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Domination

By: Shanastay
folder -Multi-Age › General
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 5
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Domination

Disclaimer: (In the spirit of Crimson Starlight)

Shana: *rubs hands together* Ooooo Collab-fic!

Rose: *arches brow* Indeed.

Shana: *giggles insanely*

Rose: You're enjoying this entirely too much.

Shana: Yeah? So?

Rose: Are you like this in real life?

Shana: *pauses* Not even close.

Rose: I'm not sure how I should take that.

Glorfindel: Take it however. *sticks looong tongue out at Shana*

Shana: *glomps onto Glory* He he.

Glorfindel: *leers* Shall we find more "suitable" accommodations?

Shana: *nods* Uh huh. Uh huh.

Rose: Bah! So much for "Mistress Shanastay." Oh, Shanastay and I own nothing. We just got seriously worked up and whacked out on the computer one day.

Shana: Now, I hope you all enjoy! *Cracks whip* You WILL enjoy this!

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Domination....

Rose had been taunting Shana for way too long that day.

The two women were done up in full-on dominatrix gear and had been comparing notes. Shana, the red-head of the two, was sporting thigh-high leather stiletto boots, and a leather tank mini-dress that zipped both ways, no underwear whatsoever. Rose, the brunette, was in 7-inch stiletto pumps, thigh-high stockings and a garter belt, and a similar vinyl two-way zipping dress with long sleeves and cutout shoulders, sans underwear as well.

Legolas was under Rose's desk, his head buried in between the woman's thighs, the occasional gasp escaping her lips at the prince's ministrations. "They really need to make elf-sized desks. He's gotta be cramped under there."

Shana's eye-brow arched at the comment. "And you care why? He is supposed to serve you despite any discomfort suffered on his part. You're not going soft on me are you?" Shana sighed softly as the Marchwarden kneeling next to her slid one long finger between her folds. She placed one boot on his shoulder, spreading her legs wider to give Haldir better access.

Rose sighed, looking away from the vision of Legolas between her thighs to meet her friend's gaze. "You know he's too pretty..."

Haldir snickered. Shana smacked the back of his head silencing him.

Legolas popped his head up at the word pretty only to have it shoved back down as Rose continued, "I actually feel sorry for him sometimes."

"You have GOT to be kidding me! You're actually feeling sorry for your subs? (submissives) What about Rumil? You feeling sorry for him too? I thought you had these two trained!"

"I know, I know. They're just too pretty and... delicate-looking." Rose sighed as Legolas swirled his tongue in a particularly delicious manner. "They're just not as 'masculine' as your Hal."

Haldir had retrieved his finger from Shana's folds and was watching Shana, licking it slowly as the comment was made. He twisted his head, growling low in his throat.

"Hal!" Shana rebuked him, tugging on a lock of hair. "That was meant as a compliment. Calm down." She sighed as the Marchwarden returned to stroking her wet lips, his arousal clearly evident.

"Well? What about you? You let Hal get away with too much as it is."

Incensed, Shana reached into the bag by her side as Haldir moved back out of her way. Shana pulled out the hand-braided whip she had made many years ago when she had discovered her gift for domination.

Rose's eyes widened as Legolas lapped up a flood of warmth between her thighs.

Shana stood, cracking the whip. "You wanna see some domination? Let's go!"

Rose immediately pushed away from the prince, the elf quickly crawling out of the way. Rose asked sweetly, "Shall I hold on to something? Or shall I just cuff myself?" as she removed her dress.

Shana thought. Hmmm... Deciding, she pointed to the desk. "Grab some wood and put that pretty ass in the air," she ordered, cackling maniacally.

Rose had to comment as she placed her hands on the desk, "Wow... glad I wore the thigh highs and garter after all. Damn... where's the camcorder? No, boys, you don't have to hold my ankles, but thank you.

Shana considered Rose's luscious up-turned ass. "Do I really want to mar that pretty skin?" She looked over at her Marchwarden, observing the glazed look in his eyes. "Haldir's about to lose it."

Rose admonished, "Oh, don't hold out on me now!!! Just one crack! I'll settle for a BITE!"

The red-head stepped back, an evil grin spreading on face. She let out the length of whip in preparation. "Ok boys, better watch real close, don't know if I'm ever gonna do this again..."

