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Ah, Leggy is building a little confidence *bg.* I like the way he remembered, at the right moment that Haldir was in service to him. . . . love the predicament he left Haldir in, with his friends *g.* And, I'm going right over to read pippychick's AU chapter.

Been thinking some more about this, now the fat is really in the fire, just how much did Celeirdur tell his father when he got back? What is Galuron going to tell him? Thranduil knows that Legolas is in Imladris under Glorfindel's 'protection', he must be aware that the child has been born, so does he play the proud Grandpapa or the really pissed off monarch, or something in between? Interesting, very interesting!!!! Keep it coming!!!
Lynda

A lovely chapter once again. Thank you for writing this, it's one of the best stories I've found from the site. Please continue writing and please update soon again. Thank you.

So glad u up dated i love this story.

Goody! So finally Haldir is put in his place, maybe?! Loved how you made him "his guard". Still the smart mouth and remarks that make him so that you just want to smack him or kiss him! Hope that you update soon!

Nice chapter, really Haldir is a piece of work, snotty bastard does not cover it! Good that Legolas is at last having some fun doing normal things! Hope they find a white horse for Gil!

What a fitting punishment for Haldir. And, I like the way that Glorfindel is showing Legoas his love and support. I look forward to finding out how things go at the market. Thanks for updating.

Dear Esteliel, began reading this at LOM and finally found your LJ and the way to AFF Net. Interesting, very interesting. I like the way Legolas has been slowly maturing during the course of the story, considering he is the equivalent of 16 human years at the start, (2.5 elf years to a human year) having a child that young does tend to make one grow up in a hurry! His treatment during his early years made him ripe and ready for plucking for the first person who came along and showed any interest in him, even negative interest! Poor baby! Glorfindel has changed too, still a bastard but not a rat bastard! He really did want children did'nt he, I think he has 2 Legolas and Gilrion?!
Lynda

This is my fault for not making it more obvious that any who insult you insult me as well." ---- hmmm, wonder what Glorfy will do to correct this? . . . a ring? . . . a bonding ceremony maybe, even some kind of public proclamation might be nice *g.* This was another fantastic chapter.

Great chapter!!!! Loved the way Glorfindel calmed legolas. And Rumil is really a nice elf here. I'd like to know what will happen to Haldir( that poor excuse for an elf). Bye