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OH my!! I don't want to know what's going to happen when haldir find them (well, maybe I'm waiting for it), though, I suppose when they esplain what really happen, they will close the matter, won't they? I hope you can update soon, I lovur fur fic, it's the first time I read something of so-female-legolas.
Kisses, kathy.

more updates please
Diana

Awesome chapter. Thank goodness Legolas was hurt really bad. I can't wait to see what happens when Haldir finds out. :)

i love this story! it's written well, and don't worry about the dyslexic thing, i'm dyslexic too. your doing better than my writing (cringe) i'm luck if i can spell 'white' right. :-)

update soon! please!!!!!!!!!!

Ch 23 - That was unexpected. I can't wait to see what Haldir is going to say about Legolas being attacked in his own bed. I thought all of the time together was going to make Orophin develop feelings for Legolas. I liked the interaction between the two. This has been lots of fun to read, and this chapter is a great update. Thank you for adding to this story so regularly. It makes it much easier to follow and stay into it that way.

at first i wasn't too thrilled with this story but you eventually won mer wir with haldir and legolas' antics and the way yee aee a genuiine love growing stronger between the two and it has caught my attention and i must admit to checking for updates everyday. keep up the great work and please post soon!

That Berlain is nothing but trouble! Going after a married elf, let alone Haldir's elf. He's really asking for it! And I hope he gets it. ;)
I'm excited to see how your going to handle getting Legolas pregnant and all that goes along with it. :)

Very good, poor legolas in the wars again. Be good if it could be an excuse to work on defence and warrior training *grins* very cool fic anyway. looking forward to haldirs reaction

huggs
clare

I knew that Book of Intimacy was going to be fun. I remember back in the "good old days" when I first discovered the Kama Sutra and my friends and I would go "no way" and "is that humanly possible". Glad to see that L is at least adventurous enough to consider possibilities. It's about time he started taking some responsibility for the fun in that talan bedroom. Going to make grumpy old bachelor H very happy to come home. Well, at least until he hears about what happened to Berlain. B's name sounds like an old 50's type car make, maybe from Ford. Makes me giggle every time.
Oh so L is going to be preggers soon. WhooHoo! If H thinks he is having trouble on the homefront now just wait. Morning sickness, food cravings, wanting to go home to Ada, swollen feet, stretch marks and the nesting instinct. Do I feel sorry for this guy or what. This is going to be so much fun to read. I hope you have as much fun writing this as I do reading it. This is just the cutest, sweetest story.
Tell Yancie hi and let him know his alter ego was a hero for trying to protect L. I think L should let him sleep in the bedroom while H is away to help protect the virtue of H's little wife. Now that L & H know how dangerous H being away can mean maybe H will go easier on Yancie and let him in the house more. We'll see.
Also O is in big trouble now. giggle

Oh, I love this story! It is so very very cute, Legolas is so sweet! I just love to see him embarassed every time sexuality intiontioned!! More more more please, never stop writing tis!! Every time I see a new chapter is posted I jump up and down with joy!!!
I cannot wait to see him preggers... *gggg*