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for Dark Council- *added Epilogue*

by jilly

person Twilight
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good epilogue - I was surprised about Thranduil turning over the throne to Legolas, but nice turn of events. Legolas will make a terrific King, just like his Adar.

Thought Thranduil was bonded to his wife and that's why Garand seemed to feel he would only have Thranduil for himself here in Middle Earth if both stayed. Happy to read that both Garand and Thranduil along with his two loyal guards would get bonded.

Thanks for an interesting story with mystery, villainy, heroics, of of course, love.
person Mirasaui
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story, and couldn't have had a better ending. So glad you shared it with us.
person Mirasaui
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, Rymir just doesn't give up! I thought Thranduil and his guards finally had the rogue under control, and now a knife appears, and aargh--a cliffhanger! Thisa woa wonderful series. So glad to see Thranduil publicly declare his love for Garand, for the Elf has been so loyal and dedicated to his Lord. Look forward to the next chapter(s).

Mirasaui
person Twilight
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
How fortunate for Thranduil to have the others as witnesses to Rymir's true intentions in his own words.

Rymir is tricky and clever to the end with a hidden blade. Interested to see if he will make a last ditch escape effort or to attack Garaith ith it.
person Mirasaui
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Took me by surprise on this one! Excellent chapter.
person Mirasaui
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I knew something was amiss when Garand read the note. Rymir is pure evil! The detail you put into the background and your character descriptions make this story a delight to read. Look forward to each and every update!

Mirasaui
person Nyssa
schedule September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GO, LEGOLAS!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-)
That was GREAT! I love how you write our favourite Prince! He totally rocks!

I'm eager to read more!!!
Love,
N.
person Twilight
schedule September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Really nice confrontation and handling of the council members who were opposed to his father by Las. as.
person Mirasaui
schedule September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very well-written with a good flow and lots of detail. Love the mystery, and your character Garand! Have been reading since the beginning, sorry I am just now leaving feedback. Great Story.

Mirasaui
person Teri
schedule September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I love the way Legolas handled the Council and I love the way you pulled it together. Buuuuuuutttt, it was too short. I am dying for more. I love this whole story and I can't get enough.
Take care,
Teri