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February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you write. Keep the chapters coming...because I can't wait for more! ~DarkDreamer
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February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story.. And I love where you are going with this. I remain a devoted fan.
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February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I love this story. I consider it my guiltiest pleasure. There's been lots of things that have happened along the way (including Anestel) that I've had to think about and reconsider, trying to see where the story is going and always, always, I've come to see your brilliance. But I want to make to a couple of observations about chapter 28.
When Celeborn is talking to Legolas, he's got the right message in that Legolas shouldn't be ashamed at how his body reacts to Glorfindel's particular brand of affection and he's also right when he tells Legolas to take pride in his role as lover and parent. After all you've already alluded that for Legolas to be ashamed of himself all through out his long life with as Glorfindel's sex slave would eventully destroy his spirit, and that having a parent damaged like that would ultimately hurt Gilrion.
But Celeborn is way off base, I think, when he puts Legolas' situation into the same context as that of the great warriors of old. Yes, it makes sense that these great elves needed to give control over to someone else occasionally and D/s sex might do that for them, but Legolas is not an elf with great resonsibilites beyond caring for his son and giving his body to Glorfindel whenever it is demanded. He's no ruler or great warrior -- and I don't mean to trivialize what this character's gone through, but that just doesn't wash for me.
Also the part about keeping these types of activities in the privacy of one's bedroom is not a luxury afforded Legolas. Everyone in Imladris (and many in Mirkwood and Lorien) knows what goes on behind their closed doors or on the balcony or in the garden. Legolas' must struggle for every shred of dignity he holds. Even though Elrond and Glorfindel have tried to keep the whispers and gossip to a minimum in recent chapters, only Legolas being allowed to become something other than Glory's toy will ever earn him the smallest hint of the type of esteem shown those great elves of Celeborn's stories.
As I waited for this chapter to be posted, I tried to imagine where you would go with this. I pictured Legolas being made to masterbate on display for Celeborn and Glorfindel. It was *hot*, but I like the direction you are taking it by setting Leggy further on the road to the self esteem he will need to survive -- even if I think Celeborn was off base. Then again, I've only been mulling this over for a couple of days not the usual couple of weeks, so I'm probably wrong. After all nothing Legolas gets in this story is ever purely sweet, there's always a tinge of bitterness for him as well. Again - a mark of your genius. Thanks for listening.
When Celeborn is talking to Legolas, he's got the right message in that Legolas shouldn't be ashamed at how his body reacts to Glorfindel's particular brand of affection and he's also right when he tells Legolas to take pride in his role as lover and parent. After all you've already alluded that for Legolas to be ashamed of himself all through out his long life with as Glorfindel's sex slave would eventully destroy his spirit, and that having a parent damaged like that would ultimately hurt Gilrion.
But Celeborn is way off base, I think, when he puts Legolas' situation into the same context as that of the great warriors of old. Yes, it makes sense that these great elves needed to give control over to someone else occasionally and D/s sex might do that for them, but Legolas is not an elf with great resonsibilites beyond caring for his son and giving his body to Glorfindel whenever it is demanded. He's no ruler or great warrior -- and I don't mean to trivialize what this character's gone through, but that just doesn't wash for me.
Also the part about keeping these types of activities in the privacy of one's bedroom is not a luxury afforded Legolas. Everyone in Imladris (and many in Mirkwood and Lorien) knows what goes on behind their closed doors or on the balcony or in the garden. Legolas' must struggle for every shred of dignity he holds. Even though Elrond and Glorfindel have tried to keep the whispers and gossip to a minimum in recent chapters, only Legolas being allowed to become something other than Glory's toy will ever earn him the smallest hint of the type of esteem shown those great elves of Celeborn's stories.
As I waited for this chapter to be posted, I tried to imagine where you would go with this. I pictured Legolas being made to masterbate on display for Celeborn and Glorfindel. It was *hot*, but I like the direction you are taking it by setting Leggy further on the road to the self esteem he will need to survive -- even if I think Celeborn was off base. Then again, I've only been mulling this over for a couple of days not the usual couple of weeks, so I'm probably wrong. After all nothing Legolas gets in this story is ever purely sweet, there's always a tinge of bitterness for him as well. Again - a mark of your genius. Thanks for listening.
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February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!!!!!! You just saved my day! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!
Gosh, I still love this story. And I really wonder what´s going on in Legolas´ mind right now. hehe ... keep on writing please! : )
Gosh, I still love this story. And I really wonder what´s going on in Legolas´ mind right now. hehe ... keep on writing please! : )
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January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Esteliel. I just wanted to say that I really am amazed by your writing. Especially the "Anestel" story. I was never a big fan of slash until I read "Anestel".
And I really hope you'll keep on working with "Cuil Eden". I'm looking forward to a new chapter! Great job! Regards/ Soda
And I really hope you'll keep on working with "Cuil Eden". I'm looking forward to a new chapter! Great job! Regards/ Soda
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January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's very good.
i will wait for 28
i will wait for 28
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December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story !!! Please, write more soon !!! I think Legolas is really starting to enjoy Glorfy's, ah, ministrations... ^^ He's such a cutie !! I wonder if he won't have another baby at some point.
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December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have reading all the history and is exelent, you place is close or had been chance,sorry a can't go there , please keep writting you are exelent.
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December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooohhhhhhh! Waiting IS torture!
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great Chap! I love what is happening. Cannot wait for your next update...