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Adult +
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Chapter 28
A/N: Forgive me for not update for so much - I was busy - writing at National Novel Writing in Month - and I WON! So my Novel which is not finish, will start post at Jan08.
For Disclaimer and Summary checked in previous chapters.
Beta: Tena
BS28
Lord Elrond watched the elfling on the bed, then his eyes turned to his son’s bed, watching him as well with a heavy concern.
“Nana…” Princeling Greenleaf called.
Lord Elrond was near his bed sitting in the chair, as he watched the princeling as he mumbled, and his head moved from side to side.
The healer moved his hand to the princeling’s brow, and he could feel a heavy heat that radiated from the small body.
Lord Elrond understood now why the princeling had not yet healed; the fever that was in the elfling’s body might be caused by a severe infection or the poison might still be in his body.
He sighed heavily and tried to get the elfling’s respond, “Greenleaf?” he needed him to drink an herbs tea as soon as possible, so he could check the wound he had, or let him at least drinking enough tea to remove all the poison that might be left in his body.
Though the only response from the elfling, “Nana… help… me…”
Elrond wondered what was on the elfling’s mind. He was so deeply busy with that line of thought, that when he heard his own son, it almost caused him to jump.
“Ada?” Elladan asked with deep concern, as he watched his Adar staring down at his friend form without moving.
Elrond turned to his son, observing his condition, he asked, “How are you doing, ion-nin?”
Elladan only nodded, his eyes were locked on his friend’s form, “How is he?”
“Worst than he was before, my son.” Elrond replied, “The poison is still in his body, and both of us need him to know that he should fight hard against the poison, and not let the black fill his body, we need to make sure that he is drinking lots of herb tea.”
Elladan left the bed slowly as he tried to get his balance back. He gathered himself together, sighed heavily after taking a deep breath, and then he walked toward Legolas’ bed. He observed for the first time the wounds, scratches that covered the elfling’s form. He could tell Legolas was not healing as he should.
Elladan leaned down, thinking that he heard something and noticed that his Adar came near him, and hearing the way Legolas was breathing.
The princeling seemed to gasp for air as he started to struggle.
Elladan did not wish to lose time as he leant closer to the princeling’s ear, and told him with firm, but shaky voice, “Fight, mellon-nin, you have to fight.”
Elrond smiled a bit for his son’s action, and said nothing as Legolas still gasped for air, and he started to pray for Namo, the Lord of Mandos Halls, to let go of the princeling’s body, as he was needed in his family and friends.
Elladan heard the prayer, and continued to tell to his friend to fight, “Your Adar needs you as much as you need him, mellon-nin, and Estel, Elrohir and I miss you as our best friend, and Ada loves you like his own son, as brother to us… please mellon-nin, fight against the poison, as you are most needed.”
Greenleaf heard the blurry voice through the dark fog in his mind; he really tried to hear it clearly, though the fog came closer and closer to his mind, and he did not know how to stop it.
The voice kept reaching to his ears, listening to the voice, soft and yet determined voice calling him, and blurrily he heard the words, ‘fight’, and ‘your Adar loves you’, but he still was not seemed to know their meaning as his stomach hurt, his whole body hurt.
Elrond took notice when he saw the princeling move his head from side to side; and open his mouth like he is going to say something. Yet, not a sound came from Legolas.
The lord watched how his son worked non- stop to keep the elfling from giving up, as he kept asking him to fight. Elrond smiled and the pride that he had for his son grew more and more. He would tell Elladan how proud he was when the time was right.
“Ada?” Elladan called as he noticed his Adar’s eyes lay upon his face.
Elrond shook his head, and stared at his son, waiting him to continue.
“Is something wrong, Ada?” Elladan asked as he scanned his Adar face.
“Everything is all right, and you are doing good by letting Legolas know that he is not alone.” Elrond replied with a smile.
“But Ada,” Elladan started to say, “He does not seemed to acknowledge my words, how could you say that I am doing good?”
