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for Cuil Eden

by Esteliel

person Summer Storm
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow, the long waited next chapter...=)
loved the riding scene and also the little fall one, where the Eldar bares his soul to the princeling...
they're made for each other, though the journey between the first meeting and being soul mates are quite eventful, i'd say..+)
Do keep it coming, plz!!
person JastaElf
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Esteliel, it's *good* to have you back! I hope you enjoyed your work experiences, and equally hope RL allows you more time to write now. :-)

This was a beautiful chapter--nice to see some softening on Glorfindel's part, an awareness of what a sweet lover he has, and what their relationship COULD be if Glorfindel allows it. I know there are loving d/s relationships, and that the best ones ARE in fact based on mutual respect and affection within the rules each have worked on... it can be so for these two! Doesn't have to make the sex any less hot, either... heh heh heh...

Anyway, it really is good to have you back!
person Mirasaui
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see that you are back and returning to writing, and am happy that you have started a sequel to Anestel. I like the way you pay tay the relationship between Glorfindel and Legolas. In the back of his mind, Glorfindel hopes the time will come when the Noldor and Sindar can mend their hatred. He hints at such to Legolas. Also, he feels a strong love for the prince, but his pride is such that he has trouble showing it in public. But that has started to change. Legloas is not only getting the chance to stretch his wings, but to restore his confidence and reputation as well. Glorfindel is loosening some of the ties that bind, and is also starting to treat Leglolas more like a mate than a possession. Well, somewhat--lol. Love the transitions here. Great story, look forward to future updates.

Mirasaui
person Aly
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm excited for the new update and can't wait to read more! I hope you enjoyed your time abroad. I like how Glorfindel is starting to "soften" up a bit and open up to Legolas.
person Nina
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
An update? What a good surprise! Good chapter! Please, continue it.
person daughterofthemidnightmoon
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Sqeals with happiness*

Do you know how upset i was when i found you deleated Anestel from fanfiction.net?! I seriously went through every single page of stories trying to find yours but couldn't! But now i found it again, and a sequel to boot! Yeah!! Oh, happiness abounds. Anyway, great stuff. I love how Legolas if finally starting to train as a warrior. But what will this mean? I mean, he's being trained by the enemy. Will this mean that one day he may have to face his brothers and father in battle? That would be an interesting plot bunny... Anyway, great stuff. Legolas' angst and his second-thoughts about his position in life are great. Looking forward to more angst in the future. Hurry with more!

-Daughter of the Midnight Moon
person Aly
schedule September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see a sequel. Now get to writing more of it. ;) I'm glad your continuing on with this storyline. It will be interesting to see what plot lines you hatch up for this one. Will you use Legolas' ability to somewhat communicate with his brother to get more information about male fertility? You have such a wide range of possibilities for this story, I can't wait to see what you write! Please update soon. ;)
person Oakwoods
schedule September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was just wondering what happed to this story the other day. A friend told me that you were continuing it and found this web page.
Write More please. Son! This is my favorite story about young Legolas. How is he going to respond to training? How will the other elves repsonsd to him being allowed to train?
person Stranger who can\ind ind her name
schedule August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sequel, eh? Hm, I've read your previous story Anestel (sorry if I spelled wrong) and I'm kinda unsure what to think about that (and this as well). On one hand I hate read when Legolas, who's kinda my favourite character, gets tortured in different ways, raped, beaten etc... Even if it's just fiction it squicks me. But when I started read this 'serie', I was hooked against my will! So I surrender, even if I don't like the idea, I will keep reading.
person Anita
schedule August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The sequel! I am very glad to see this and curious how Legolas' life will continue.