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August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this immensely. What angst though! I feel for each and every one of them.
I can't wait for more. I also am looking forward to answers . . . *hint, hint*
LK
I can't wait for more. I also am looking forward to answers . . . *hint, hint*
LK
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August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hI,
wow.. what happened to Erestor? Did he bed the Lady Celebrian? (Elrond forgive him that means he was angry...)
what will happen next? Elladan will come back with the balrog-slayer in time to Imladris?
i wanna know more!
-K-
wow.. what happened to Erestor? Did he bed the Lady Celebrian? (Elrond forgive him that means he was angry...)
what will happen next? Elladan will come back with the balrog-slayer in time to Imladris?
i wanna know more!
-K-
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August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like your writing style. There's something to be said about leaving things unsaid:
"For Elrohir was stretcout out leisurely on one of the sofas, his robe half open while lazily reading a book that had certainly -not- been a title Erestor had supplied to the library"
for example, tells us everything we need to know as the type of books Erestor wouldn't let in the library would be ones of a very naughty vareity ;)
Your interesting twists make it quite enjoyable as well as your choice of language, givnig it the antiquated feel of Middle-earth and making me willingly suspend my disbelief and go with the flow of the characters as you've written them.
And the eroticism ain't bad either :-D
"For Elrohir was stretcout out leisurely on one of the sofas, his robe half open while lazily reading a book that had certainly -not- been a title Erestor had supplied to the library"
for example, tells us everything we need to know as the type of books Erestor wouldn't let in the library would be ones of a very naughty vareity ;)
Your interesting twists make it quite enjoyable as well as your choice of language, givnig it the antiquated feel of Middle-earth and making me willingly suspend my disbelief and go with the flow of the characters as you've written them.
And the eroticism ain't bad either :-D
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August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh please,please!!!!More!!!!!I'm loving this pairing(although G/H is #1)so and I need more of them.I want to find out if Erestor will reveal his true feelings for Glorfindel.
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August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Liked how you interweaved the previous night events. Glorfindel is very smitten with Erestor to kiss him in front of everyone like that in the Hall of Fire.
Wondering about Erestor's bad experiences to have such walls. Very good chapter. Can't wait for your next update.
Wondering about Erestor's bad experiences to have such walls. Very good chapter. Can't wait for your next update.
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August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I really like how this story is playing out. You portray Erestor quite well; I'd like to learn more about what makes him so deive ive towards others. Please update soon!
~Aduial
~Aduial
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August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooo!!! this is such a neat story!!
what is Erestor hiding? Will Glorfy live?
the drama! the excitement!!
if you't 't tell, I like this story!
more please! And soon!
what is Erestor hiding? Will Glorfy live?
the drama! the excitement!!
if you't 't tell, I like this story!
more please! And soon!
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August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I want Glorfindel to live!!!
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August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Liked the departure scene with Erestor wanting to see Glorfindel off but denying it to himself. Poor Glorfindel looking and hoping to see Erestor in the courtyard to see him off.
Very intrigued as to what secret past of Erestor's would cause Elrond to have to forgive him for it. Interesting how Erestor felt a connection with Glorfindel when he got injured by the orcs.
Very intrigued as to what secret past of Erestor's would cause Elrond to have to forgive him for it. Interesting how Erestor felt a connection with Glorfindel when he got injured by the orcs.
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August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like this one alot so far.