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person Spane
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mhmmm such a sweet story!
person giggle
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I thought there was substance in that chapter. If this marriage thing is going to work they need to love one another. All the sex in the world not not a marriage make. It takes a lot of love for two people to have and then bring up a child. Unless they can get that part worked out before the stress comes, they are not going to make it.

Not that we object to elf-smut. We like it between these two. (This is the editorial we. I am not speaking for anyone else here)

Nice to see that their arguments are quick, to the point, and over soon. No one seems to carry a grudge. Carrying a grudge is fatal when it comes to marital fighting. Always get it over with and leave it behind.

They are such a cute couple. I am going to miss them when this story is over. Am I nuts or what to miss a ficitonal pairing. Oh me oh my. I need my head examined. giggle
person Aly
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's cute that Legolas "thinks" he loves Haldir. I was wondering when he was going to start falling for the Marchwarden. *hehe* Now just to get the young prince pregnant. ;)
person ArchNemesis
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
12/08/03
Aww, that was sweet! It seems that Haldir is thinking more and more about kids...I wonder what Legolas' reaction going to be when he starts feeling morning sickness. Excellent work! Cant's wait for the next chapter...Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~

person Rae
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yea... I Once again want to point out That Haldirs protection is adorable.
person Becca
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More... More... More... Please... Please... Please...
person Squall
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Again you amaze me. Thanks for the wonderful chapter! ^_^ Keep it up. You are really talented. I cant wait to see what happens.
person Nimue
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I hope you got more than this one lousy review. Best of luck sorting through your plot troubles. I'm still pleased with your effort! *Goes off to finish her own update* Cheers!
person Nattie
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm wondering how much Haldir knows about male pregnancies. I can really see him pacing a hole in the talan during these four days of delivery.
Maybe Legolas is already pregnant and starting very soon to throw up every morning. Or do you have other signs and *pleasures* of a pregnancy in store for Legolas?

Keep going. This story is really my favorite. Can't wait for a pregnant Legolas.
person Jadey
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I enjoyed that chapter...more soon please!