Rose protested, "Noooo... you have to do it for Haldir!"

Shana sent the tip of the leather snaking out to almost caress Rose's upturned backside. SNAP!

"Ahhh, yes," Rose moaned. "Oa jeez!"

Shana smirked. "Harder my dear?"

"Yes please, Miss Shanastay! Again!" Rose answered, turning to the prince, "Lego, watch and learn from the nice lady."

Shana brought her arm back, releasing a full-on snap with a flick of the wrist. CRACK!

The brunette gasped, "Th-thank you. Again."

The red-head looked over at the quivering prince, "Learning anything yet Leggy?"

The prince nodded enthusiastically making like he was taking notes.

She reached out to caress Rose's reddened cheeks, "Think you need some more." She stepped back, took aim again and quickly delivered 3 shots, one to each cheek and against the upper thighs. SNAP CRACK SNAP!

Shana purred, "You like that? Want some more?" She waited for a response, tapping her thigh-high leather stiletto boot.

Rose swayed slightly. "Fuh..... fuck yes, Miss Shanastay."

Shana roared, "That's MISTRESS Shanastay!" CRACK!

Rose cried out, "Damn... I mean, yes, YES MISTRESS SHANASTAY!" Turning her head toward the prince she muttered, "Legolas, you owe me big. This is for your benefit, baby."

Shana laughed, "Honey, you request it, I deliver!" She snaked the whip around Leggy's ankle, pulling him over. The prince bowed in subservience.

"Heh heh," the brunette observed, "I think he likes you. Again Mistress!"

Shana ordered Rose, "Spread em!" She turned to Leggy, "On your knees in front of her." Looking down next to her at Hal, "So help me GOD you are NEVER doing this to me!"

The prince quickly complied, looking at the Mistress questioningly.

Shana ordered, "You're gonna do your little 'tongue trick' while I have some fun.

"Oooooyyyyyyy!" the brunette cried out as her legs turned to jelly, Legolas holding her up.

Shana snaked out the whip again, nailing each butt cheek twice in succession before flicking the tip just between Rose's legs, brushing Legolas' chin. She stood back, admiring her handy work. "Is he doing a good job Rose?" she asked as Rose opened and closed her mouth like a fish, not capable of speech.

"That's a yes Mistress if I ever saw one." She snaked out the whip again, catching the backs of Rose's thighs and Legolas' hands as he held Rose up. The prince yelped, trying to get away.

"Did I SAY you could MOVE?" She snapped the whip against the elf's inner thigh.

Rose piped up, "Hey. NOBODY said stop, Legolas!"

Shana turned on Rose, "Did I SAY you could talk?" She watched the elf jump, redoubling his efforts. "Hmm... not enough response here. Bored Now." She caught the elf on other inner thigh with the whip, commenting, "I thought Rose had trained you. I'm not impressed."

Rose spoke up again, "My apologies, Mistress. I told you I was too easy on him."

Shana looked down noticing Haldir's hand wrapped around his throbbing length. "Did I tell YOU you could do that?" snapping whip against the offending hand.

An audible groan came from Rose and Legolas.

The Marchwarden yelped as the whip hit his hand, quickly releasing himself, whimpering. "You will find your release only when I SAY!"

Shana turned back to the groaning pair before her. She arched her eyebrow. "Think we need to liven things up. Leggy are you not enjoying yourself?"

The prince's eyes went wide. He nodded frantically.

"Did I tell you to STOP!?" She snaked the whip out, catching the prince on the chin, also hitting Rose between the legs, but not too hard. "RUMIL! Get your ass over here!"

She looked down at Haldir. "Where the FUCK is your brother?"

Rumil poked head out of the kitchen door, holding a cookie.

Shana snaked the whip out again, catching Rumil around the wrist, dropping his cookie. She drug the protesting Galadrium over to group.

Rumil looked at Rose and Legolas. He looked like he was gonna cum right there.

"Oh NO you don't!" She cracked the whip against Rumil's abs, "I have other plans for you," smiling evilly.

Haldir cowered behind Shana. "Get your ass out here you pansy Marchwarden."

Rumil bit his lip, looking at Rose for guidance. Rose couldn't even stand, let alone lift her head. She murmured softly, "Rumil, don't be scared, darlin... it's all good."

