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person giggle
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
How cute. Every time a bell rings they have to kiss. Loved it.
Was also glad to see who got drunk and fell in the pool. Arwen falling in also was a real keeper.
I loved the 30 second tour. My Uncle is a bachelor and his house is just like that except for all his sports memorabilia.
Now the sex scene was cute. Not too graphic and not too cowardly.
Can't wait to hear about the morning after. Legolas took deflowering quiell ell I thought.
Thank you for the update. I am really enjoying this and looking forward to more. giggle
person Diana
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love this story please update
person Lady of Legolas
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
He's still inside!?Oh my!More please!!!
person Lady of Legolas
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Before I forget,I would like to compliment you on using "Butterfly Kisses' in this story.I love that song because it deals on the relationship between fathers and their daughters.LOVE IT!!!
person CaptainSignyMallory
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I will wait however I do wish for it soon. I may just do this five times. That w be be very pretty wouldn't it? How arbout this? @--'--,------ a rose for the next chapter.

Captain Signy Mallory.

And they say i have no soul.
person giggle
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
If a naked Legolas shows up on your doorstep, I want pictures and a full account of the honey, chocolate & whipped cream fiesta the two of you have. No holding back, you hear.
The wedding is just adorable, I loved it. Maybe after the wedding you should have a shower for Legolas. They can have a different custom than humans. After the honeymoon the girls get together and swap wedding night stories as well as helpful tips for the not so nrideride.
Can't wait to see who gets drunk at the reception and makes a fool of themselves. Oh! and poor Elladan and Elrohir. That is a real giggle.
On with the show!! giggle
person Judi
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are an enjoyable author and this story is fantastic, i cant wait for the next chapter!!!!
person Roy
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to next chapter! please Write more. Love the wedding scene ! If there a sex scene, that whould so cool. Adios
person Roy
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to next chapter! please Write more. Love the wedding scene ! If there a sex scene, that whould so cool. Adios
person kiki
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yea please post part 12.Me needz it.lol