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person louise_oblique
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was very good and twins would be cool! ;)
the whole manliness was a good angle *starts giggling* very cool. also I quote:
'“Give me the truth. Do I look fat?” Legolas asked innocently.'

He he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he! Jeeze to I look forward to the next chapter, *Giggles rediculasly* LOL!

Huggs louise
person Mystic
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome awesome chapter. I love it. It was really great when Legolas was having Haldir rearrange the room lol
:D
person Aliyah
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! awesome job with the story. I think you're doing really well, and I hope you post again soon.
person mz psycho
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aww... poor leggy hes so innocent ne wais i'll be slaving over my computer waiting so plz plz plz update soon! cuz yea we love u!
person Megami_Layla
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the story! ^________^ I can't wait till you update. And don't worry about your lemons, you're doing fine. ~.^
person Squall
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw! That would suck. Poor innocent Legolas. Once he has that child he should show those turds who can beat them to a pulp! Yeah...nah. He should confuse them with his intellect. Aw...I love this story so much. I always look forward to the next chapter. THanks!
person Mystic
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a really awesome chapter. Poor Legolas. I hope he gets over everything ok :) Can't wait for more
person MyGirlCrais
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why do I think quite a few guards are going to be missing a few limbs soon?

If 40-42 are written, why don't we have them?!
person Jadey
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS A VERY PRETTY REVIEW: Love it! Love it! Poor Legolas! More soon please!
person HHS
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Niece or nephew?!Why not just both?TWINS!!!