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Category:
-Multi-Age › General
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
23
Views:
9,636
Reviews:
67
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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I do not own the Lord of the Rings (and associated) book series, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
Brotherly Love
**AN** Okay here’s the next part. I’m really sorry about how long it takes me to update. I won’t blame it all on college; part of it is just plain writer’s block. One day I’ll think I know what I’m going to write next, and then something else comes into my mind that is totally unconnected from the first thing. Ahhh, okay you probably don’t care, so I’ll just apologize and quit there.
Also thank you so much to those of you who reviewed and encouraged me! You don’t know how much I appreciate it!
**Not far from Imladris**
“It’s possible that even the dwarves have more intelligence then you.”
“Well you would know, after all you are infatuated with one.”
“She’s not a dwarf.”
“Right and I’m a balrog.”
“Well maybe you are. We should ask Glorfindel.”
“Fine.”
“GLORFINDEL!!”
“I DON’T CARE! WHATEVER IT IS! DON’T TALK TO ME!”
“I think he’s in a bad mood.”
“Really? What was your first clue? You always make him angry.”
“Me? It isn’t my fault; it was obviously you who angered him.”
“I did no such thing.”
“You definitely did.”
“Did not.”
“Did.”
“Hey I didn’t know Glorfindel could turn that particular shade of red.”
“Oh, I’ve seen that color before. Remember when he fell down the steps three years ago during the festival? He was that color then.”
“Brother, you seem to be forgetting that he tripped over the string we put there.”
“I didn’t forget. I was just saying that I remember the color.”
“You know, doesn’t father have a throw pillow that color?”
“I think he does. Hmm I wish we could compare the two.”
“Wait a second, look he’s turning purple now.”
“Hmm, what does that remind you of?”
“Well, Arwen has a dress that color don’t you think?”
“The long one with the white ribbons?”
“No not that one. The one with the white tassels.”
“Now I know, the one that she wore on your last conception day?”
“Yes, that one.”
“You don’t think that’s a little light compared to his face?”
“On second thought, you’re right. He’s more of a purple red now anyways.”
“True. He’s breathing a little hard don’t you think? After all, we’ve only been traveling for an hour.”
“Well he is old you know. Don’t you have any respect for your elders?”
“Of course I do. How old is he anyways?”
“I’m not really sure. How old was he when he died?”
“How should I know? I didn’t pay attention during history class.”
“You didn’t pay attention? Then how come you always got the answers right?”
“I just memorized whatever father said and then said it right back to him. Of course if he had asked me a week later, I wouldn’t have known.”
“Why didn’t you ever tell me how to do that!? I always got in trouble for not studying!”
“Well you never asked, you orc.”
“I’m not an orc.”
“Are too.”
“Am not.”
“Are too.”
“Am not.”
“Okay you aren’t.”
“Thank you.”
“You’re a goblin.”
“Have you even ever seen a goblin?”
“Of course I have. Remember the last time we went to visit Lothlorien?”
“Yeah so?”
“Remember when Glorfindel told us not to go far and we did anyways and we saw those strange eyes looking at us?”
“That was a goblin?”
“That’s what grandmother said.”
“Well I guess she would know.”
“What’s that supposed to mean?”
“What do you mean? It doesn’t mean anything.”
“Oh wait until I tell grandfather you called him a goblin.”
“What are you talking about? I never called him a goblin! I meant that she could see goblins in her mirror you fool.”
“Right, and I’m a balrog.”
“You can’t be a balrog. I think I would know if you were. I mean we are identical.”
“In body yes, in mind not even close. My intelligence is far superior then yours.”
“Is not.”
“Is so.”
“Is not.”
“Is so.”
“Is it time for lunch yet?”
“I don’t know. Why would I know? Am I leading this little party? I don’t think so.”
“Well who is leading if it isn’t you?”
“I guess Glorfindel.”
“Why does he get to lead? Can’t I lead?”
“I don’t care. Why do you always ask me these stupid questions?”
“They aren’t stupid. You’re stupid.”
“I am not.”
“You are so.”
“Well I just wanted to know if we could stop for lunch.”
“Ask Glorfy.”
