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looveee it!!! up-date 17 was a good one... great sex..allways...I can not wait to read more..please moore, I am hungry!! feed me!! bye

Did I tell you that I don't like when you end the chapter like that?...hmm, okay well it seems that Captain Haldir needs to be a little more minds\ful of his wife when they're in the bed room. Legolas is getting the hang of his duties as a wife (good for him).

Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~

Hehe... this is such a cute story! And I'm glad to see Legolas starting to become a little more sure of himself and his position. And the part with Haldir dropping the book on himself is just a classic! Made me bust out laughing. Keep up the writing!

Poor Legolas getting embarassed like that. As always a fine piece of writing. Well done :D

Wow! You are really spoiling us. Another chapter so soon. I appreciate it very much.
Shopping, L is going to discover the joys of shopping. I hope Haldir takes the Elven equivalent of Visa with him while he's gone or he may be very unhappy when he gets back and they will have a "real" fight with, of course, the great making up scene.
As far as a short fic, you are very wrong. I for one want lots of chapters, and newlywed bliss and angst, fights, making up, misunderstandings, jelaousy because H has to leave L alone so much and is annoyed L is befriended by really great looking elves before the dreaded day when they finally bcome parental units.
L has a lot to learn and lets face it so does H. He is still the grumpy old bachelor after all. True love never did run smooth. L is just full of the vigor of youth and H is going to have to learn to deal with that. Keeping a talan clean is not that big a deal till kids come along so L is going to have a lot of time on his hands and I 't t't think afternoon tea with the girls is going to quite cut it. I am going to thoroughly enjoy this ride.
I hope you are enjoying writing this as much as I am enjoying the reading of it. giggle

it's a great story! i love tod itd it and it inspires me a lot!^^ every day looking for a new chapter and finally realize there's an update makes me really y!^^y!^^ and now back to your computer and write!!!XD

cya, Tscha (sorry, if my english is not the best....-.-)

I am enjoying this story immensely - I'm glad you are finally able to post again! Please continue writing it...Thank you.

*shakes head* If Legolas is still young and inexperienced enough to be considered an elfling, his father had no business allowing Haldir to marry him. Then again, Thranduil seems to have neglected his upbringing so badly, the only thing Legolas is really good for is warming Haldir's bed. He doesn't seem to have even the most basic concept of how to function on his own, or a sense of who he is as a person. Pretty common among the royal women. But I can't figure out why everyone keeps insisting on treating Legolas as if he were female. He's more than either male or female, since he can fulfill either role. *shrugs*

Very interesting story, I can't wait for the next chapter :) . Hopefully both Haldir and Legolas will realize Legolas is NOT a toy at some point.

glad to see a new chapter!
nice touch with the bridal shower,
and hmm, Haldir calling Legolas 'wife'?
hilarious... X)

Loove it!! I like long fics; and I think your fic is great!! I woul like, just if you can...make legolas to have an admirer...some one who haldir gets very jelously...some one who really make haldir think that his prince is more trhan a maternal elf, but a warrior also....and that his prince worth all midle earth!!...just if you can...any ways you fic make me laugh any time I read it...bye !! keep on good writtings,
greetings from Colombia!!