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person silverhope
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderfully done. I love how Legolas has now been accepted as warrior by some of the other elves. I also love that he has started to become some what demanding of Haldir. Please keep going, I can't wait to read more.
person HHS
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So Leggy is definitely going to have just one child?Okay,a girl pe!!!e!!!
person Squall
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw... That was so good. I liked that chapter...
person giggle
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh good Celarion is back and promises he and Mwalin will be around for the birth. Yancie got a mention also. Go Yancie and I hope you are doing better.
That was a good conversation between Haldir and Celarion. We get to hear how Haldir is holding up in all this and how he views Legolas' behavior and trials over this first pregnancy. He is so sweet when he talks about the prince and their up coming responsibility.
Oh poor Legolas. It is all getting to be just a bit to much for him. Morning sickness, food cravings, needing to sleep so much. He needs to get home and be coddled like any nana-in-waiting. Hey what are we to call him? Haldir calls him wife now. Will he call him a nana or ada? It might be a little weird to call him nana but how about having two adas? That might be a little too confusing when the baby is calling one of them. Oh well whatever you decide we can roll with.
I thought Legolas on Haldir's horse alone for a little while was cute. Feeling powerful and looked up to on such a big horse. He's so cute it is almost illegal.
Enough excitement for the rest of his life. Maybe that's why Celeborn sent him on this mission. So he could have a better idea of what warriors like Haldir have to go through. He might have a lot more empathy for Haldir and not have fantasies of being a warrior along side his husband.
Ada will be thrilled to get his little Leaf's letter and hear that his elfling is not just with child but haring around the woods of Lothlorien killing orcs. NOT.
I liked his spiel about getting the basics done before fun. He is growing up isn't he?
Well you certainly don't write as if you have writer's block. That was a lovely chapter. We don't see the blood, sweat and tears you put into the work just the final product so we think this is just tripping off your Word Processor for our entertainment. It is only right that you remind us every once in awhile.
Take care and I hope your muse gets better and things get easier as spring slowly rises like sap in a tre us us all. giggle
person Lilibeth
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fine fine fine!!!!! Go on like this......I really love your work!
Don't give up! There's a lot of people who's waiting Legolas/Haldir's next chapters!!!!!
person Mystic
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter. lol I love when Legolas gets all moody. Good luck on get rid of your writer's block. I know it can be a real pain.
person mz psycho
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another good chapter as always! i dont really notice that u've got writters block, it still flows real good. ne wais keep the good work up! nd many nekkid Legolas's for u 2!
person anonymous
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story! btw haldir is just known as haldir o lorien which means haldir of lorien. nd tho many people think that greenleaf is legolas's last name, its just an english translation. nd many people also think that thranduillion is is last name but it really is just his title. it means son of thranduil, ion meaning son. so literally legolas thranduillion means legolas son of thranduil. yea sry for rambling... buh hey now hopefully i told u something new
person Squall
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wondered when Legolas was going to do that. ^__^ Thanks that was so good.
person Nera
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool story dig it. Anyway a place to find elf names with translations is http://grey-starr.ca/index.html
The name generator is on the extra pages and male elf is the one that works the best.