“Haha! Glorfy! I like it.”
“GLORFY IS IT TIME FOR LUNCH YET???!!!”
“FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS SACRED, GET AWAY FROM ME!!!”
“Oh now look whau diu did.”
“What I did?”
“Yes.”
“Oh that was all you.”
“Was not.”
“Was too.”
“Was not!”
**AN** Okay I just thought that we needed a little comic relief in there….. and of course I wanted to be evil again and make you wait to find out what was happening with the party from Mirkwood, and Legolas’ new admirer. I hope you review, as always! I’ve also decided to start responding to reviewers personally (Those on ff.net as well as aff.net) So I apologize if you reviewed earlier but I never said thank you or answered your questions. You’ll just have to review again!
Lady of Legolas: I know cliffies are evil!! I just was in an evil mood! Thanks for reviewing!
Tica: Well I’m glad you think it’s a good story. I’m sorry I had to result to such evil tactics, I just wanted to see if anyone was still reading! Thanks for reviewing!
Ivorybrowneyes: Yes it’s a good enough review for me! Thank you so much!
Angelbird12241: Luimhenn will be in the next chapter, and we’ll see what he does then…. Thanks for reviewing.
Dawn: I totally love Haldir/Legolas stories too! (In case you couldn’t tell by my name and this story!) As for Thranduil, I don’t want to give away anything. I know I portrayed him as mean, but I don’t really think he is either, but he’s managed to get a bad rep, so I just went with it. I did try to stay true to the character’s personalities, although it is difficult, and I’m sure I’m off base on some things. As for two elvish studs…. Hell yeah! Thanks for reviewing.
Arch-Nemesis: Well thanks for not writing the nasty email, and I’m actually touched that you would have…. (if that makes any sense?) And yes Haldir may have some competition, although in my mind, who can compare to Haldir? But we’ll see what Luimhenn does. And yes I know I’m evil for ending the chapter like that! I was in an evil mood! Thanks for reviewing.
Drew’s girl: Thank you so much! I spent a lot of time on that chapter, trying to get it just right. I really appreciate your comments! And I know I was being evil, but I hope you enjoy this chapter, even though you’re still wondering about the group from Mirkwood. Thanks for reviewing.
Nini: Thanks! Here’s the next chapter! Thanks for reviewing.
Slyth_siren: Sorry about that heart attack there. And I will continue this fic no matter what I say, so if I do that again, you can just ignore me. I’m glad you love it, and I feel the same way! Thanks for reviewing.
ReallyDumbBlonde: I hate cliffhangers too. I only put one in there because I was in an evil mood. I’m glad you’re hooked though, and you’ll get to see the delightful competition…. And you’ll also get to see what happens next to Legolas’ siblings! Btw, loving the curse of the day. Lol, yes I also enjoyed all 89 words in the chapter! Thanks for reviewing.
Mirasaui: Indeed the royal family may meet up with trouble. And we’ll see what happens with Luimhenn. You’re right, he may need to watch out…. Luimhenn may be dangerous…. Thanks for reviewing!
Ealhswith of Skye: I know I’m cruel…. And I’d tell you that Haldir and Legolas get together in the end, but I can’t tell you what I don’t know….. Hopefully they will, but my evil mind may tear them apart… Thanks for the encouragement, and thanks for the review!
Breach Cannon all must: I know, evil cliffies!!! Thanks for reviewing!
Celathiel: Man that’s the thiersoerson I almost gave a heart attack…. I guess I had better not scare you guys like that again…*grins evilly* I will continue the story though. And you’ll soon getsee see what happens with Thranduil and the other rulers. Hopefully Legolas will find some peace of mind! We’ll see! Thanks for reviewing!
YamiNoWedge: Lol, yes there are evil beings out there besides you. And I never even thought of that. It’s a good idea, and I’ll consider it. Thanks for the review!
Niere: I’m glad you like my characters. Having siblings myself, I tried to incorporate the love and the bickering this story. And yes I’m cruel! Thanks for reviewing.
Aly: Um does this mean you’re mad that I didn’t tell you what Vorimarao realized? And that I didn’t go back to Thranduil? Uh oh, that means you might be even madder after you read the next chapter…. Thanks for the review!
