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I can't believe you ending chapter 9 like that! Tease! How could you drop it like that? You MUST finish that scene! Please...

Addendum to my earlier review:
By the way, the person who complained that the end of chapter 9 was offensive is a total dope. I thought it was way hot! What the hell is she (trust me, it has to be a she) doing on an adultfanfiction site if she's so prudish? You're characterization of Faramir was spot on. Every red-blooded male would have done the same. I was just waiting for him to ask the ten million dollar question -- i.e. "Can I watch?"! I'm not into the guy/guy stuff. I clicked on your story because you had "HET" in the summary (along with male/male or "slash" or whatever) and I basically skimmed the story and skipped whatever wasn't my thing. But chapter 9 was definitely my thing, which is why I'm still pissed that you just dropped it right when it was heating up! AAARRGH! You can still always write a little epilogue or something... *hint, hint*...

I just thought I had to comment on this one little line before I moved on:

“Aye, in your mouth first,” said Legolas.

Wow...I mean, seriously wow. That was like so hot that I was all like "Ooooh!" So very hot...

Okay! I'm done! On with the rest of the story! ^_^ (I'm such a perv...)

I know you just finished this story, but I want more in this universe! This was great work and I love how you portray the characters. The way Imrahil and Aragorn talked on one level, with the meaning on a whole different one, was fabulous and dead on the mark. I love these characters and want to see of their "lives", especially how Legolas and Imrahil's relationship is developing. I hope you're planning more and am very eager to read it!

Hi. This is the last chapter of this fiction but not the last chapter of this series(at least I hope so) because there are still many questions without answers. I loved the love scnes between legolas/Imrahil, they were really hot. I wonder what Elrond will say about legolas situation(two loves). I really hope you will continue it, if yon'on't let me tell you that you really did a wonderful job with those fictions. Congratulations!!!

Just one word. Incomparable. I eagerly look forward to the final chapter and how you will resolve the tricky matter of that bond. Because it hardly seems fair for Imrahil to continue being troubled by something he had no part in no matter if he is willing to endure the consequences. And as for Legolas--eternity is simply too long a time to carry such a burden.

Hi. I loved the talk between Legolas/Imrahil, there was some tension, but also love and understanding. I really didn't understand the logic behind Aragorn's plan to Help Rosalind and Imrahil's son. Why d hed her brother see her place in Aragorn's Court more advantageous than to marry a prince's son? And I'm curious does Rosalind's brother know about her sordid affair with Eowyn? And Eomer does he know also? And if he knows, what was his reaction towards his "faithful and loyal" sister?

That was a GREAT chapter. Lots of lovely Aragorn-angst and it was satistying, yet heart-wrenching to see the love and want still strongly there between Aragorn and Legolas. *Sigh* I just love this whole series. Your OC are also very real with their own strong voices and stories, though I am still overly partial to the Aragorn-Legolas-Imrahil triangle. Good work and I just want more, more, more!

Very touching chapter! At the end Aragorn could show that he is indeed a nice, noble and generous man. It was not easy for him to see one of his loves( the greater one) finds happiness with another man, he was hurt, he was jelous but he knew that to deny this to Legolas would mean to condemn him to many lonely years(I don't think that legolas would leave Imrahil even if Aragorn asked this of him, but it would be much more difficult to him to find peace knowing that Aragorn wouldn't understand nor forgive him for this). And about Imrahil's son I really hope that he can win this battle against his vice, it won't be easy but I like the thought of his victory over it( although it is be a battle that he must fight every day os lis life). Bye.

Good chapter! I'm glad for Helendir, he seemed so lonely to me, I hope he can enjoy himself with her. And they are not cheating on anyone.