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person kiki
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That wasn't bad for their first fight.Me wants more.lol
person cm
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I am enjoying the story, and can't wait to see what happens next (more problems, hmmm?) I am a terrible reviewer, as I can never think of anything to say other than 'like it, love it.' I'm sure there are a bunch of readers like me, quite inarticulate but checkinr mor more of the story everyday. Please assume that for every written review you get, there are probably ten readers out there who want more. I personally can't wait for the chapter when Legolas wears the bridal shower gift.
person Lady of Legolas
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Kiss and make up!!!
person Steph
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Of course I'm still reading this. It is so cute and sexy. I love the possessive Haldir and the young, beautiful Legolas together. I hope you continue to the next chapter. I'd really like to see what happens when Legolas wears Arwen's gift for his husband.
person BLACK*PLAGUE
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm reviewing, I like it.
person BLACK*PLAGUE
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Does this count as Two reveiws?, cause I want more.
person Aly
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Of course you have to keep going! :) This story makes me laug har hard! The bridal shower was cute, but no games? So when's the baby shower going to be? ;) Please keep going! I'm really enjoying reading it and can't wait for more.
Sorry to hear about your comp. I'm glad your back now, though.
person giggle
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see the bridal shower. Everyone was very circumspect about bedroom antics. Not like my friends at all.
Can't wait to see the negligee get a work out. I've heard some very interesting stories about negligees not lasting too long for newlyweds.
We had a lingerie shower for one of my best friends and she got gorgeous Victoria Secret things. I knew she only wore flannel PJs so I just gave her a gift certificate. She was very appreciative becauseshe had to give most of the nice things away. She just never wore them. Sad really.
I thought you took so long because of homework. Silly me. My daughter just finished a report that counts for 50% of her grade in Government so I have seen the suffering that goes on due to school. Wait till she hits college. So get the homework and chores done so you can commune with you muse on your computer. Thanks for the new chapter. giggle
person Änneken
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am glad you`re back again! Nice chap! Legolas is doing progress in the relationship!
Hope you update soon!
person Phi
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
im still reading this - i have been checking everyday for updates...i think this is great!!!!!

am eagerly awaiting the next installment!!

Phi