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person giggle
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter. Can't wait for Haldir and Legolas' first fight. Ought to be a doozy.
Glad L got to show up the Galadrim in archery. After walking in on H/L they needed to be put in their place. Another weekend, hope you get some time to write. giggle
person lilibeth
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
absolutely lovely, you're improving your writing...go on like this!!!
I really love Legolas pregnant......with Haldir is perfect!!!!
Update ASAP I CAN WAIT so long!!!!!
person kiki
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh Legy has some temper.Good I like him like that.More pleez!
person Diana
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MOPDATPDATE PLEASE
person Aly
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE Legolas' spunk! Can't wait to see if you continue to let him assert himself as more than just a pretty face.
person Judi
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!!! I just love it, i cant wait for more!!!
person Inwitari
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Again this is a great story... I love how you showed Legolas as something other than this naive person... good job, cant wait for more
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. It is well written and thought out. It is perefect. I don't like how you made Legolas so feminine but hey it's not my fic! I do like how Arwena nd Galadriel are strong characters not weak and sterotypical lady like. I just hope Legolas won't be sterotypical lady like (ie stying inside and screaming at everything!). It is my hope that he will be strong and warrior like as well as wifely and lady like. But this is not my fic and I will read it however you see fit to write it! :)
person Brin
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying your story, please finish it.
person Inwitari
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Haldir is becoming so sweet... Its soo sad how Legolas is soo not knowledgable about all these things... its also kind of cute... cant wait for the next parts
Tanya G