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for First Born

by linweseregon

person Mirasaui
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
After I read your update on "Ambush", I tried to read the last chapter here, but AFF kept timing out. Finally, I was able to catch the end of the story!

This was very sweet, and yes, I like Thranduil much better as a loving and caring Father. Too often he is portrayed as evil and cruel, and Legolas as meek and innocent. That Legolas becomes the strong and heroic Elf of the fellowship belies such a parent. In essence, I truly enjoyed this story. It was well-written and a pleasure to read.
person giggle
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just got to read this all the way through and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I do hope there are more tales of Legolas growing up in this particular family. I too enjoy L having a nice normal life occasionally. I like angst and drama also but if the nice and normal is well written it can be a joy.
I am now going to read the story about Elrond being kidnapped. I look forward to more stories from you. Thank you. giggle
person Brazgirl
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this beautiful story, it was really great and I am sorry it is over. The way you portraited Thranduil as a good father is great. I hope you write more stories about Legolas' family. I'll be back to read them! :-D
person Lidra
schedule October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Pretty damn good. There are a few minor errors here and there, but nothing too serious. E-mail is above.
person Brazgirl
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful... really sensitive. Please, write more, your story is so nice!!!
person Mirasaui
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was a sweet chapter. Your description of the birthing room was wonderful. Would have loved a room like that when I had my child! Anxious to see the rest of the story.

Mirasaui
person Breach Cannon all must die!
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is the best LOTR fic on this whole site
person Mirasaui
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story. I like how you portray Thranduil as a caring and loving husband. His and Athiel's love is tender and touching. Look forward to more. Thanks for sharing.
person Brazgirl
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was a cruel cliff! I am curious to see Thranduil's reaction to his new baby!!! Update soon =)
person Leo\'sGirl
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! THIS IS GOOD! I DON'T MIND IF THE DATES DON'T ADD UP. I WAS A BIT CONFUSED AT FIRST, BUT, HEY WHO ISN'T. I'M NOT A BIG LORD OF THE RINGS FAN. BUT I DO KNOW MY FAV. ELF. ( SEE NAME ) WELL. CONTUINE PLEAZ.