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for Barriers both Noble and Arduous

by Rufferto

person Lady of Legolas
schedule August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Erestor carrying all that burden.It's a good thing that Elrond forgave him for what he did to Celebrian.But his guilt won't let him forgive himself.I hope that Glorfindel's love will help him.
person kiki
schedule August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I bet ya that the Haldir is the voyeour.But I could be wrong.Great story for real.It keeps me checking for updates every second.Heheh.LOL
person Iamme
schedule August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok these cliffies are getting evil!!
person Twilight
schedule August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow - finding out some of what happened in Erestor's past. Poor Celebrian and Erestor were placed in an impossible situation as captives no doubt.

What a turn-about with Haldir and Elladan just wanting to be friends, especially with Elladan. Will have to re-read the earlier chapters. Rather confused, since Elladan could not stop talking about Haldir's beauty and wanting to see him in an earlier chapter. Wonder if having Elrohir there at the same time as Haldir made Elladan realize that he wanted Elrohir? But Elladan sai spo spoke with Elrond already about it, meaning his feelings for Elrohir??

Anyway, loved the interaction between the various characters, especially with Glorfindel and Erestor. Love your story.
person kiki
schedule August 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great fic.Please more.LOL
person Kira
schedule August 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
More!!!
-K-
person Aduial
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Will you please write more?!? Must read more!

~Aduial
person Pookie
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY! you updated! :D

I'm just a bit confused though.. Elrond doesn't like both of who leaving Rivendell at the same time? The Twins, or Glorfindel and Erestor? I think you meant the twins, but I'm not quite sure.

and near the end, after the flashback, I think you got Elrohir and Erestor confused.

other then that, it was good!

Glorfy is alive! and the twins and Haldir and possibly Rumil are in a weird love triangle... er... square... thing.. (ope they get that figured out!)

poor Erestor... I want to give him a hug. :(

Update soon please!

person Lady of Legolas
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More please!!!
person Twilight
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your little story glimpses inrestrestor's past are *so* tantalizing and frustrating. Want to knore ore about the painful and shameful event in his past.

Interesting to have all of the elves meet up at the battle scene. Lots of tension and secret desires abounding here. Look forward to reading about all of the complications in the different relationships with being played out here.