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My dear friend,

this is amazing!!! Truly amazing! I love your story more and more with every chapter. The plot is great! I can't wait to read what will happen next!!!
Oh, I wanted to mention that I absolutely loved Isil-Gar and Vilmaril, they are very intriguing. I hope they will pop up in your future chapters every now and then! These two (as well as Garand and Rymir) are totally adorable original characters you can be very proud of! Well, Rymir isn't really adorable, but you know what I mean. :-)

Keep up the great work!
Yours
N.

WOW! I have a thousand different scenarios going through my head as to w dir direction you will take this story. Chapter 5 was very exciting, though short. :):) Keep going, you're doing great.
Take Care,
Teri

Hi,

More? Please? Whatl hal happen to Rymir? Why did he do it? Thranduil'll be furious... Please, more!

BYe,
-K-

Glad there was a witness to Rymir's evil deed that night. Waiting with eager anticipation for Rymir's next evil move and to see what Garand is planning on doing.

I just read Chapter 3. Way to go! The unconditional love between Thranduil and Garand is exquisite. This character you have created, Rymir, gives me the creeps. You did very well in your creation of his depth of evil. I am very much on e sca scared to death of what he is planning to do to Garand. Keep going. You're doing great.
Take Care,
Teri

Hi,

Go Garand go! Thranduil is so beautiful..and lovely.. *drool*
I love our heros :) Update please!

Bye,
-Kira-

Interesting new character. Total sleaze bucket - and still has the nerve to try his moves on Garand despite everything. (Ya gotta admit...he's got serious nerve!) I'm glad Garand put him in his place...hopefully he made himself crystal clear. (Like that'll make a difference with Rymir!)

For some reason while reading this chapter, I kept imaging Prof. Snape from Harry Potter as Rymir! Yeah - odd, I know. My strange imagination! (Got nothing against Snape...I rather like the character in fa:) :)

Good new chapter! (Love Thranduil and Garand - they feel wonderful together.) Starting to feel a little of the mystical, criminal element at work already...or maybe it's just Rymir being his natural "slithery" self!

C-ya!

Hi,
Will you continue? Do it as soon as possible..PLease! (And don't let us down, I wanna read about the ravishing of the beautiful golden King :) )
Bye~
-Kira-

Great start for your sequel!!! Bravo! :-)
I love the relationship between Thranduil and Garand, it's so tender and sweet. And I'm intrigued by your plot. Please continue, I want to read more!

Lots of love from
Nyssa

A good mysterious start to the story, and an ending that makes you want more, hope this one is as good as your last Fan Fic, Solice, keep up the good work Jilly.