rate_review Reviews

hi,

Wow :) I love the story, and your style is very enjoyable.. I need more of this! Erestor and Elrohir left Imladris without proper equipment?
I don't understand Erestor's past yet.. :( He did what to save who and when? And he tried to kill himself or he was tortured? :((( I hope he will be allright, and Glorfindel will survive this. And what about Elladan's wound? I need more! Please update.

bye,
-K-

You've still got me on pins and needles! Chapter five was another cliffie! Great work!

NOOOOO YOU CAN'T STOP THERE I NEED MORE!!!!

This is a lovely fiction and I surely hope to read more soon... so much suspense, so many secrets.
I love your characterization of Erestor, Glorfindel and the lovely twins.

Keep up the good work.

alex

It is puzzling why the orcs keep pursuing them for so many days. Elladan etc have to stop and make a stand now. So nervous for them. Hope Elladan's plan works or reinforcements come in time. So glad that you update regularly.

gah...

want more.. need more...

ok, real review (I hope)

nicely done!
although not knowing what Erestor is freaking out about is driving me bonkers! So you better hurry up and add that bit of the story!!

I can't wait til they all discover that Erestor is not the ice-Elf they all think he is, I hope Glorfy doesn't give up on him...

so... Rumil has issues with Elladan? I wonder why...

please update soon!

I didn't know that Glorfindel was already in love with Erestor the first time he saw him.So that's why he dared to kiss him in the Halls of Fire.Too bad that Erestor seems indifferent to it.I hope he realizes tha als also feels the same way towards Glorfindel before it's too late.

Glad Galadriel sent Haldir and Rumil to meet the Rivendell party. Bes bes being injured, Elladan, Glorfindel and others must be exhausted from being chased so long by the persistent orc party.

Hope Erestor and Elrohir won't run into trouble when they try to find out what happen to E and G.

Let all of them be alright and get home safely.

I really like how this story is shaping up; please continue to update frequently and you will make me very happy.

A few things I noticed. You sometimes say 'Elrohir' when you mean 'Elladan'; be careful when you revise to catch these mistakes. There are also a few grammatical mistakes, not many bome ome people might nitpick on them; I personally don't mind since I know what you are trying to say. Also, Haldir is a 'March' Warden, not a 'Watch' Warden although he does a lot of watching.

If you don't have one, I advise you to find a beta as I have found they are often helpful in catching mistakes I miss on my work. I offer my services to you if you need one.

Other than that, please keep it up. This is really becoming a wonderful story to read.

~Aduial