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Are we going to get an update soon? PLEASE?

Lovely. It amazes me how you are able to juggle such a large cast and keep them all multi-dimensional. Do you do high-wire acts in your spare time, perhaps with flaming torches?

Elanor is a dear, and a beautiful example of how to write an OFC and not a Mary Sue. She has depth of character, flaws, strengths... well done.

More, please, and if you have a list of people you notify when a new chapter is up, please add me!

OK GIRLS WORKKKKKKKK!!!! I do realise 'real life is more important' .... but pleeeeezzzzzzz..... :(((( I'm being freaky today, but I just can't wait:(

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WOMANNNNNNNN! Ok I know I'm being a little agressive but can you balme me?????? huh????

Hey a quick question..... could you email me when you update..... :D pleaseeeeeeeeee :D faithfullrain@hotmail.com

That was _absolutely_ marvelous. I can't remember the last time I so enjoyed reading a chapter. Elanor's performance in the competition, and Haldir's reaction, were positively perfect, with a nice balance of realism and reason to hope, and I also liked seeing Healea's wisdom displayed. It makes me wonder how she would do as an archery instructor for our beloved heroine. I've found myself savoring your use of Galadriel and Celeborn as dispensers of wisdom at the appropriate time, too, as it is done with a judicious and graceful hand. I'm curious to see how Lurien plays out in all of this. He's quite an enigma, and a fascinating one. All of your characters are- they're very three dimensional, and very real to me. It's wonderful to find fanfiction written with such depth and scope.

I must state here that the scene with Elanor's birthday gift was, quite honestly, one of the most wonderful scenes of its kind I have ever read. Seeing Elanor turn the tables on Haldir was delicious enough in itself, but Haldir's reaction went straight to the heart (and a few other choice organs). It's just as well these reviews are typed, because I think I'd be speechless right now. This entire story, with its multiple pairings and interesting quandaries, is fascinating, and I enjoy seeing how you switch from thread to thread and weave them into a whole. I've come to care quite a bit about your characters and their welfare, and they seem to be in excellent hands. As, I should add, are my hopes for this story! Keep up the excellent work, and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

Q, replete with satisfaction

WOW, DAMN, SHIT, MY, AHHHHHH.....I want MORE!!!! 've bee reading this for like a week, and I finally came to an end.... DAMN IT I BEG YOU TO UPDATE SOON.

Now for the story, it's absolutely amazing. I really like your originals, they seem so real, and once again I love your ideas. Hmmm. Anything wrong? The nipple thing I guess.... somehow I just don't see men or elves being turned on by touching their nipples, I mean men as men simply don't find it hmmmm 'a turn on', it's just weird... that elves would, and that's basically all that I dislike about the fic.

There are just so many nice things I'd like to write, but somehow find it difficutl, so I'll just stick to: This is so good I would hug you to death:D cheers, and keep up and of course UPDATE!.

*clapping of hands in delight*

Oh you've done it again! Another superb chapter in a fantastic story!

Keep up the good work pretty please and write more soon please.

-Tenar

So nice to have another chapter. What a wonderful story and Elanor is such a strong character. I was surprised you didn't write anything about how "surprised" she must have been when Halldir finally climaxed. Being an innocent, she probably didn't realize how "messy" it was going to be.

Oh, if you only knew how glad I am to see another chapter up! This is by far the thoroughly best LOTR fanfic I've had the pleasure to read!

I absolutely e the thow dow development of Haldir and Elanor's relationship, her lack of knowledge about different things. And, of course, the fact that Haldir is so much wiser, yet so unprepared to deal with some of the situations he has to face!

I really hope you won't finish this story off in a hurry, but rather let it unfold slowly (although... making us wait longer than a week is torture!). It's beautiful.