Shana looked at Rumil and Haldir, motioning toward Rose, "Get over there." She commented to Rose, "Thought you had both of them trained?" To Legolas she directed, "Use your fingers too Leggy."

Rose tried to catch her breath. "They... always behave... for me," a wicked smirk crossing her lips, "If you can't handle them, Mistress..."

"WIPE IT OFF! Only I smirk."

"Yes Mistress Shanastay." Rose moaned, encouraging Legolas, "Yeah, there..."

Shana roared, "How DARE you suggest I cannot handle you and a few wayward elves!" She snapped the whip against the backs of Rose's thighs HARD, raising red marks.

Rose gasped loudly, "My apologies Mistress Shanastay."

Shana looked back at the two brothers, "I want you two to go over there and suck on her nipples, HARD."

Rose almost fell over at the direction.

"Now THAT'S more like it... twist 'em a bit. Wanna hear her scream!" She cracked the whip against Rose's cheeks again, raising red lines there. "Faster Leggy."

Rose whimpered and squirmed.

"Alright Leggy, sit on the edge of the desk. NOW!" She snapped the whip threateningly while the two brothers held Rose up.

The prince jumped up and complied as Rose protested.

Shana snapped the whip between Rose's thighs. "Relax. I will not leave you unsatisfied, but you WILL comply!"

Rose's knees almost gave out with that.

"Pull her on top of you Leggy. You two Galadrium, come over here by my feet."

With half-lidded eyes, Rose regarded Legolas hungrily.

"DID I SAY ENTER HER???"

Both groaned at the loss of contact. Rose began to plan revenge with the 2% of her brain that still was coherent. The elf held the woman poised over his angry red cock.

"Much better. I want you to watch the boys over here while you fuck her senseless," she ordered Legolas. She looked down at the two brothers at her feet. "Alright Rumil, Haldir. I know you are familiar with a 69..."

Rose moaned and tried to reach for Legolas' head.

Shana snapped the whip against the Galadriums' thighs until they were in position. "Go ahead Rose, kiss him," Shana offered, grinning evilly.

Rose looked at Shanastay suspiciously. Shana ignored it.

"Leggy, I want you to fuck her so hard she can't walk for a week," she snapped the whip against their thighs, "NOW!" Shana looked down at the red-faced brothers, "You are gonna suck each other dry!" She looked back at Rose and Leggy, snapping the whip hard across Rose's luscious ass, "You better be watching them."

"Uuuuhhhhhhhhggggggggg," panting emanated from the desk as Legolas and Rose screwed with long, hard strokes. "Gasp!" Both obediently watched the Galadrium suck on each other's cocks.

Sudden inspiration struck Shana, "Rumil! Haldir! STOP! I have a better idea..."

Collective groans of frustration emanated from the group.

"Use your hands Leggy. I expect her to have the most earth-shattering orgasm of her life. NO COMPLAINING! I promise you will all enjoy this."

Rose closed her eyes nodding weakly; between pants can be heard barely intelligible encouragements to Legolas.

"Rumil, I want you to go up behind Rose. Hal, you stay right where you are." Shana throws Rumil a suspicious bottle, he eyes it, eyes widening with realization.

Rose seems to understand what is to come and quickens her pace on Legolas.

"Oh NO you don't! Not just yet."

Rose whimpered.

Shana snapped the whip across Rose's backside.

Rose moaned, leaning on the prince for support and to regain control.

Rumil reads the label: "Warming liquid."

"That's right honey, spread it all over your cock." She cracks the whip against Rumil's ass. Haldir whimpers from the floor. "I'll get to you in a moment."

Rumil complies with only mild pity for the torture of Rose.

"Time for a little DP... Rumil I want you to enter Rose from behind," she glares at Legolas, "you two better set a nice HARD pace." She watches, licking her lips as Rumil enters Rose in one stroke. "Nice and warm?" She looks down at Hal, gestures for him to kneel before her, snakes the whip out catching Rumil, Rose and Legolas' thighs. "HARDER!"

Shana watches the three go at it under veiled eyes, "Enjoying yourself Rose?"

"Hhmmm?" she answers, totally oblivious, panting... barely conscious from overstimulation.

"You three need to be watching over here." She puts one foot on Haldir's shoulder, gesturing. The Marchwarden grasps Shana's hips, burying his face between her thighs. "OHHHHH!!!"

