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for Cuil Eden

by Esteliel

person Brin
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What! What has he got for him??? Oh, you dirty bird, LOL!
Waiting and wanting more, please!
person Tinni
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what Elrond has for Legolas. Please don't put Erestor together with Elrohir, it would be cooler if Elrohir falls for a Sinda. Erestor iis sis story is just such an ass.
person Aly
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was a cruel place to leave off!! Please, with that lead in, don't let it be as long before your next update! I can't wait to find out what Elrond has for Legolas, and what the rest of the meeting will involve.
person Calenharn Elflover
schedule November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
To: a reader....

I agree with everything that you wrote, except the last part - the bit about Legolas finding a woman. lol! I personally am hoping that Legolas will start to find his spine before he becomes proficient in weapons (which has a long learning curve) - preferably to some extent once Elrond starts laying down his edicts and mandating better behavior towards Legolas (at least in public).

Please join us in the ongoing discussion and speculation over at the LoM BBS:
http://depresso-girl.com/libraryofmoria/viewtopic.php?t=30 :)
person A reader
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Although this story derives its charm exactly because Legolas is so submisive and Glorfindel dominant, I am personally beginning to feel angry at Legolas' lack of backbone. I understand that psychologically that's how humiliated victims act, but... that's not the Legolas we all know and love. I'd like Legolas to rebel at some point, to understand his individual value and rights and break free from his enslavement. To stand up to Glorfindel, to rise to his full height and say "no, I'm not your toy". I think that that kind of strength will come through his fighting lessons, he will become confident and independent. He will stop being a frightened child and become a self-assured adult. As for Glorfindel... well I'd like to see his eyes pop out from surprise at Legolas' rebellion and understand that he's not the master anymore. And... well... no offense to slash, but I'd like Legolas to know the love of a woman in the end and though that to say goodbye to his abusive past. Just my humble opinion. :) Keep writing! :)
person Tinni
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O goody new chapter so soon. Hopefully a next one will be posted as soon as well. Good story.
person kiki
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hmmm spanking.I cannot imagine how he managed to come as Glory spanked him.Hmmm,write note to myself:explore kingking more.As always great part,and thumbs up.lol
person Gilraen
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
My poor poor Legolas! He surely feels just like a toy... I hope Glorfindel will be a bit more kind and nice to him. But its all far much better then it was from the very begining! Nice chapter I hope for more soon :)
person Tinni
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please post the next chapter as soon as possible. This is such a good story.
person Anon
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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