moan escaping him as she gently bit his bottom lip. He had not felt her hand move till he felt it lightly pinching the tip of his ear, his most sensitive spot.
Slowly he pulled himself back, lowering his head he took a nipple into his mouth, reaching between them to place himself at her opening.

Enelya ached to have him fill her, to feel him enter her, feel how she adjusted to his size as he worked his way completely into her. She felt him insert just the head of his hard shaft into her, giving a deep moan of frustration when he held himself there, giving her nipple his undivided attention.
"Please" Her voice soft yet laced with need.
Another moan escaping when Elrond pushed a little further into her only to pull back again. Enelya now knew what swteasteasing torture felt like.
" Heruamin,(my lord) Please."
Her plea heard, as before proved useless. Elrond continued his slow teasing entry. Inserting himself further into her with each gentle thrust then would pull back slightly, only to repeat it.

By the time Elrond was completely buried within her depths they were both close to exploding. He could feel how tight she had become around him. Her inner walls now closed tightly over him. His need to tease, to use her own need as torture had also teased him
Now no longer able to contain himself, his control gone. Elrond thrusted deeper, faster, harder. His deep moan echoed through the room when she met his thrusts with some of her own. He felt his member swell painfully as she reached her release first, Her cries ringing in his ears as her juice flowed from her, covering his already slick member even more.
His own release erug, hg, his seed pumping into her endlessly. He captured her mouth in a deep kiss once they had been able to once again breath.....

"Enelya?" Elladan placed a hand gently on her face. He gave a smile hoping to cover up the relief he felt when he saw her eyes were now opened.
Enelya looked around in confusion, vaguely aware that Elladan was pulling her to her feet. Her hair fell wet against her face made her realize it was raining.
"Lle tyava quel?(do you feel well?)" The worry in Elladan's voice did not go unnoticed to her.
"I am fine" She nodded as she placed a hand gently on his cheek in assurance.
Taking another look around she noticed she had been sitting at the base of a large tree. Seeing the towel and Lavender oils now at her feet, everything suddenly came back to her......



***Enelya forced her eyes back up to meet his. He motioned for her to enter. Part of her was telling her to excuse herself , another part was telling her to enter....

Which part should she listen to?

"Excuse my My Lord" Enelya looked away, bowing slightly in respect " I had not known anyone was in here"
" There is no harm done, child" Elrond had replied calmly. She nodded and closed the door as she left the room. She could hear his chuckle as she leaned against it***

Not missing the confused look Elladan was giving her, she laughed softly. It had been nothing but a dream. One she would long remember.
" It had been your mother that sent me to search for you" Elladan brushed the wet hair from her eyes. "Seems you had vanished"
" I fell asleep." She could not resist the urge to wrap her arms around his neck, smiling when he in turn wrapped his around her waist.
" Tell me" He kissed her softly "what put you in such a good mood"
Enelya smiled then kissed him passionately, slipping her tongue into his mouth. Leaving him breath hard once the kiss ended.
" I merely realized that sometimes it is better the let the fantasy remain a fantasy."
Elladan was given no chance to reply before Enelya kissed him again. Neither one of them cared about the rain, nor about the Elves that now were watching them....

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Note: A little longer then I expected..... I was dared (by Aragornsfavorite) to see if I could have Enelya experience Elrond while not actually experiencing Elrond ( I hope that made sense) It was how I came up with this idea.. I hope you all enjoyed this. Please remember to review..

Jen
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