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Hehehe it's funny.But anyway i can hardly wait till the next chapter.:D

if we want more? You must be kidding. Of course we want. Now it starts to get really interesting....:)yeah our little greenleaf doesnt want a marriage without love, that is something everyone can understand i guess. I am very curious how the two will make that up- greetings, Elenya

ARGH!!!Poor Legolas,so eager for love even though he's still young.More please!!!

That was really cute. I love the romantic side of Haldir. I'm aslo anxious to see what you do with the wedding night...

I absolutely love this so far. It is like a Harlequin romance set in Middle Earth. I re-read it just to get the giggles. Can't wait to get to the wedding night. Should be a scream. Please get your homework done so we can have more. Thanks. Giggle!!

I dont think the slashy scenes are that important. There are plenty of in all the stories posted here. And i like your story, i just wish i could read more about the elves feelings in this. The figures seem a bit flat to me...sorry no offense meant- the story is cute, and i would very much like to read more. Greetings, Elenya

More,more,more,more,more ______and so on

Hello there. I've been following this story for a while with great interest. First off, you shouldn’t feel shame for your sex scenes. Writing a sex scene is like having sex itself, I have yet to meet a soul who was perfect at it the first time out:)
I’ve always adored this pairing, and while decidedly out of character (when compared to canon), I do like your portrayal of Legolas. I hardly believe Tolkien ever intended for his warrior elf to be maternal in any case, so writing him as soft, innocent and submissive in this instance is fine by me.
I’ve always fancied him as a submissive elf, and when I read this pairing, I find I can’t get my head around it when Legs takes a more dominant role. So, for this issue alone, you have a fan. I don’t know whether it was intentional, but I’m also enjoying your playing off the themes of marriage, and the role of a woman in courtship. While I realize that Legolas is a male, you have written him with many feminine traits, and your decision to use traditional titles, (referring to Legolas as a potential wife, as apposed to partner) is very interesting. I’m also a sucker for fluff and romance. I appreciate your taking the time to share this vision with us, and I hope your muse’s continue to treat you well. I look forward to the next update.

Very good story,indeed.Sorry I didn't review it before,but now I am pleading you to continue.Keep it going!

Very good story,indeed.Sorry I didn't review it before,but now I am pleading you to inueinue.Keep it going!