Elrond sighed heavily, “You are doing good. I tried to reach him, but he barely moved or stirred, and as you kept telling him to fight, he moved his head and opened his mouth like he wanted to say something…”
Elladan remembered the words that left from Greenleaf’s mouth, “But he did say something Ada, he called for his Nana to help him.”
Elrond moved closer to his son and clasped Elladan shoulders, and waited for him to do the same.
Elladan clasped his hands upon his Adar’s shoulders and stared at his Adar’s eyes, not knowing why and what the lord wished to do next.
“Elladan, ion, do not lay on despair in the beginning, if you have hope let Princeling Greenleaf see it too. If you lost hope, he could sense your voice and not even bother to fight, you must have the faith and hope so he could fight nevertheless the demons of the poison, and to vanish it fast from his body,” Elrond stopped and his eyes kept locked on him, watching for understanding “We would make certain that he would have to fight, and that we have a lot of faith and hope in him, all right?”
Elladan swallowed and he understood his Adar’s words. He did realized that he had lost the hope to see his friend back again, laughing in that moment that he barely got any respond from him.
“I understand, Ada, and we will not let him have any chance to give up and let the poison took control on his body,” Elladan replied and then he added with cheerful voice, “I will cheer him up, telling him of what troubles my brothers ran into, as he might only needs to hear the stories, to let him know that he is not alone while you will give into him some of your herbs tea to at least give him another source of power that he would fight against the poison and the demons inside.”
Elrond smiled, and squeezed his son’s shoulders.
“Hannon-le, Adar, for your words. I suppose that I did lose my hope at that moment.” Elladan admitted.
BS28
The search party hurried over to the screaming.
Elrohir’s heartbeat faster and faster, scared of the screaming. His mind started to pull on thoughts of the worst-case scenario of what would cause that cold-blooded scream to be.
After the line of trees, they finally saw the orcs covering a small form; their mouths were filled with blood, lots of blood.
Thranduil watched Elrohir as he did noticed the orcs with their mouths filled with the red liquid. He wished to say anything to ease the pain and the hurt that been laid upon the elf who seemed frozen in place, but he did not know of what he should say.
End of Chapter 28.
For Disclaimer and Summary checked in previous chapters.
Beta: Tena
BS28
Lord Elrond watched the elfling on the bed, then his eyes turned to his son’s bed, watching him as well with a heavy concern.
“Nana…” Princeling Greenleaf called.
Lord Elrond was near his bed sitting in the chair, as he watched the princeling as he mumbled, and his head moved from side to side.
The healer moved his hand to the princeling’s brow, and he could feel a heavy heat that radiated from the small body.
Lord Elrond understood now why the princeling had not yet healed; the fever that was in the elfling’s body might be caused by a severe infection or the poison might still be in his body.
He sighed heavily and tried to get the elfling’s respond, “Greenleaf?” he needed him to drink an herbs tea as soon as possible, so he could check the wound he had, or let him at least drinking enough tea to remove all the poison that might be left in his body.
Though the only response from the elfling, “Nana… help… me…”
Elrond wondered what was on the elfling’s mind. He was so deeply busy with that line of thought, that when he heard his own son, it almost caused him to jump.
“Ada?” Elladan asked with deep concern, as he watched his Adar staring down at his friend form without moving.
Elrond turned to his son, observing his condition, he asked, “How are you doing, ion-nin?”
Elladan only nodded, his eyes were locked on his friend’s form, “How is he?”
“Worst than he was before, my son.” Elrond replied, “The poison is still in his body, and both of us need him to know that he should fight hard against the poison, and not let the black fill his body, we need to make sure that he is drinking lots of herb tea.”
Elladan left the bed slowly as he tried to get his balance back. He gathered himself together, sighed heavily after taking a deep breath, and then he walked toward Legolas’ bed. He observed for the first time the wounds, scratches that covered the elfling’s form. He could tell Legolas was not healing as he should.
Elladan leaned down, thinking that he heard something and noticed that his Adar came near him, and hearing the way Legolas was breathing.
The princeling seemed to gasp for air as he started to struggle.
