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You promised!

excellent chapter!!!!!

ohh the compitition didnt go as badly as i thought that it would be. ohh thank god. oh this is a great chapter by the way. the little lemon was fun too. hahhaah haldir blew. ihope to read more soon.

wow this great! on chapter 8 right now (i think i lost count i just keep pressing the ;next chapter' button without noticing) I love the fact that the chapters are nice and lobg.... gooodyyyy. The plot is amazingly imaginative, as u usually come across fics thre are all alike, this one uses a popular theme in an amazing way that is just so ... idfferent and interesting and u have really good ideas, and great dailouges. :D LOVE U:D

I have one critical comment.... you know sometimes u write about elves and forget they are elves, like when our beautiful ORC was cold, I'm pretty sure elves can't be cold. It's just stuff like that and honestly I don't mind it at all, just thought u should know:D Ok I'm off reading MORE! hehe:D Uh YEAH.... I started reading this yesterday at night at like 5 and finished at 9 o'clcock in the morning, and got some sluntiuntil 5 in the afternoon and i'm o it again!

You continue to amaze me! I loved the fact that elanor decided to go in the archery competition, and so very glad that in the end, she found thatthat Haldir was proud of her, despite that she was disqualified. And I LOVED her parting words to Haldir at the end of the chapter! Very good! I cannot wait to read more, and see what happens. It is getting that I have no fingernails left, and have to chew on something else....*laughs* Post soon!

I love this story. Please let me know when you have updated!

Another wonderful chapter! the archery scene was quite suspenseful. And what a lesson for Haldir to learn. Go Elanor! The update was well worth the wait :)
A~R

You wicked, wicked, wicked little thing! ;-) Chalk one up for Elanor, your victim is weakening ...

wow my first story on AFF an I love it. I've been reading FF and now I came here and I'm so glad it's not all you know ... smut is what i think u call it here. the plot is great and the characters are interesting, and your halrid is yummmieee... honestly it's been months since i came across a story i have not even one bad comment about..... so you shiuld be HAPPPPPYYY//// love it....off to read more.:D:D:D I'm so happy

Go Elanor!!!