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person Squall
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Again you amaze me! Bravo! That wasnt a bad sex scene. That was cute. Looks like Lego is getting bolder. Say Ai to bold legolas! *hears the grasshoppers and clears throat* Well, I like the bold Lego. Thank you.
person giggle
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh I don't know I thought that was a very nice sex scene. For me just the thought of a sweet, young hot Legolas and a studly Haldir, in bed enjoying the blessings of togetherness is very, oh I don't know, stimulating. It's getting very hot in here. I think I had better open a window.

The only time in my life that I ate healthily was when I was pregnant. I even began before I knew I was pregnant so I know that hormones start this process before you have a clue.

I am sorry you have to spend so much time in the hospital. Especially if you can't take your laptop. I would go nuts without my laptop when we go on trips. Before my husband retired we traveled way too much and the only thing that kept me sane was my computer.

I loved your sweet, tired and unable to eat too much maternal elf. Just made me wish Haldir hugged Legolas more and made over him like a very paternal elf. I am sure he will have a tough time of it when Legolas begins to crab about how he started all this baby business. I hope I didn't screw up my pronouns there. Also Rumil and Orophin are so sweet in being happy that they are uncles. I look forward to them being great uncles and spoiling the baby girl or boy as much as they are allowed. Nice touch that they want to be surprised. So did I.

I look forward to more when you feel up to writing. My daugher agrees on some lit teachers not being very flexible. Last years was horrible. She really hated that class. This year she has a great teacher for college prep lit and he thinks she can do no wrong. She has really learned a lot from him. She just finished hirstirst script and is shopping it. It is good experience for her even if nothing ever comes of it. She has just started another book and is still shopping her first. She got some interest but nothing ever came of it. You have to just keep trying. So practice, practice, practice. Especially on us. giggle
person ArchNemesis
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue.

Nemesis ^_~
person HHS
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This must be the only story so far that's reaching 400 reviews.You are doing great bythis story.I LOVE IT!!!
person Vanilla
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was an awesome chapter. I check like 2 times a day for updates :) I'm enjoying this story very much.
person Jaimi
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i have be following your story and i have to say that i am loving it. you , while although slighty rambly, write wonderfully. it is captavating and sweet with out giving one a cavatie. (i know i just spelt that wrong) can't wait till the next instalment.
person dani
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
beautiful, just beautiful.
person vanilla_fantasy99
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was an awesome chapter. Sorry to hear that you've been ill and in the hospital :-D
person Ava
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Still sweet and wonderful as ever... hopefully it wasn't anything too serious you were at the hospital for? *Huggles*
person becca
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow! v nice. i just read it for the first t do don't underestimate your writing ... even when you might think a chapter stinks, i definitely don't. highly engaging and entertaining. you've got the marriage relationship pegged. it's interesting to see the female half with a male twist. please keep writing.