Kit: I’m glad you like my plot. I know the part about Legolas being hated by his father has been done before, but I tried to put a new spin on it. And of course I did a Haldir/Legolas story because I absolutely love them. Thanks for your review!
Also thank you so much to those of you who reviewed and encouraged me! You don’t know how much I appreciate it!
**Not far from Imladris**
“It’s possible that even the dwarves have more intelligence then you.”
“Well you would know, after all you are infatuated with one.”
“She’s not a dwarf.”
“Right and I’m a balrog.”
“Well maybe you are. We should ask Glorfindel.”
“Fine.”
“GLORFINDEL!!”
“I DON’T CARE! WHATEVER IT IS! DON’T TALK TO ME!”
“I think he’s in a bad mood.”
“Really? What was your first clue? You always make him angry.”
“Me? It isn’t my fault; it was obviously you who angered him.”
“I did no such thing.”
“You definitely did.”
“Did not.”
“Did.”
“Hey I didn’t know Glorfindel could turn that particular shade of red.”
“Oh, I’ve seen that color before. Remember when he fell down the steps three years ago during the festival? He was that color then.”
“Brother, you seem to be forgetting that he tripped over the string we put there.”
“I didn’t forget. I was just saying that I remember the color.”
“You know, doesn’t father have a throw pillow that color?”
“I think he does. Hmm I wish we could compare the two.”
“Wait a second, look he’s turning purple now.”
“Hmm, what does that remind you of?”
“Well, Arwen has a dress that color don’t you think?”
“The long one with the white ribbons?”
“No not that one. The one with the white tassels.”
“Now I know, the one that she wore on your last conception day?”
“Yes, that one.”
“You don’t think that’s a little light compared to his face?”
“On second thought, you’re right. He’s more of a purple red now anyways.”
“True. He’s breathing a little hard don’t you think? After all, we’ve only been traveling for an hour.”
“Well he is old you know. Don’t you have any respect for your elders?”
“Of course I do. How old is he anyways?”
“I’m not really sure. How old was he when he died?”
“How should I know? I didn’t pay attention during history class.”
“You didn’t pay attention? Then how come you always got the answers right?”
“I just memorized whatever father said and then said it right back to him. Of course if he had asked me a week later, I wouldn’t have known.”
“Why didn’t you ever tell me how to do that!? I always got in trouble for not studying!”
“Well you never asked, you orc.”
“I’m not an orc.”
“Are too.”
“Am not.”
“Are too.”
“Am not.”
“Okay you aren’t.”
“Thank you.”
“You’re a goblin.”
“Have you even ever seen a goblin?”
“Of course I have. Remember the last time we went to visit Lothlorien?”
“Yeah so?”
“Remember when Glorfindel told us not to go far and we did anyways and we saw those strange eyes looking at us?”
“That was a goblin?”
“That’s what grandmother said.”
“Well I guess she would know.”
“What’s that supposed to mean?”
“What do you mean? It doesn’t mean anything.”
“Oh wait until I tell grandfather you called him a goblin.”
“What are you talking about? I never called him a goblin! I meant that she could see goblins in her mirror you fool.”
“Right, and I’m a balrog.”
“You can’t be a balrog. I think I would know if you were. I mean we are identical.”
“In body yes, in mind not even close. My intelligence is far superior then yours.”
“Is not.”
“Is so.”
“Is not.”
“Is so.”
“Is it time for lunch yet?”
“I don’t know. Why would I know? Am I leading this little party? I don’t think so.”
“Well who is leading if it isn’t you?”
“I guess Glorfindel.”
“Why does he get to lead? Can’t I lead?”
“I don’t care. Why do you always ask me these stupid questions?”
“They aren’t stupid. You’re stupid.”
“I am not.”
“You are so.”
“Well I just wanted to know if we could stop for lunch.”
“Ask Glorfy.”
“Haha! Glorfy! I like it.”
“GLORFY IS IT TIME FOR LUNCH YET???!!!”
“FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS SACRED, GET AWAY FROM ME!!!”
“Oh now look whau diu did.”
“What I did?”
“Yes.”
