Fantasy

Disclaimer: I own nothing and no one and the female character has no name as the female reader is supposed to identify herself as the woman in Legolas' arms.


Chapter 10: Mind-Numbing

I think I've teased her long enough. "Your turn."

Her eyes widen with confusion for a second then narrow, an evil grin spreading across her face. Uh oh. Trepidation enters my mind as she slides back along my legs. What is she…? OH SWEET ELBERETH!!! A loud cry escapes my chest. She just swallowed me whole!

My teeth clenched, I breathe shallowly as I watch her hollow her cheeks, moving back up my length. Mandos take me now. I can feel her tongue moving from side to side, teasing me as she sets an agonizingly slow pace. I moan continuously, vocalizing my enjoyment of her actions. Valar, her mouth feels incredible.

I run the fingers of one hand through her hair, the other tracing random patterns across her back. Come on. Faster! I grasp her hair and push down on the back of her head, encouraging her to increase her pace. I groan louder as she resists the pressure, her own plan in mind. Ay! This is sweet torture!

I feel her dart her tongue out, teasing my weeping head while she begins kneading my sac, rolling my balls between her fingers. The feeling is incredibly intense, but heeding her clear wish, I resist the urge to let go and thrust up into her hot mouth. I can feel my thighs tensing with the effort.

She runs her teeth over my sensitive flesh and I lose it. This is too much! I flex my hips upward as I press her head down. She eagerly swallows my turgid length, humming this time.

Not gonna lose it. Not gonna lose it. I keep repeating the phrase over and over, a mantra keeping me barely in control. It's all I can do to hold on, my fingers digging into scalp as she sucks greedily on my head again. I press myself back against the pillows, mouth open, eyes squeezed shut, trying to encourage her with my wordless responses. I howl in frustration as her lips leave my arousal. Don't stop now!

I release her hair as I feel her shift forward, moving up my body. OH MY…! I snap my eyes open, staring up at her, a wordless cry wrenched from me as her slick passage engulfs my pulsing length. I clutch her hips with my hands as she presses down against me, rotating her hips, her fingers tweaking my nipples mercilessly.

I arch up into her, increasing the pressure as she releases a moan of her own, my head thrown back. OY! How much more of this can I take? I look up at her with frank appreciation when she stills her movements. Have I taken on more than I can handle? I don't know what I was expecting, but it wasn't this.

I try to force her to move, attempting to pull her up my length only to have her resist my efforts. I groan as she pulls my hands from her hips, moving them to cover her breasts. I rub my palms across her nipples, kneading the firm mounds.

She leans forward and I sit up, meeting her in the middle to capture her lips. Needing to be even closer, I wrap my arms around her, pulling her against my chest. I can feel her smile against my lips as a rolling rumble rises from my chest, her fingers tracing the tips of my ears, my already throbbing length twitching inside her in response.

I release her lips with a groan, burrowing my face against her neck as she tightens her passage around my arousal, moving extremely slowly up my length. I told her it was her turn. I will not thwart her efforts, but Ay, Valar! This is such sweet torture!

Oh Sweet Elbereth! I reflexively dig my fingers into her back as she rocks to and fro through several strokes, the fluttering of her inner walls telling me how close she is. I alternately moan and gasp as she changes her pace constantly. She's teasing me! Every time I get close to completion she changes it up.

Unable to remain passive, I rain kisses along her neck. Finding a particularly sensitive spot I suck on it, marking her as mine, and wringing a loud cry from her.

She pulls me away from her neck, kissing me thoroughly. Now what? I wonder idly as she removes my hands from her back, pushing them down by my sides, shifting back to look into my eyes. I just know I have a silly look on my face from the expression on hers.

I smile slightly as she gives me a shove back into the pillows. She tells me, "Close your eyes," in a husky whisper. I'm in such a state of rapture I can do nothing other than obey her. I'm enjoying this entirely too much.

I twist the sheets under my hands as I feel her slide off my length, groaning with frustration. Oh come ON! Don't stop now! I sigh with relief as she rains kisses over my neck and chest, assured that she will not leave me like this.

