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by Esteliel

person Vuaryn
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful Esteliel. I hope Glorfindel will treat him right. It hurts to see our favourite elf being tortured all the time.
person Nina
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting that male elves would be more fertile than femele elves . I wonder if Thranduil will ever appear here and if he does, what would he say to his son? I would like to see him and legolas understand each other.
person JastaElf
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, why does it frighten me to think Legolas can conceive even if he does not want to?? Are we foreshadowing something terrible here? What if someone kidnapped him and got him pregnant, and Glorfindel repudiated him? And then the baby dies, and Legolas has been relegated to nothing more than a dishonoureisonisoner to Glorfindel's lust? Oh dear, oh dear!!

Hmm, that could be--err--fun! :-)

Anyway, another excellent chapter. I am hopelessly addicted to these stories... :-)
person pris
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
there you go making this story so enticing that your reader prays it doeasn't end and that we are lucky enough to see legolas grow and glorfindel realize his love for legolas.....keep up the good work ;)
person Gilraen
schedule August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh Esteliel you're back!! :D I've missed your writing alot and i thought you won't write sequel to "Anastel" but here it is! I hope to see more soon because this looks just as interesting as those before.
person Summter Storm
schedule August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
real glad you're back with the long awaited sequel -)
more of pretty, naive Legolas and the evil, gorgeous Glorfindel!
person Calenharn Elflover
schedule August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah, yes, finally! We now get to see Legolas embark on a new life, or at least life with a new hope.

It was interesting to see the friendship between Glorfindel and Elrond at work here (at least, I presume it is their friendship, and not just ly dly doctor business), in that Glorfindel could easily and frankly discuss the fertility issue with Elrond. I think Elrond should know, however, that fertility *can* return while still nursing... so an unexpected twist in events is always possible! I am also intrigued with whatever little talk Elrond is planning on having with Glorfindel in the future. Maybe he does not entirely approve of the relationship (unbound, master-slave) between Glorfindel and Legolas? Maybe (if only for the children's sake) he wants a more formal arrangement? It was also interesting in that he apparently knows of Glorfindel's exhibitionist goings-on... perhaps Erestor did indeed voice complaints?t dot does not look like he will entirely be able to restrain Glorfindel, though!

Meanwhile, we see that poor Legolas is still insecure and despondent - expecting to be used as broodmare and pleasuretoy again and again, until Glorfindel fiy tiy tires of him. But yet he continues to seek olorflorfindel and tries to please him... because he is the only one (besides their son) that Legolas really has. Ai, poor Legolas! And life is about to get more difficult with the guards...



person JastaElf
schedule August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh hooray, a SEQUEL!! I'm delighted!!

Ah, poor Legolas, they're still playing with his mind as well as his body... poor kid, evil Noldor... (grin)

It's good to see you back! And I look forward to more of the tale.
person imladrys
schedule August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
woo hoo, the long awaited sequel finally arrived. I can't really make a legitimate review quite yet, but it sure looks promising. Anestel was absolutely wonderful as well as the prequel. It's nice to read some decent fics lotr these days. Keep up the good work!
person Nina
schedule August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi. Good that you have posted the first chaptf Anf Anestel's sequel.