“Oh that was all you.”
“Was not.”
“Was too.”
“Was not!”
**AN** Okay I just thought that we needed a little comic relief in there….. and of course I wanted to be evil again and make you wait to find out what was happening with the party from Mirkwood, and Legolas’ new admirer. I hope you review, as always! I’ve also decided to start responding to reviewers personally (Those on ff.net as well as aff.net) So I apologize if you reviewed earlier but I never said thank you or answered your questions. You’ll just have to review again!
Lady of Legolas: I know cliffies are evil!! I just was in an evil mood! Thanks for reviewing!
Tica: Well I’m glad you think it’s a good story. I’m sorry I had to result to such evil tactics, I just wanted to see if anyone was still reading! Thanks for reviewing!
Ivorybrowneyes: Yes it’s a good enough review for me! Thank you so much!
Angelbird12241: Luimhenn will be in the next chapter, and we’ll see what he does then…. Thanks for reviewing.
Dawn: I totally love Haldir/Legolas stories too! (In case you couldn’t tell by my name and this story!) As for Thranduil, I don’t want to give away anything. I know I portrayed him as mean, but I don’t really think he is either, but he’s managed to get a bad rep, so I just went with it. I did try to stay true to the character’s personalities, although it is difficult, and I’m sure I’m off base on some things. As for two elvish studs…. Hell yeah! Thanks for reviewing.
Arch-Nemesis: Well thanks for not writing the nasty email, and I’m actually touched that you would have…. (if that makes any sense?) And yes Haldir may have some competition, although in my mind, who can compare to Haldir? But we’ll see what Luimhenn does. And yes I know I’m evil for ending the chapter like that! I was in an evil mood! Thanks for reviewing.
Drew’s girl: Thank you so much! I spent a lot of time on that chapter, trying to get it just right. I really appreciate your comments! And I know I was being evil, but I hope you enjoy this chapter, even though you’re still wondering about the group from Mirkwood. Thanks for reviewing.
Nini: Thanks! Here’s the next chapter! Thanks for reviewing.
Slyth_siren: Sorry about that heart attack there. And I will continue this fic no matter what I say, so if I do that again, you can just ignore me. I’m glad you love it, and I feel the same way! Thanks for reviewing.
ReallyDumbBlonde: I hate cliffhangers too. I only put one in there because I was in an evil mood. I’m glad you’re hooked though, and you’ll get to see the delightful competition…. And you’ll also get to see what happens next to Legolas’ siblings! Btw, loving the curse of the day. Lol, yes I also enjoyed all 89 words in the chapter! Thanks for reviewing.
Mirasaui: Indeed the royal family may meet up with trouble. And we’ll see what happens with Luimhenn. You’re right, he may need to watch out…. Luimhenn may be dangerous…. Thanks for reviewing!
Ealhswith of Skye: I know I’m cruel…. And I’d tell you that Haldir and Legolas get together in the end, but I can’t tell you what I don’t know….. Hopefully they will, but my evil mind may tear them apart… Thanks for the encouragement, and thanks for the review!
Breach Cannon all must: I know, evil cliffies!!! Thanks for reviewing!
Celathiel: Man that’s the thiersoerson I almost gave a heart attack…. I guess I had better not scare you guys like that again…*grins evilly* I will continue the story though. And you’ll soon getsee see what happens with Thranduil and the other rulers. Hopefully Legolas will find some peace of mind! We’ll see! Thanks for reviewing!
YamiNoWedge: Lol, yes there are evil beings out there besides you. And I never even thought of that. It’s a good idea, and I’ll consider it. Thanks for the review!
Niere: I’m glad you like my characters. Having siblings myself, I tried to incorporate the love and the bickering this story. And yes I’m cruel! Thanks for reviewing.
Aly: Um does this mean you’re mad that I didn’t tell you what Vorimarao realized? And that I didn’t go back to Thranduil? Uh oh, that means you might be even madder after you read the next chapter…. Thanks for the review!
Kit: I’m glad you like my plot. I know the part about Legolas being hated by his father has been done before, but I tried to put a new spin on it. And of course I did a Haldir/Legolas story because I absolutely love them. Thanks for your review!