I moan insistently as she bestows directed attention upon each of my nipples, trying to encourage her to hurry up. She seems determined to keep me in this agonizing state, lavishing every inch of my skin with her tongue and lips, fixedly avoiding the one area most demanding of her attention.

Ay! Saes! Saes! I mewl in protest as she comes close only to draw away again. What is she up to? I wonder as I feel her hands on my thighs, spreading them apart for her to settle between them. I shudder as her breath wisps across my still-wet length. I go still as she has me pull one leg up, my knee bent.

Her hands on my ass, I begin to have reservations. I'm not so sure about this now. Oh Sweet Eru! I cry out loudly as she runs the tip of her tongue up my arousal, my hands twisting in the sheets. A keening sound escapes my lips as she blows on me before licking me again, her tongue circling and sucking my head. Ay! Valar! So close! So close!

I moan loudly, arching into her mouth as she swallows me entirely. Oh my! AY! She strokes me firmly with her hand, drawing my sac into her mouth, teasing first one and then the other. I whimper, begging wordlessly for release. I begin to shake as she moves lower, teasing the skin beneath my sac, still moving her hand over my length.

Aieeeee!!!!!!!!! I throw my head back, writhing with abandon as she begins licking my opening. No one's ever… Ay! Too much! I lose all sense as I near completion.

Damnit woman! Don't stop now! I groan as she releases my arousal, still lost in the sensory overload she has wrought upon me. Now annoyed, I open my eyes and look down at her, my length twitching as I watch her suck on two of her fingers, wishing it was my arousal in her mouth.

"I told you to close your eyes."

Enough already! I blow my breath out as I let my head fall back onto the pillows. Finally. I moan as she swallows my length again. What the hell? What is she doing? I freeze as I suddenly register one of her fingers inside me. Alright. I trust her. Let's just see where this is going. I focus on her mouth on my length, relaxing again. I whimper as I feel her add a second finger, pressing forward.

Stars explode behind my eyelids as I scream, my body arching up off the bed, taking her with me, her fingers having found an unknown spot within me. I don't know if I begged or pled, but I never wanted her to stop, the sensations she was causing unbelievably intense.

I can feel an incredibly strong orgasm building within me as she strokes and sucks me to new heights of ecstasy. Coupled with my frustration from her earlier torment, my body arches up as I cum with blinding intensity, screaming hoarsely, the stars behind my eyelids fading into darkness.

My eyes flutter slowly to look up into her smiling face. I realize with a start that I had lost consciousness with the strength of my release. OY! Wow, just wow. That was beyond incredible. Unable to speak I just look up at her with open appreciation for this skill I had no idea she possessed.

"Not bad for my first try, eh?"

WHAT?!? What did she just say? No. No way. She's kidding. I manage to lift my head, stuttering slightly as I speak. "First try? Surely you jest?" She just shakes her head at me. I drop my head back to the pillows, rubbing my eyes with the heels of my hands, muttering, "Ay, sweet Eru!"

"Yes? How may I help you?"

She did NOT just go there. I let my hands fall away, wrinkling my nose at her. "You are simply incorrigible, but I love you anyway." She grins down at me, bouncing against my chest. Enough already! I growl audibly, pulling her down against me and twisting us onto our sides. Her smile is positively evil. I knit my brows together, wondering what was going through her head.

"I still owe you something from earlier…"

What is she talking about? I get my answer as she drops her head, latching into the sensitive spot on my neck, sucking hard. I moan, unable to respond in any way as she gives me a mark like the one I had caused on her neck.

I smile as she releases a yawn, my eyes only half open, completely relaxed. I cannot help but laugh lightly as she makes faces, trying to keep her eyes open.

"Perhaps a short respite is in order?" I suggest. She nods in answer, curling up against me, her face pressed into the curve of my neck. I listen as her breathing slows, the deep breaths telling me she has reached repose. Completely spent, I let my own eyes drift shut, holding her close, thinking how lucky I am to have her.

FIN

A/N: Should I do a follow-up fic? Review and let me know.