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September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so far and can't wait to read more of it. But I have a little problem. I can't get to pt. 7, all I get there is pt. 9.
Bye
Penncalien
Bye
Penncalien
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August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Arrgh! Dammit Glorfindel! He's just setting himself up again to get his heart broken...
And what about Erestor, huh? Just forget about him as long as he has Elrohir. Grr.
As much as I think Glorfindel/Elrohir/Elladan would be sexy as hell, Glorfindel needs to
move on...
And what about Erestor, huh? Just forget about him as long as he has Elrohir. Grr.
As much as I think Glorfindel/Elrohir/Elladan would be sexy as hell, Glorfindel needs to
move on...
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August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Why does Elrohir keep hurting Glorfindel and why does Glorfindel keep letting him?It doesn't matter if they love each other.They are sleeping with others and I think it's about time for a final decision for both their sakes.I don't want either of them hurting anymore.
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August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm!! Another *wonderful* chapter!
Hmm, I wonder what Erestor plans on doing to 'soothe'
Glorfindel? ::ponders:: Oh, I can think of a *few* things... :)
waitingwaitingwaiting for next chapter!!
Hmm, I wonder what Erestor plans on doing to 'soothe'
Glorfindel? ::ponders:: Oh, I can think of a *few* things... :)
waitingwaitingwaiting for next chapter!!
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August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes, the Elfsex is very good! I like that, isn't that really why we are all here anyway. I just finished reading chapter 4.
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I take it the events are inspired by Tyellas' Anereg concept (however that is spelled). My complaint, if you are going to write a cathartic BDSM, experience don't treat it lightly- go ALL the way. Show real gusto, if not cruelty and sadism on the part of the top and real pain, angst and emotional breakdown on the part of the bottom. And go ahead and indulge us with more viseral descriptions about the fall of the whip and the damage therein. IMO these kinds of scenes should not be used just to fit a convienent yet awkward plot turning point. They should be the very meat of the story. I think your scene, while interesting, really treats the events all too lightly and too casually. At this point in your plot, the experience shared by Glorf and Erestor should be emotionally powerful enough for both of them to effect their modivations throughout the rest of the story. But it doesn't seem convincing enough to me that it will. My request- if you feel so inclined- please go back and rethink this entire scene and really amp it up. Too much is left ambiguous. Make this scene really count. I fne Lne LOVE a good BDSM scene.
Thanks!!
SPOILER
I take it the events are inspired by Tyellas' Anereg concept (however that is spelled). My complaint, if you are going to write a cathartic BDSM, experience don't treat it lightly- go ALL the way. Show real gusto, if not cruelty and sadism on the part of the top and real pain, angst and emotional breakdown on the part of the bottom. And go ahead and indulge us with more viseral descriptions about the fall of the whip and the damage therein. IMO these kinds of scenes should not be used just to fit a convienent yet awkward plot turning point. They should be the very meat of the story. I think your scene, while interesting, really treats the events all too lightly and too casually. At this point in your plot, the experience shared by Glorf and Erestor should be emotionally powerful enough for both of them to effect their modivations throughout the rest of the story. But it doesn't seem convincing enough to me that it will. My request- if you feel so inclined- please go back and rethink this entire scene and really amp it up. Too much is left ambiguous. Make this scene really count. I fne Lne LOVE a good BDSM scene.
Thanks!!
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August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this and I liked it.More please!!!
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August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL! EEEH! I LOVELOVELOVE THIS FIC!!!
The twins share such a beautiful relationship and I think you
captured their need for one another perfectly!
Sex is good. Elfsex is very, very good. Rrrroww!
I love how the elves mixed and matched a bit and
finally ended up with the right one. These pairings are my
absolute favorite and I believe they work wonderfully.
Twins virgins, very savvy, of course the idea of Elladan and Elrohir
losing their innocence to each other is equally great, I loved
having Legolas thrown into the mix.
Though, I do agree with RyousMistress265;
the first penetration should have been more painful,
but, I've moved on and have no other complaints ^_^
I'm *very* eagerly waiting for the next chapter!
The twins share such a beautiful relationship and I think you
captured their need for one another perfectly!
Sex is good. Elfsex is very, very good. Rrrroww!
I love how the elves mixed and matched a bit and
finally ended up with the right one. These pairings are my
absolute favorite and I believe they work wonderfully.
Twins virgins, very savvy, of course the idea of Elladan and Elrohir
losing their innocence to each other is equally great, I loved
having Legolas thrown into the mix.
Though, I do agree with RyousMistress265;
the first penetration should have been more painful,
but, I've moved on and have no other complaints ^_^
I'm *very* eagerly waiting for the next chapter!
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July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Holy mother, my innocent mind! I love the idea that Elladan and Elrohir need guidence... :D Argh! This is so well.written and mind-blowing, I would love to se more! And I think I'll go and take a cold shower now.
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July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damnnnnnnnn that was sexy! Whew! I love it! I love the pairings thery are two of my fav! Can't wait to see if you continue on with this!!! I can only say one thing over and over. I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it! Nice, hot, sexy, and oh so good. Thanks! ;)