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person giggle
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
He's showing!!! How exciting for the couple.
The erotic poses in front of the mirror was funny. Legolas, the most beautiful elf and Haldir is blessed I allow him in my bed. That was so cute. And Haldir must have read a book on how to ruin a romantic moment. No it is genetic, anyone with an XY chromosome has inherited it. Also Haldir not only thinks with his stomach but with his groin. He is such a typical male type guy even if he is an elf. You know too much about the male psyche.
Oh the brothers are there to decorate the nursery. I can't wait to see what you do with that.
Those lousy warriors were so mean to the prince. Bunch of jerks. When Haldir finds out the whole fuss he is going to wipe the forest floor with these elves. At least Legolas got in onod pod punch before someone put a stop to it.
Of course Haldir is going to misunderstand. I was glad he calmed down quickly. And the question "What's a bitch?" was so funny. Now Haldir is going to get an earful.
At first I thought how could you get anything done on Oscar night. Of course you had already written it. Anyway we got an Oscar sweep from the Academy. I was so glad. Go hobbits and elves.
I look forward to more H & L fights and make-ups. I think Haldir is in for a rough ride from his little Maternal Prince. Things only get worse the closer you get.
Thanks for a new chapter. giggle
person louise_oblique
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very good :) yippeee another chapter

huggs
louise
person silverhope
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
To bad Legolas can't just run off and have the baby by himself, away from all the stupid jerks that seem to be running around. Haldir doesn't seem to really be helping matters very much. I love the nephew/neice fight, very cute. Might I ask, have you decided if Legolas and Haldir are going to have a boy or a girl? Or are they going to have twins? Keep up the good work.
person MyGirlCrais
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh you have to have Haldir in the delivery room! I bet even marchwardens have a hard time staying conscious through that. :-D
person Mystic
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was an awesome chapter. Legolas and Haldir are still the best pairing :D
person Squall
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Yet again. Good job! Congrats with Graduating!
person silverhope
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yea!!! An update. I love this story very much, in fact it was one of the first I found on this site. You are doing a marvelous job of writting it. Hmm, should Haldir be in the delivery room or outside of it? There are multiple possiblities for both of those ideas. If Haldir was inside he would be the "target" of Legolas' , lets call it frustration, while inor. or. If Haldir is outside he'll probably pace a hole in the floor. Either way you have great possiblities. Looking forward to more, please update again . si.
person giggle
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AN - Going to graduate. Congratulations.
Oh suffer Haldir - you b*st*rd. You started this after all. I am just practicing for Legolas after about six hours into labor he will definitely be screaming this.
Goody baby things, names, who will the baby look like, be like, girl, boy or maternal male. So many things to think about. That is the fun part.
Breast Feeding!! The poor naive prince strikes again. I don't blame his guardians for not touching this with a ten foot pole, or the elven Middle Earth equivalent.
So Haldir comes home after a hard day at the office and gets hit with questions again. This is so true to life.
Anything else going to happen? Well labor and delivery. At that point keep sharp objects away from the prince. My MIL slapped my FIL so the Dr sent him to the waiting room and then my MIL cried through the whole rest of the delivery. She was so upset with the Dr. Go figure. You are not exactly in your right mind at the time.
Well at least Legolas hasn't gotten fat yet, or swollen ankles and acne hasn't hit yet.
I loved ada's gift/care package. Lots of sweet goodies. And the mental image of Legolas in a huge tent like tunic was a scream.
I thought the idea of sweet gentle love and the two of them sitting together reading the having a baby book was just so sweet. I am going to overdose on the word sweet but this story really is. I can't help it.
AN If you think watching a labor/delivery is scary, try going through it. Not now mind you. Wait until you have a life you can share first. Anyway you are exhilirated and terrified at the same time. It is quite a rush.
I know you need to get finals done and do a good job with them so your time isn't exactly your own right now. We look forward to more but you already know that. A prologue sounds intriguing. When would it start and would it be justolasolas' life? Anyway anything you want to do I will be there for. giggle
person louise_oblique
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic, sorry short very late over here

take care
louise
person AnaLee
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey,

I just read your story and I think it is very interesting. I hope you update soon.

AnaLee <3