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person feralscarlet
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i hope to one day be as good as you are all i have to say is "WOW" you have some major ablility to express the char emotions that not many people have. i can tell you put much thought into developing this AU and i hope that you have much fun in continuing to write.
person lil leaf
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
another grate one as usual! is he pregnant??? god i hope so! he'd make such a good mommy!

plez post chapter 29 soon! right away! i can't wait that long!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

tanks.
person Merry
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
is he pregnant? i hope so, i want to see Haldir's reaction and how he deals with being a father, it's an new kind of au and i like it.

keep up the good work, i hope to see chapter 29 up and running soon.

Merry,
person giggle
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
"I'm the best. I'm the best. Everybody sing Legolas is the best." How cute. After the satin shorts and a little fluff and tickle in bed I am sure the Marchwarden agrees. Did he ever realize how nice Legolas was going to be to come home to after a really bad day at the border. Sure can take your mind off of stupid underlings.

OOH!! Maybe this is it. We get to see how elves tell if they are pregnant. I know Legolas already loves Haldir even if L doesn't quite get the connection yet so the afterglow could be only one thing. Well maybe since I am not the author.

Now for the fun. We get to see elven baby rituals up close. This should be really a blast. giggle
person Cassidy
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, as I have been reading this from, like, day one and have never reviewed before, I feel the need to introduce myself before I yell at you. I am Cassidy. I am a slash and Mpreg addict. The URL of this story is on my favorites list. It makes me very happy to read this story.

Okay.

How could you leave me hanging like that?! Gyah, I spazzed out! I'm extremely curious as to the cause of the glowing... I think he's pregnant. But that could just be me...

Please write more before I explode.

~Cassidy
person Starwind
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love, love, love! Keep the chapters coming. Must find out what will happen!! ^_^
person Aly
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.... maybe in love and pregnant? ;) Hurry up with the next chapters so we can find out! :)
person ArchNemesis
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's like Christmas all over again...

That was an evil thing to do to end the chapter the way you did...hmm, but I hope that our fair prince has conceived.

Excellent work! Can't wait for the next the chpater. Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~
person louise_oblique
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Faboulus, update update, ;) liked the glowing thing btw, very coool :)
yep u can guess i still want him on potrol ;)
kinda hope preg to ;) *grins* anything to torture H, lol ;)
love your potrayels of both characters

liked how L whooped their asses! very cool *does victory danse* so cute. shows how he's still relativly young. (i can't seem to spell today, epp exam at uni to *groan*, yeslexslexic bunny)

huggs
louise
person yan
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YOUHOOOO, finally.....all my wishes come true. first, for the first time Legolas won against Haldir plus his leutenant. Second Legolas IS going to pregnant, I hope. The last, your sex scene is better and better.
If Leggy EVER gets pregnat, I cann't wait to read what would you write to his mood swings.
by the way, where YancYancie and two faitfull guards of Legolas?