Legolas grasps Rose's chin and forces her to keep her eyes open. Rumil moans continuously, watching his brother and Shana while biting Rose's shoulder HARD.

Shana snaps the whip against Rumil's back and thighs. "HARDER! FASTER!" She hangs onto the Marchwarden as he inserts one finger then two into Shana, thrusting hard. He removes the slick fingers, pressing against her rear opening, still sucking on her for all he's worth.

Legolas roughly sucks a nipple into his mouth and Rose impales herself even harder on both elves in response. Rumil grasps a handful of hair and pulls her head back, kissing her with no mercy. Reaching behind her, Rose fondles a perfectly pointed ear causing Rumil to break the kiss and slam into her for all he's worth.

Shana moans as Haldir stands, turning her back to his front, pushing her against the desk next to the other three. He enters her slick folds in one stroke, pumping hard.

Rose's voice sounds hoarse from moaning, and she settles for unladylike grunts. Legolas smiles at Rumil in triumph.

Haldir withdraws, his length slick with Shana's juices and thrusts into her ass in one stroke, her muscles clutching him desperately as a scream is wrung from her lips.

The trio watched Haldir in awe and desire, a groan leaving three pairs of lips at the sight before them.

Rose searches out Shanastay's eyes, begging for mercy.

Haldir drops one hand to Shana's clit, rubbing mercilessly as he thrusts fingers inside her in time to his trusts into her rear, the other hand twisting a nipple-ring roughly. Shana can only meet Rose's eyes crying out hoarsely as the Marchwarden rides her without remorse.

Tears coat Rose's cheeks as she begs for release.

Shana gasps, "I TOLD you... earth-shattering orgasm! NOW!" before collapsing against Haldir, giving in to the Marchwarden's demands. A screams rips from Shana's lips as Haldir thrusts even harder, keeping her from release.

All it takes is Rumil's hands on Rose's hardened nipples and Legolas pinching Rose's aching clit to rip a mountain-rumbling scream from her throat. Rumil quickly follows, the feel of her clutching passage too much for him.

Legolas smacks Rose across the face, wanting to see her eyes. She holds his head and rides him until he too follows her and Rumil off the precipice.

Watching his brother's release Haldir falls into a hard rhythm, stroking them both closer to completion. He grabs Shana's hair, pulling her head back to claim her mouth, his other hand still thrusting into her in time to his cock.

Sated and panting, the three watch as Haldir and Shana pound into each other fiercely. The tension is thick enough to swallow.

Shana screams into Haldir's mouth as her muscles clamp down around his cock and fingers, the hand in her hair pulling painfully as he slams into her, her muscles wringing every drop from his length. The pair fall to their knees, Haldir's arms curled protectively around her, his length still embedded within her.

A breathy moan escapes Rose as she watches her friend find release. A sleepy arm twines around the prince's neck.

Shana gasps, looking up at Rose, "Wow. Never thought I could do THAT!" She leans back against the Marchwarden's chest.

"Heh heh heh." Rose looks up from Legolas' shoulder. The prince is wearing a stupid grin (well deserved). "Well, I'm proud of you. Rumil, get up off the floor, baby."

Shana looks back and up at Hal, receiving a sweet kiss, "You're not mad at me are you Hon?" she asks him.

Rumil, newly vertical, has a similar grin to Legolas' and nibbles on Rose's red, bitten shoulder.

"Well I, for one, am most pleased," Rose comments.

Shana receives scorching kiss as response to her question and feels him hardening within her again. "Hon, we need to take this elsewhere..." She shrieks as he suddenly swings her leg up and around so she's now facing him. Haldir slides his fingers into her channel again, pumping mercilessly with his cock and fingers.

Rose's eyes pop open in awe. "Damn!"

Shana screams again as they quickly orgasm together Haldir swallowing her scream with his mouth, finally pulling himself from her. The Marchwarden tosses Shana's limp form over his shoulder, waves at the other three and walks out.

Shana waves at Rose as Haldir turns his back. "Bye! Hope you had fun!" She reaches down and smacks Hal's ass only to receive a slap herself.

Rose misses the mischievous glance shared between her two lovers, waving back. "Well boys? Are you gonna let him top you both?"


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