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person Roy
schedule September 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good story!!Please continue your great work . Can't wait to read more!
person kiki
schedule September 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Heh took me half an hour to review this story(503 connection blah blah something) but finally I did it.Great story really.Aww poor leggy,thinks he is ugly.More pleasL kiL
person Mirasaui
schedule September 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Legolas' brothers are quite overprotective! At least he got to dance a bit before being put to bed. I got a kick out of Arwen's description of Haldir. Can't wait for Legolas and the March Warden to meet.

Mirasaui
person emma
schedule September 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story!
person Pookie
schedule September 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wee! you updated!

I really liked this bit, shows how so many people want Leggy. Although I'm worried that many of them want him cuz he's pretty and can have children, not cuz of who he is.. and that is sad :(

can't wait for Haldir to show up!

btw, what war was Arwen thinking about?

update soon please!
person Steph
schedule September 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for Legolas to meet Haldir!!!!

I love what you have done so far with your story. This is a Legolas I don't read often, and I appreciate the sweet youthfulness of his character. I also love how protective his family is over him. They are stifling, but they love him, and that is a welcome change in Legolas fiction as well. I can't wait for more. Thank you for the timely updates, it makes it a lot easire to get wrapped up in a story.
person Grace
schedule September 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Love* the pairing and story and I like Legolas being a very spirited character! More please!!!
person Lady of Legolas
schedule September 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
When's Haldir going to show up?When?
person Steph
schedule September 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the quick update. I am really loving your story. I like all the attention Legolas gets, the fact that Aragorn is imortal, Elrond and Thranduil being on good terms, and the suspense of Haldir and Legolas meeting. The only complaint that I have is that I want it to go on forever ;)
person mirasaui
schedule September 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sweet you, an update! Can't wait to see how Legolas and Haldir get together. I like your portrayal of Legolas--naive, but with enough gumption to get rid of that obnoxious courtier! And his friends and him forming the Free Legolas Club--love it. Hope you post another update soon. Thank you for sharing.

Mirasaui A.