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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! Please update soon. It seems that Legolas is always getting some Elf to flirt with him, which drives Haldir crazy :) Can't wait for the next one.
Nemesis ^_~
ps. your word is spelled 'Unfortunately' (smiles)
Nemesis ^_~
ps. your word is spelled 'Unfortunately' (smiles)
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Stories don't last very long on the front page do they? I tried to review this morning and got the busy signal and when I came back to try again this story is almost on the third page. Wow lots of updating going on.
When I saw the name of the chapter I knew I would like this.
Haldir's threat of castration. Come on Haldir tell us how you really feel. Unburden yourself and don't keep things in. HA! He doesn't mince words does he. Gets right to the point and leaves no one in dar dark.
Oh good, Yancie got to come along. A tame wolf you want by your side when you're pregnant. Will Legolas see her two bodyguards at the border? I miss them.
I knew Legolas would like riding with Haldir really. It is warmer, safer and he can sleep. You really do need a lot of sleep when you are pregnant. Of course Haldir doesn't explain any of that. And even though Legolas is old enough to be pregnant he is still a child to Haldir so he treats the prince line. ne. Legolas just doesn't want to be told what to do. Does anyone?
I think it is so nice that Legolas has learned how to cook. He had no skills before he married Haldir. I also think his timidity is so cute.
"I'm Haldir's wife," is guaranteed to send most sane elves packing that's for sure. Just those with a death wish will want to go any farther. Being married to a grumpy old MarchWarden has it's advantages.
Nice little afternoon delight in the tent. Can you call it afternoon when they haven't even had lunch yet? I guess that phrase really dates me.
So like a guy, slam, bam, thank you ma'am; I love you; let's eat. Can't get more male than that.
Oh it is spelled unfortunately.
That was so very nice. I especially like the scene in the tent. Of course I would you know me.
Sorry to hear you are having trouble with the next chapter. Writing anything woulive ive me nuts so I have a lot of empathy with those who not only write but take on long term stories. We will ~try~ to be patient. If things go on to long I can always re-read all the chapters to refresh myself as to how things got to be this way. Take care of your brain, don't put it on overload. giggle
When I saw the name of the chapter I knew I would like this.
Haldir's threat of castration. Come on Haldir tell us how you really feel. Unburden yourself and don't keep things in. HA! He doesn't mince words does he. Gets right to the point and leaves no one in dar dark.
Oh good, Yancie got to come along. A tame wolf you want by your side when you're pregnant. Will Legolas see her two bodyguards at the border? I miss them.
I knew Legolas would like riding with Haldir really. It is warmer, safer and he can sleep. You really do need a lot of sleep when you are pregnant. Of course Haldir doesn't explain any of that. And even though Legolas is old enough to be pregnant he is still a child to Haldir so he treats the prince line. ne. Legolas just doesn't want to be told what to do. Does anyone?
I think it is so nice that Legolas has learned how to cook. He had no skills before he married Haldir. I also think his timidity is so cute.
"I'm Haldir's wife," is guaranteed to send most sane elves packing that's for sure. Just those with a death wish will want to go any farther. Being married to a grumpy old MarchWarden has it's advantages.
Nice little afternoon delight in the tent. Can you call it afternoon when they haven't even had lunch yet? I guess that phrase really dates me.
So like a guy, slam, bam, thank you ma'am; I love you; let's eat. Can't get more male than that.
Oh it is spelled unfortunately.
That was so very nice. I especially like the scene in the tent. Of course I would you know me.
Sorry to hear you are having trouble with the next chapter. Writing anything woulive ive me nuts so I have a lot of empathy with those who not only write but take on long term stories. We will ~try~ to be patient. If things go on to long I can always re-read all the chapters to refresh myself as to how things got to be this way. Take care of your brain, don't put it on overload. giggle
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January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good, very well done :)
huggs
louise
huggs
louise
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January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more please
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January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It is spelt 'Unfortuly'ly' ...This is a really great story and I've been reading it since you have posted the first chapter and have eagerly been awaiting updates. ...so now you're wondering why have I just suddenly decided to review? This site is different from fanfiction.net and as stupid as it is, I have only just found the review button. I've been browsing this site for months too! I can be such an idiot sometimes. Anyway- yes. I absolutely love this story and I want more! ^_^ More! More! More! More!
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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yep, still listening ... ok, reading actually. you're doing quite well because i'm still hooked! please keep writing!!
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January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hope leggy doesn't barf on an orc. keep up the good work
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January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am listening and of course I love it! That was so good. ^__^ Keep going.
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January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I still read it =D and love it ;)
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January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope, and don't hope at the same time, that Legolas is able to prove himself while at the boarders. It's and interesting twist you have there sending him into danger. Can't wait to read more!