rate_review Reviews

You're actually getting flames for the treatment of the characters? That makes me lagh. What's wrong with people that they can't look at a rating and read a summary? Gods, people can be so stupid.

Anyway, I'll be looking for the next chapter

Hmm... I have to agree with some of your critics that there needs to be more to the plot. Elves are supposed to be and ideal race so obviously somethings extremely wrong with Legalos' father and siblings but I think it has to be more than just grief. I wish you would spend a little more time on developing Thanduril personality so we can get more of an insight on his state of mind. It would make the character more interesting and my help move your plot along.

Or not.

This is only a sugestion and I'll read what you write next even if you don't take this advice.

short chapter?

more!

Well done, like it.
Going to wait for the next chapter, hopefully with all the sadism in it ...

the last three chapters could have been one

This story is really good, screw all those flamers. If they don't like it they shouldn't even be here. ADULTfanfiction.net. Anyways, I hope you keep it up.

Hey!!!
Awesome chapter! I'm so glad you got it up so fast! I think that you've done an awesome job, and this chapter was written realell.ell. Now, the only problelm will be that I wt bet be able to stand it until your next chapter is up!!! So write soon!!! I love this story and I hope that the flamers (though there shouldn't be any after ALL of those WARNINGS!) don't get to you-they aren't worth it.... So yeah-write soon! Can't wait!
Cheers!
Orli's Lover

I like it's different form all those other stories around the web. keep going and forget those people that flame u they know what they are doing when they came into the site. Update soon

Wow! I loved the last paragraph! It was great. Really good to know you are back and writting. I can't wait to see the next chapter!!!