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for Deeper Waters

by capella

person Anon
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM

Very well written. As good as any professionally written story I've ever read. I only hope it will be a happy ending for Imrahil and that I don't end up crying by the conclusion. Keep it up.
person Nina
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was not good, I'd like see them together again.
person Nina
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I hope they can be together, they seem to care for each other.
person Nina
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please continue it, I want to see Legolas/Imrahil.
person Vermillion
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear heavens, this chapter was terrifyy goy good!! Your descriptions are so vivid and vibrant. I think I'm going to pass out from hyperventilating. I get all tingly just thinking about that wicked Elf. This has got to be one of the most sensual and erotic chapters I've ever read. Thank you.
person l
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I really love this pairing and this universe. Wish-list, I want Legolas to love Imrahil and have Aragorn be all angsty and regretful. You know, I don't think I have these kind of issues in my life, but I sure feel them for Legolas in your series. Anyway, great characterizations and storyline. I want more!
person Gabby
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful piece of fiction from you that I am enjoying immensely! My question however, is will Legolas ever be able to love Imrahil as much as he loves Legolas considering that Legolas has bonded himself to Aragorn? I am very much hopingt tht the bond will be broken but I have a feeling it will be impossible and thus the future source of sorrow and angst. I am looking forward to seeing how this story turns out.

And yes your writing is quite excellent. Your readers thank you for taking the time to present it with perfect spelling, grammar and punctuation- it really makes a difference.
person Vermillion
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!! You're continuing with Legolas and Imrahil! Heledir is such an intriguing character and I'm looking forward to seeing more through his eyes. Thank you for your meticulous writing. I can thoroughly enjoy your story WITHOUT the distraction of bad grammar, misspelled words and names, and other annoying mistakes. I like this AU you've created yet it still falls within the realm of canon. Can't wait for more.
person Nina
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! Please, continue it.
person u
schedule July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this universe you've created and find even your original characters interesting and, where I usually hate them having a large role, I am enjoying knowing more about them as their viewpoint adds a wonderful foil to the main characters (here, L/I). I would like to see more of the angst between L/I and L/A, just 'cause I'm that way, but of course, I also want a happy ending for dear Legolas (sap that I am). Anyway, your plot is original and your story well-written. I hope and beg for more.