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by Cornflower

person mirasaui
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A beautifully written story of angst and betrayal.

Mirasaui
person Aggie
schedule August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh wow....that was very interesting!!! i really dunno wut to say...i'm speechless


nice job!


Aggie
person Cheysuli
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*cries* It's still being cut off! Maybe you could di it it into two chapters. I think AdultFF.Net only allows chapters to be so long.
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
lol - done!
person Cheysuli
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The beginning of a love/hate relationship. How delightful! Do I sense a sequel? *hopes*

Glad I finally got to read the rest of it. Although I'm very surprised he didn't drown himself. Does he really believe that Haldir would have eventually done the same to him? That thought might affect his relationship with his friends (not being sure if they would hurt him, too).

I invite you to join my yahoo group: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/daemel (And please post this there. The members will love it!)
person Cheysuli
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this so far but part of it was cut off. I'd love to read it.
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
- I've taken care of it! Thanks for notifying! -- The fic is complete now.

C