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for Mary's Trip to Isengard

by aseltym

person Ellbee
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*applauds wildly* It was silly and charming and hot all at the same time. I loved Haldir's otherworldly way of going about things, and loved the messy smut with the Twins every bit as much. Enjoyed the show tremendously.
person Donna
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mary! I'm so glad you posted your fic. It is truly a hilarious expierence and you write it so well it is like we are there with you! You have a clever way of turning something that didnt sound like fun (a date with Grima) into a wonderful trip through Middle Earth. Hope you write more in the future cause I love your style!
person Julie
schedule August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Extremely clever, extremely well-written!! Your smooth, well-constructed sentences suggest the skill of a professional writer, while younguengue-in-cheek humor is appealing and amusing. In short, I loved the whole thing! I felt like I was right there in Middle Earth, experiencing it vicariously, and I sure had a good time. I sincerely hope that you will continue writing fan fiction because you have a real flare for it. Bravo!!