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for ELANOR'S REVENGE

by Juliediane

person not telling you
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
brill, carry on, will they ever get together?
person Emmy
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
Another truly great chapter you have got me hooked now...
I can not wait till you post more
You are very gifted writer(s)?
Take care and I hope everything goes well for you!
~Emmy
person Katherine
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yet again another enticeing chapter!! Perfect, and I like the way you introduced Healea. Continue, continue!!

--Katherine
person Mirasaui
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading this through the yahoo groups and AFF.net. Wonderful story! The meeting between Elanor and Haldir's former lover was very interesting--she seemed quite cool to Elanor. And I loved the archery lesson--lol. Look forward to the next chapters.

Mirasaui
person Lady of Legolas
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh,oh!Haldir is starting to have feelings for Elanor.Just take her fool!
person Pommekitty
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello!
I read your story until very very late last night and I'm afraid I wasn't in a state to leave a review. I feel a lot better after 10 hours of sleep and I can vaguely remember dreaming of Elanor and Haldir doing naughty things in his bed...or was it on the terrace?well , in fact I think I'm only sure about the 'naughty' part :)
More seriously, this is one of the best LOTR stories I've read and the best featuring Haldir and an OC. I was so very pleased that your chapters weren't tiny little things like we often find (ie: 1000 words), it makes the story flow better and give it a smooth continuity.
I know good writing takes time but for my sanity I need to press you for an update;) I can't wait to read the next chapter and, in the meantime, I'll have to re-read the whole thing to keep me occupied. I'll also go and check your other individual stories so i can see the differences in your writing styles.
Happy writing!
Pommekitty.
person Diana
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Elvenlover
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok that's a great chapter.All of them btw.I can't wait to read the rest.
MORE PLEASE
person Emmy
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow your truly know how to write!!
Really great read....please post more soon!!!!
~Emmy
person Teresa
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this latest chapter! It was interesting to watch Elanor learning about herself and Haldir through that conversation with Galadriel. One of my favorite parts of the chapter was the discussion of Haldir and his "needs". It seems that they have much to learn from each other.....and I'm looking forward to the next sections! Thanks for this story! Sincerely, Teresa