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please post another chapter

ok, I'm up to chapter nine and I think she should tell him about Lana. He needs to know about Lana.

Why am I deeply concerned about that letter? Good story...don't MAKE us wait too long, please.

Absolutely love this!

This has got to be the finest story I have ever read. I have given one review some long time ago. I have just had to start reading it again just because it's so wonderful. I am hopeing that you will get a beta to go over this story. It's too good to not be portrayed to the best that it can be. I am also impressed at the lengths of the chapters and am more than happy to wait for updates, though they don't seem to happen often enough for sure. I do hope that you get it betaed because often I am having to reread passages to try to figure out what is being said, and that really goes against the whole basis of this story. Meaning, that in this story you are very clear as to what each character is thinking and why they do what they do. Yet in this story the writing technique encombers the understanding. Thanks for the amusement.

Magnificent as usual! This story is so engaging. I began it for an obivous reason, my love of Haldir, but I am drawn more and more into the world you have woven. It is a complex and rich wonderland, with a canvas of intriguing and endearing (and infuriating!) characters. I so look forward to your updates and although they are usually long in coming, they are, without fail, worth the wait.

Keep up the fabulous work ladies!

~AliDawne

Many greetings! I just finished reading chapter 28 and loved it! It was excellent, and it balanced all of the characters and their situations very well. My two favorite moments were when Galadriel spoke with Elanor about the broth ( chuckle ) and Healea's talks with Tarwe and Lurien. Thanks again for writing such a fantatic story! Take care now! Teresa

I loved the story, but elves do not get dirty or fall in water. Still it was most enjoyable.

if i was a school teacher i would say A+

Wonderful. So. bloody. wonderful. I love the days in which I check this story and find a new chapter. It's like my life is put on pause for however long it takes me to just sit and read and relax. Thankyou for updating this story regularly. It means a lot and I can only give my thanks and appreciation for both of your wonderful workings. Thankyou