Elladan did not wish to lose time as he leant closer to the princeling’s ear, and told him with firm, but shaky voice, “Fight, mellon-nin, you have to fight.”
Elrond smiled a bit for his son’s action, and said nothing as Legolas still gasped for air, and he started to pray for Namo, the Lord of Mandos Halls, to let go of the princeling’s body, as he was needed in his family and friends.
Elladan heard the prayer, and continued to tell to his friend to fight, “Your Adar needs you as much as you need him, mellon-nin, and Estel, Elrohir and I miss you as our best friend, and Ada loves you like his own son, as brother to us… please mellon-nin, fight against the poison, as you are most needed.”
Greenleaf heard the blurry voice through the dark fog in his mind; he really tried to hear it clearly, though the fog came closer and closer to his mind, and he did not know how to stop it.
The voice kept reaching to his ears, listening to the voice, soft and yet determined voice calling him, and blurrily he heard the words, ‘fight’, and ‘your Adar loves you’, but he still was not seemed to know their meaning as his stomach hurt, his whole body hurt.
Elrond took notice when he saw the princeling move his head from side to side; and open his mouth like he is going to say something. Yet, not a sound came from Legolas.
The lord watched how his son worked non- stop to keep the elfling from giving up, as he kept asking him to fight. Elrond smiled and the pride that he had for his son grew more and more. He would tell Elladan how proud he was when the time was right.
“Ada?” Elladan called as he noticed his Adar’s eyes lay upon his face.
Elrond shook his head, and stared at his son, waiting him to continue.
“Is something wrong, Ada?” Elladan asked as he scanned his Adar face.
“Everything is all right, and you are doing good by letting Legolas know that he is not alone.” Elrond replied with a smile.
“But Ada,” Elladan started to say, “He does not seemed to acknowledge my words, how could you say that I am doing good?”
Elrond sighed heavily, “You are doing good. I tried to reach him, but he barely moved or stirred, and as you kept telling him to fight, he moved his head and opened his mouth like he wanted to say something…”
Elladan remembered the words that left from Greenleaf’s mouth, “But he did say something Ada, he called for his Nana to help him.”
Elrond moved closer to his son and clasped Elladan shoulders, and waited for him to do the same.
Elladan clasped his hands upon his Adar’s shoulders and stared at his Adar’s eyes, not knowing why and what the lord wished to do next.
“Elladan, ion, do not lay on despair in the beginning, if you have hope let Princeling Greenleaf see it too. If you lost hope, he could sense your voice and not even bother to fight, you must have the faith and hope so he could fight nevertheless the demons of the poison, and to vanish it fast from his body,” Elrond stopped and his eyes kept locked on him, watching for understanding “We would make certain that he would have to fight, and that we have a lot of faith and hope in him, all right?”
Elladan swallowed and he understood his Adar’s words. He did realized that he had lost the hope to see his friend back again, laughing in that moment that he barely got any respond from him.
“I understand, Ada, and we will not let him have any chance to give up and let the poison took control on his body,” Elladan replied and then he added with cheerful voice, “I will cheer him up, telling him of what troubles my brothers ran into, as he might only needs to hear the stories, to let him know that he is not alone while you will give into him some of your herbs tea to at least give him another source of power that he would fight against the poison and the demons inside.”
Elrond smiled, and squeezed his son’s shoulders.
“Hannon-le, Adar, for your words. I suppose that I did lose my hope at that moment.” Elladan admitted.
BS28
The search party hurried over to the screaming.
Elrohir’s heartbeat faster and faster, scared of the screaming. His mind started to pull on thoughts of the worst-case scenario of what would cause that cold-blooded scream to be.
After the line of trees, they finally saw the orcs covering a small form; their mouths were filled with blood, lots of blood.
Thranduil watched Elrohir as he did noticed the orcs with their mouths filled with the red liquid. He wished to say anything to ease the pain and the hurt that been laid upon the elf who seemed frozen in place, but he did not know of what he should say.
End of Chapter 28.